This is beautiful Konner. I really love the second stanza, it's really great. And the final stanza is really impacting. This is a very raw, emotional poem. Great job <33
Thanks Jas. I've had a lot on my mind lately, and this was the result of sitting down to put it all on paper. It's not overly poetic, and it needs some touch up, but I'm leaving it as is. I'll fix the original for myself though eventually.
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