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P.D Es mi primera historia en tercera persona, y me disculpo de ante mano de los errores ortográficos de la versión en ingles
P.S It is my first story in the third person, and I apologize in advance for the orthographic errors of the English version
Chapter I
Marcus felt at peace for the first time in more than two weeks, with his belly full and far from what I once called "comrades", Marcus finally gave himself the luxury of lying down and taking a nap while two of the three rabbits today they were digesting in his belly. He patted her belly and let out a burp of satisfaction, settled into a tree and closed his eyes.
While Marcus was sleeping, a sound of breaking branches made him wake up quickly, he tried to be on guard but his stomach was still very swollen, which made him lose time. Marcus looked around, only seeing his bonfire half consumed and the last rabbit in rod cooking slowly in the few fathoms that were left, he knew that the sound came from very close since his ear was very fine and he could distinguish when he was near and when no, I could also know if it was some prey or some hunter, this helped him a lot, since with that ability, he could escape quickly if he felt that some threat was close (which in those days, had been almost daily). The sound I heard was from someone approaching, I notice that they were not their pursuers but that did not make him lower his guard, he moved a bit away from the light to hide from whoever was approaching, he looked at the place where he was coming from. sound, saw as some branches began to move by the one that approached, prepared to jump but when seeing the creature that appeared in his small camp, it was frozen and confused.
What appeared was a human, or at least he believed that he had not seen many and the few he saw were very different from this one. He looked very haggard, you could see that he had lost a lot of weight in a short time since he himself had looked like that, he and his clothes, a t-shirt and jeans, were dirty to the point that they looked like one, it also seemed that his head had become a nest of birds and his hair was messy and full of branches and leaves, even the eyes were out of focus, as if they had not seen the light in a long time or had gone crazy. He walked with great difficulty, shuffled his feet and did not seem to mind making noise or maybe he was not listening.
Marcus, from the shadows, saw that the human was going to his burned bonfire, kneeling and bringing his hands to warm, Marcus sniffed and detected that the scent corresponded to a human but it seemed that was a little hidden by a stranger aroma that I could not identify but that caused some disgust. Marcus was about to leave, when stomach gurgles from digestion and the little human looked at where he was and opened his eyes in amazement. Watching that reaction, Marcus moved as fast as he could where the human was and covered his mouth to keep him from screaming. He could feel the sound trying to get out, but he put more pressure to silence him completely.
-Shhhh shut up and calm down, if you scream you will make everyone know where you are and they will come for you.- Marcus said, watching as the human's eyes opened wider but he felt as little by little he stopped shouting.
He stood for a moment with his paw in the human's mouth and when he felt that he was no longer trying to scream, he pulled away from him. They were face to face and Marcus as the human began to slide his eyes all over his body, he wondered how the human would look at him, an anthropomorphic wolf, a fursona, with brown hair, of 1.88m and with a large protuberance in his belly. The human was still kneeling by the fire, he seemed calmer although in his eyes there was still terror and something of astonishment, which caused Marcus to blush.
-Well now tell me, who the hell are you and why did you decide to interrupt my first good sleep? Give me a good reason or consider yourself dead. "Marcus said in his best threatening voice.
The human left a bit of his trance and I give him an apologetic look -P ... sorry- said stammering, his voice was muffled and scratchy, it seemed that the human had not taken water in days. -Is that…. The aroma of the meat ... it was so delicious that I could not resist ... I have not eaten for days and recently I ran out of water ... I saw the light of this fire and as I did not see anyone I thought they had abandoned it, no ... I did not know that he still had an owner.
For a moment, Marcus became very sensitive about what he had just heard, since he himself had suffered that during the first days he started to flee, but when he remembered the fright that caused him and that made him lose sleep, he took those feelings
"Look," Marcus said. "I understand what's happening to you, but you've ruined my night, so I think you've killed my good heart a little apart from my dream, so get out of here or I'll get rid of you." He grunted and showed his sharp teeth.
At first he believed that the human would obey him without hesitation and would run away as fast as he could. Marcus did not expect the human to give him a smile with his dry lips and say, "If you wanted to getting rid of me, I would have done it at the moment I was about to scream instead of covering my mouth - without stopping smiling, he got up and approached Marcus, causing the wolf to blush and give him a look of absolute Disbelief.-If I did not do it, it was because I did not feel like doing it, but it seems that you are accumulating reasons to change your mind. The human remained a few steps away from Marcus. -Please- he said in a pleading voice. -I only ask for a little shelter, food and water for one night. Tomorrow I will continue my path and I will not bother you anymore. I could even pay him. "Saying this, the human began to check his pockets for something valuable." Look, I do not care, I do not think you have anything I want anyway, so long. "The huge wolf pointed out the bushes where the stranger had appeared. The human did not seem to have listened to him or only to deaf ears since he started to take peculiar things out of his pockets: I take out a huge dried cranberry seed, a pair of dice, the sheath of a dagger, a glass bottle, an old compass and finally a bag full of copper coins. -Look! Here I have 15 copper coins, could you accept them in exchange for what I asked for? Or even, take anything you like, but please, help me. "The human spoke in such a sad and desperate voice, that he touched the sensitive fiber of Marcus again. I sigh and take the small bag with coins. -Well, okay, I accept them. But they are not enough for everything you want- "Take what you wish!" The stranger said in a hopeful voice. - What you think is worth what I asked! - Marcus saw the change that the news generated in the human, seemed willing to jump off a precipice in order to have a little water, sigh and made a look in the motley collection. I automatically discard the dice and the empty bottle, I take the cranberry seed (it was valuable if you found the ideal buyer) and I look more closely at the compass. It was as dirty as its owner, but when removing the dirt from the surroundings, he realized that it was gold, something like that would be worth much in any market, while examining it, he noticed something that might detract from the object, a stain Brown covered part of the cover, covering the letters of North and East, when trying to remove it she realized that she was very attached. -I'm sorry- the human said when he saw that Marcus was very focused on the stain - why do you apologize ?. Marcus asked without taking his eyes off the compass. - is that, that stain that you are examining was my fault, since it is my blood- - Your blood? - Yes - and why did not you wash it in time? - They were chasing me, notice very late the cut that I had, besides that for days I can not find any stream or river where I could clean it - Well, "said Marcus, thinking of someone who could remove the stain and leave it as new. - Because of this stain, I will have to devalue your compass- I look at the reaction of the human, who seemed about to scream, Marcus could only laugh. -Don't worry, it's still worth enough to give you food, water and a place to sleep- At the end of the sentence, he felt some skinny arms surrounding him and looking down he saw that the human was embracing him -Thank you, thank you very much, You saved me, it's very good, Thanks. Thank you. Thanks! - -Wow, calm- Marcus said using his other leg to move the excited human, who now had a big smile on his face, which made him look less emaciated. -I'm sorry, but you stink and my nose can not stand such a smell so close- -Yes, I understand, thank you very much anyway- said the human sitting again next to the little fire that was left. -That's better, now, take a little water .- he passed his plastic bottle to the human, this seemed to offer him the best gift in the world. -Don't drink fast or you'll do more harm than good.- Marcus watched as the human drank small trickles of water, slowly quenching his thirst. When I was satisfied I returned his canteen, cleared his throat and said. "Thank you very much, I think a little more and I'm dying of dehydration" he smiled and Marcus could not help but smile, the human's voice was more pleasant now that it was wet again. "Well, for now we will leave the food aside, it is not yet list and for what it is, humans do not eat raw things, or am I wrong? - -No, do not make mistakes.- the human said, directing a melancholy look at the council.- -Well, it's late, there's still time to sleep.- Marcus went back to his tree and settled back, saw that the human was settling near the bonfire and seemed to prepare to sleep, still had his eyes on the rabbit. -Don't worry, tomorrow you can try it, for now rest.- -You're right.- Marcus saw how the human was slowly closing his eyes, he again felt the fatigue that caused the digestion of the other two rabbits, he was He was about to close his eyes when he remembered something. -By the way, my name is Marcus, and you? - He thought that the human was already asleep and therefore he did not hear it, Marcus closed his eyes again, and when he felt that he was entering his sweet dreams, a voice, pleasant and that he woke up a certain affection, whispered to him. "My name is Richard, nice to meet you.
P.D Es mi primera historia en tercera persona, y me disculpo de ante mano de los errores ortográficos de la versión en ingles
P.S It is my first story in the third person, and I apologize in advance for the orthographic errors of the English version
Chapter I
Marcus felt at peace for the first time in more than two weeks, with his belly full and far from what I once called "comrades", Marcus finally gave himself the luxury of lying down and taking a nap while two of the three rabbits today they were digesting in his belly. He patted her belly and let out a burp of satisfaction, settled into a tree and closed his eyes.
While Marcus was sleeping, a sound of breaking branches made him wake up quickly, he tried to be on guard but his stomach was still very swollen, which made him lose time. Marcus looked around, only seeing his bonfire half consumed and the last rabbit in rod cooking slowly in the few fathoms that were left, he knew that the sound came from very close since his ear was very fine and he could distinguish when he was near and when no, I could also know if it was some prey or some hunter, this helped him a lot, since with that ability, he could escape quickly if he felt that some threat was close (which in those days, had been almost daily). The sound I heard was from someone approaching, I notice that they were not their pursuers but that did not make him lower his guard, he moved a bit away from the light to hide from whoever was approaching, he looked at the place where he was coming from. sound, saw as some branches began to move by the one that approached, prepared to jump but when seeing the creature that appeared in his small camp, it was frozen and confused.
What appeared was a human, or at least he believed that he had not seen many and the few he saw were very different from this one. He looked very haggard, you could see that he had lost a lot of weight in a short time since he himself had looked like that, he and his clothes, a t-shirt and jeans, were dirty to the point that they looked like one, it also seemed that his head had become a nest of birds and his hair was messy and full of branches and leaves, even the eyes were out of focus, as if they had not seen the light in a long time or had gone crazy. He walked with great difficulty, shuffled his feet and did not seem to mind making noise or maybe he was not listening.
Marcus, from the shadows, saw that the human was going to his burned bonfire, kneeling and bringing his hands to warm, Marcus sniffed and detected that the scent corresponded to a human but it seemed that was a little hidden by a stranger aroma that I could not identify but that caused some disgust. Marcus was about to leave, when stomach gurgles from digestion and the little human looked at where he was and opened his eyes in amazement. Watching that reaction, Marcus moved as fast as he could where the human was and covered his mouth to keep him from screaming. He could feel the sound trying to get out, but he put more pressure to silence him completely.
-Shhhh shut up and calm down, if you scream you will make everyone know where you are and they will come for you.- Marcus said, watching as the human's eyes opened wider but he felt as little by little he stopped shouting.
He stood for a moment with his paw in the human's mouth and when he felt that he was no longer trying to scream, he pulled away from him. They were face to face and Marcus as the human began to slide his eyes all over his body, he wondered how the human would look at him, an anthropomorphic wolf, a fursona, with brown hair, of 1.88m and with a large protuberance in his belly. The human was still kneeling by the fire, he seemed calmer although in his eyes there was still terror and something of astonishment, which caused Marcus to blush.
-Well now tell me, who the hell are you and why did you decide to interrupt my first good sleep? Give me a good reason or consider yourself dead. "Marcus said in his best threatening voice.
The human left a bit of his trance and I give him an apologetic look -P ... sorry- said stammering, his voice was muffled and scratchy, it seemed that the human had not taken water in days. -Is that…. The aroma of the meat ... it was so delicious that I could not resist ... I have not eaten for days and recently I ran out of water ... I saw the light of this fire and as I did not see anyone I thought they had abandoned it, no ... I did not know that he still had an owner.
For a moment, Marcus became very sensitive about what he had just heard, since he himself had suffered that during the first days he started to flee, but when he remembered the fright that caused him and that made him lose sleep, he took those feelings
"Look," Marcus said. "I understand what's happening to you, but you've ruined my night, so I think you've killed my good heart a little apart from my dream, so get out of here or I'll get rid of you." He grunted and showed his sharp teeth.
At first he believed that the human would obey him without hesitation and would run away as fast as he could. Marcus did not expect the human to give him a smile with his dry lips and say, "If you wanted to getting rid of me, I would have done it at the moment I was about to scream instead of covering my mouth - without stopping smiling, he got up and approached Marcus, causing the wolf to blush and give him a look of absolute Disbelief.-If I did not do it, it was because I did not feel like doing it, but it seems that you are accumulating reasons to change your mind. The human remained a few steps away from Marcus. -Please- he said in a pleading voice. -I only ask for a little shelter, food and water for one night. Tomorrow I will continue my path and I will not bother you anymore. I could even pay him. "Saying this, the human began to check his pockets for something valuable." Look, I do not care, I do not think you have anything I want anyway, so long. "The huge wolf pointed out the bushes where the stranger had appeared. The human did not seem to have listened to him or only to deaf ears since he started to take peculiar things out of his pockets: I take out a huge dried cranberry seed, a pair of dice, the sheath of a dagger, a glass bottle, an old compass and finally a bag full of copper coins. -Look! Here I have 15 copper coins, could you accept them in exchange for what I asked for? Or even, take anything you like, but please, help me. "The human spoke in such a sad and desperate voice, that he touched the sensitive fiber of Marcus again. I sigh and take the small bag with coins. -Well, okay, I accept them. But they are not enough for everything you want- "Take what you wish!" The stranger said in a hopeful voice. - What you think is worth what I asked! - Marcus saw the change that the news generated in the human, seemed willing to jump off a precipice in order to have a little water, sigh and made a look in the motley collection. I automatically discard the dice and the empty bottle, I take the cranberry seed (it was valuable if you found the ideal buyer) and I look more closely at the compass. It was as dirty as its owner, but when removing the dirt from the surroundings, he realized that it was gold, something like that would be worth much in any market, while examining it, he noticed something that might detract from the object, a stain Brown covered part of the cover, covering the letters of North and East, when trying to remove it she realized that she was very attached. -I'm sorry- the human said when he saw that Marcus was very focused on the stain - why do you apologize ?. Marcus asked without taking his eyes off the compass. - is that, that stain that you are examining was my fault, since it is my blood- - Your blood? - Yes - and why did not you wash it in time? - They were chasing me, notice very late the cut that I had, besides that for days I can not find any stream or river where I could clean it - Well, "said Marcus, thinking of someone who could remove the stain and leave it as new. - Because of this stain, I will have to devalue your compass- I look at the reaction of the human, who seemed about to scream, Marcus could only laugh. -Don't worry, it's still worth enough to give you food, water and a place to sleep- At the end of the sentence, he felt some skinny arms surrounding him and looking down he saw that the human was embracing him -Thank you, thank you very much, You saved me, it's very good, Thanks. Thank you. Thanks! - -Wow, calm- Marcus said using his other leg to move the excited human, who now had a big smile on his face, which made him look less emaciated. -I'm sorry, but you stink and my nose can not stand such a smell so close- -Yes, I understand, thank you very much anyway- said the human sitting again next to the little fire that was left. -That's better, now, take a little water .- he passed his plastic bottle to the human, this seemed to offer him the best gift in the world. -Don't drink fast or you'll do more harm than good.- Marcus watched as the human drank small trickles of water, slowly quenching his thirst. When I was satisfied I returned his canteen, cleared his throat and said. "Thank you very much, I think a little more and I'm dying of dehydration" he smiled and Marcus could not help but smile, the human's voice was more pleasant now that it was wet again. "Well, for now we will leave the food aside, it is not yet list and for what it is, humans do not eat raw things, or am I wrong? - -No, do not make mistakes.- the human said, directing a melancholy look at the council.- -Well, it's late, there's still time to sleep.- Marcus went back to his tree and settled back, saw that the human was settling near the bonfire and seemed to prepare to sleep, still had his eyes on the rabbit. -Don't worry, tomorrow you can try it, for now rest.- -You're right.- Marcus saw how the human was slowly closing his eyes, he again felt the fatigue that caused the digestion of the other two rabbits, he was He was about to close his eyes when he remembered something. -By the way, my name is Marcus, and you? - He thought that the human was already asleep and therefore he did not hear it, Marcus closed his eyes again, and when he felt that he was entering his sweet dreams, a voice, pleasant and that he woke up a certain affection, whispered to him. "My name is Richard, nice to meet you.
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