Didn't turn out like it was intended to but i still think its ok. sounds more like the beginning of a short-story
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 459 B
you're just like a friend of mine, she lacks self esteem. if people have bad things to say don't listen, or learn from them if you can. but if you don't believe in yourself who will?
as guitar hero once put it, "your mom does not count as a fan!" i think your stuff is great
as guitar hero once put it, "your mom does not count as a fan!" i think your stuff is great
quite a few people think my work is great. i dont lack self esteem i just downplay my work so that way if it isn't great i'm not suprised in the least. i get enough negative comments to have learned a couple lifetimes of lessons and i'm pretty good at ignoring the comments and the lessons. but, thnx for the compliment
no prob bout the compliment, but "i just downplay my work so that way if it isn't great i'm not suprised in the least" i dont understand this at all....you're posing as a person with low self esteem when you really don't? so what do you do when the poem is good? (which they all are really)
"posing as a person with low self esteem when you really dont" um, yes... i geuss that would be right. What do i do when the poem is good? i geuss i just accept that i dished out a good piece of poetry and continue my work. I'm not sure how to explain it cuz no one has ever asked
for extenuatingly annoying reasons my summer was about 5 or 6 weeks. yah it sux but there is a rainbow at the end of this, my sister's friend sold me his brand new laptop for $350, but it has to ship here from florida so :\
u in college? or teh work world? or parent's basement?
u in college? or teh work world? or parent's basement?
that's cool, so should we expect moar digital artz from you? well apparantly i have to go to bed (translation turn computer off and watch vids on ipod for next 3 hours, or till battery dies....) so peace out, and uhh sorry for fillin up ur space, i believe it will be 34 total posts or something or other. and cheer up, ur poems dont suck, so expect more from urself.....
sure.... k, just a sec. i need to either get the lyrics pulled up or get the song going....
"Tonight I take a stroll
through the seldom traveled streets
but i feel there's someone following me..." from my little black cat basically centers more on the person walking in the dark then...
"I am a man who walks alone
And when Im walking a dark road
At night or strolling through the park" from Fear of the dark
also...
"I have a constant fear that someones always near"
and
"I have a phobia that someones allways there"
center more on the person than...
"but i feel there's someone following me...
someone or something"
and
"I look back and see only a shadow" wich focuses more on the fear/uneasiness
"Tonight I take a stroll
through the seldom traveled streets
but i feel there's someone following me..." from my little black cat basically centers more on the person walking in the dark then...
"I am a man who walks alone
And when Im walking a dark road
At night or strolling through the park" from Fear of the dark
also...
"I have a constant fear that someones always near"
and
"I have a phobia that someones allways there"
center more on the person than...
"but i feel there's someone following me...
someone or something"
and
"I look back and see only a shadow" wich focuses more on the fear/uneasiness
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