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Well, it seems I have been quite inspired for this week Thursday Prompt. Anyway, I don't really know if it really worth to be read as I'm a bit mixed about it but well, I still give it a try as it seems that artists are never fully satisfied with their work. Every critiques and opinions are welcome. It may contain some bad English in it, I apologise in advance about that.
It seems like I've *again* delayed other stories I've been writing for this one...
Ps: For those who may have read it, sorry for the bad pun, I really suck at titles...
It seems like I've *again* delayed other stories I've been writing for this one...
Ps: For those who may have read it, sorry for the bad pun, I really suck at titles...
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Thank you, I really appreciate that. And yes, I tried to give some little hints about his mental state, though, I'm still wondering how one would react in such situation.
As long as there would be subjects, irony will continue to exist, for the worse and the best.
As long as there would be subjects, irony will continue to exist, for the worse and the best.
It indeed could have saved him from being the last subject of irony. But well, he certainely didn't now the very accurate description of the Army Defenders: "Runs badly, brakes badly, noisy and stinks of fuel".
Thanks B, I'm glad you liked it! And I'm also glad that you appreciate story-telling style, I must say I did try something new with it so I didn't really knew if it would please but well, seems it doesn't displease. :)
The theme of the Thursday Prompt which inspired this one was 'ruins' and it was recommended to make it happens in a post-apocalytic setting.
Thanks B, I'm glad you liked it! And I'm also glad that you appreciate story-telling style, I must say I did try something new with it so I didn't really knew if it would please but well, seems it doesn't displease. :)
The theme of the Thursday Prompt which inspired this one was 'ruins' and it was recommended to make it happens in a post-apocalytic setting.
Probably the file format that isn't accepted by nowadays softwares (I'm still using Microsoft Word 2003 :P )...
Well, I don't know if you have it too but there's (though I just noticed it after I posted this story) an option to read it with Google Doc, here's the link if ever you don't have it, it *should* work in theory: https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=.....u_watchout.doc
Otherwise, if it really doesn't want to work, I've uploaded it as an .ODT file on Google Drive.
And if ever it still not work, I will manage to get the pages as images, I really would like as much as possible to send you a .txt file on which all the page layout would be nonexistant.
So, have a good read!
Well, I don't know if you have it too but there's (though I just noticed it after I posted this story) an option to read it with Google Doc, here's the link if ever you don't have it, it *should* work in theory: https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=.....u_watchout.doc
Otherwise, if it really doesn't want to work, I've uploaded it as an .ODT file on Google Drive.
And if ever it still not work, I will manage to get the pages as images, I really would like as much as possible to send you a .txt file on which all the page layout would be nonexistant.
So, have a good read!
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