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So I thought to myself; "Hey, let's try a comic book page! How hard can it be?" Guh, famous last words. I'm NOT a comic-er, nor am I an artist with a decent work flow. I floundered even where to begin, and bit off WAYYY more than I could chew, and that was even with all the help with how to layout ( to industry printing specs even!) , organize page flow, and tips on dialogue from 
dusk who IS a comic-er and works damn fast. BTW thx Dusky XD but I digress.
There may be more pages somewhere down the road, there may NOT be. But check this out for now and enjoy! More arts soon XD
dusk who IS a comic-er and works damn fast. BTW thx Dusky XD but I digress. There may be more pages somewhere down the road, there may NOT be. But check this out for now and enjoy! More arts soon XD
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Wolf
Size 1006 x 1280px
File Size 241.6 kB
Nice work, well executed. Be careful of hanging participles like that "but..." in the upper portion. This works as a trailed off thought but in this case, it's confusing as "Oracle Biomedics" seems to be the continuation and you have to read it a couple times to understand that it's not. Economy of words, cut out everything that is unnecessary. Practice that. Other than that this is great work! Well done.
I'm continually impressed by how much you're able to convey in a limited space. What I love most about this comic page is that you get the definite feeling like there is so much more here than you are seeing. It gives me questions and as a writer, that's a good thing. ;)
The rain, the way his thoughts are wandering, definitely feels appropriate to the mood of the weather. Masterfully done.
I agree with dusk, the but... really feels like it should flow into the next thought, like he's left something unsaid but the next thing lets you figure out what it was.
The rain, the way his thoughts are wandering, definitely feels appropriate to the mood of the weather. Masterfully done.
I agree with dusk, the but... really feels like it should flow into the next thought, like he's left something unsaid but the next thing lets you figure out what it was.
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