
character from my project -burdock-
Merlin,Veerr, John
I collected a video of how I drew:
https://youtu.be/dLCKsYcev9c ^^
in Russia there is still little snow at the moment, but I was pleased to share a warm mood
I often did these guys in the summer, in the autumn, but in the winter there was never ^^
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Thanks for translate my idea by vagabondbastard , El-Ricado and Goggle translate ^^
and thanks for helping to correct the mistakes of the text to all the attentive( ComradeSch , Hy_TheGreyKatt LunaWolf40k , special thanks to Lingrimm (за то что пробегал мимо и так же нашел время поправить перевод >w< )
Merlin,Veerr, John
I collected a video of how I drew:
https://youtu.be/dLCKsYcev9c ^^
in Russia there is still little snow at the moment, but I was pleased to share a warm mood
I often did these guys in the summer, in the autumn, but in the winter there was never ^^
____
Thanks for translate my idea by vagabondbastard , El-Ricado and Goggle translate ^^
and thanks for helping to correct the mistakes of the text to all the attentive( ComradeSch , Hy_TheGreyKatt LunaWolf40k , special thanks to Lingrimm (за то что пробегал мимо и так же нашел время поправить перевод >w< )
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Some corrections from a native English speaker: "Busstops" is two words, "bus stops". In addition, "Besides, what do you worry about" should be "Besides, what are you worried about" in this context and "snow is really suits you" should be "Snow really suits you".
Other than that, nicely done! And Google Translate can be a real pain sometimes.
Other than that, nicely done! And Google Translate can be a real pain sometimes.
The artwork is very pretty but the translation is rather dodgy.
The line: Next bus only in a hour! Does the opposite of what you want. How its written make it sound like hes happy the next buss is there in such a "short" time.
The line should be more like this: An hour til the next bus!
"Show you a real world" would be: Show you the real world.
The line: Next bus only in a hour! Does the opposite of what you want. How its written make it sound like hes happy the next buss is there in such a "short" time.
The line should be more like this: An hour til the next bus!
"Show you a real world" would be: Show you the real world.
Another great work this time more focused in the characters and their expressions. I will not get tired of saying how handsome they are, but for me Veerr is the most attractive
About the dialogue i suppose Veerr is implying that Merlin pass too much time with the muzzle stuck on the mobile's screen or his computer one (maybe both), or that is hard to take him out of house. But John's comment its simply lovely and i surprise that Merlin didnt blush with it, but maybe he is only shy with Veerr (the other twin).
This piece is a good way to welcome the cold weather. About the comic, im really looking forward to seeing it.
About the dialogue i suppose Veerr is implying that Merlin pass too much time with the muzzle stuck on the mobile's screen or his computer one (maybe both), or that is hard to take him out of house. But John's comment its simply lovely and i surprise that Merlin didnt blush with it, but maybe he is only shy with Veerr (the other twin).
This piece is a good way to welcome the cold weather. About the comic, im really looking forward to seeing it.
I like to take my time to appreciate good and beautiful work, even sometimes to wonder or guess about the things (to say it in some way) on it, and considering the effort and heart you are putting on it, its all the more enjoyable for me. Besides since i was following Burdock from the beginning, its only natural for me to pay attention to the details and make some connections between all what you've done in Burdock so far, especially the characters.
"Snow really suits you. You look like a starry sky."
What an elegant and lovely thing to say! I doubt that John's intentions are romantic, but his tender reassurance is simultaneously poetic, teasing, and loving. Hope Merlin wasn't so distracted he missed his friend's compliment.
Winter's a way off yet, but your picture reminds me of many moments in my own life waiting with a friend or two for a train, a bus, or a ride. I've come to delight in these characters...and your incredible draftsmanship and the emotional depth an versatility of your art.
What an elegant and lovely thing to say! I doubt that John's intentions are romantic, but his tender reassurance is simultaneously poetic, teasing, and loving. Hope Merlin wasn't so distracted he missed his friend's compliment.
Winter's a way off yet, but your picture reminds me of many moments in my own life waiting with a friend or two for a train, a bus, or a ride. I've come to delight in these characters...and your incredible draftsmanship and the emotional depth an versatility of your art.
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