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montex
Still learning about color and light and trying to "play" with it. What makes me very unconfident and nervous but hope will give some results in the future
★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ I'm taking commissions ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
And any critics are welcome.
Suggestions and all your thoughts
Even if I won't respond ))
Your silence doesn't help me improve my art :P

Still learning about color and light and trying to "play" with it. What makes me very unconfident and nervous but hope will give some results in the future
★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ I'm taking commissions ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ ★
And any critics are welcome.
Suggestions and all your thoughts
Even if I won't respond ))
Your silence doesn't help me improve my art :P
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 855 x 1280px
File Size 709 kB
You want critiques.
The only thing that looks off to me, is the way his arm is around their waist.
It seems as if the left yeen is super thin, and his arm is not in a natural postion.
I would probably adjust the left yeen to be further back a bit and adjust the angle of his arm. Maybe even tilt his shoulder back with the arm.
Other than that everything is heckin fantastic. Just that one anatomy issue.
The only thing that looks off to me, is the way his arm is around their waist.
It seems as if the left yeen is super thin, and his arm is not in a natural postion.
I would probably adjust the left yeen to be further back a bit and adjust the angle of his arm. Maybe even tilt his shoulder back with the arm.
Other than that everything is heckin fantastic. Just that one anatomy issue.
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