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Long ago, 
Arbon gave me an idea for how one of the usual macro/micro tropes would turn out in my setting. Like most of his ideas, it was great, and like most ideas I get, it collected dust for years until I finally got around to using it. Set in the same world as my previous stories, here's a short one about how one of the most common scenarios in macro settings can turn out in that world...
Arbon gave me an idea for how one of the usual macro/micro tropes would turn out in my setting. Like most of his ideas, it was great, and like most ideas I get, it collected dust for years until I finally got around to using it. Set in the same world as my previous stories, here's a short one about how one of the most common scenarios in macro settings can turn out in that world...
Category Story / Macro / Micro
Species Mouse
Size 120 x 119px
File Size 75.3 kB
Great work as usual, haven't read any of your stuff in a long time, but always worth it. I've been procrastinating way too much this year myself...
Anyway, Isaac Tennant, Valeria, the geek innuendos started fast and strong in this one. :)
Also, around the end, little spelling error, "wanna comb over to my place?"
Like I said, always fun. Keep it up. :D
Anyway, Isaac Tennant, Valeria, the geek innuendos started fast and strong in this one. :)
Also, around the end, little spelling error, "wanna comb over to my place?"
Like I said, always fun. Keep it up. :D
Heh, when I saw you mention it was something Arbon gave you an idea about long ago... and "human" and "mouse" in the keyboards I was wondering if it was that joke about how it's possible in your setting for there to be a human-sized mouse and vice-versa
Cute story, the "squeaking" was particularly both funny and cute. And yeah, as macrokat said, I noticed that spelling error too. there also seemed to be a several blank pages at the end?
And yeah, the whole macro/micro blank date thing might be a bit cliche, but this one did have the slightly newer twist with the fact that the person setting them up knew about their sizes and did it on purpose mostly because it amused them.
Cute story, the "squeaking" was particularly both funny and cute. And yeah, as macrokat said, I noticed that spelling error too. there also seemed to be a several blank pages at the end?
And yeah, the whole macro/micro blank date thing might be a bit cliche, but this one did have the slightly newer twist with the fact that the person setting them up knew about their sizes and did it on purpose mostly because it amused them.
Yknow, after putting some thought into why Richie pulled this on his friends, I realized it's impossible to tell if he's sincere or messing with them because he's the type of person who doesn't know that himself!
And yeah, every time I've made a PDF of this, it's stuck a couple of blank pages on the end, and I can't figure out why. I wasn't going to let that stop me from posting, but I'll have to fix that and update the submission...
And yeah, every time I've made a PDF of this, it's stuck a couple of blank pages on the end, and I can't figure out why. I wasn't going to let that stop me from posting, but I'll have to fix that and update the submission...
Really great and fun story you did here! I also love the idea of adding Macro/Micro to "ordinary" everyday senarios too. It really makes things, uh, less boring in my opinion. Definitely more fun and interesting.
I only wish their date and conversations lastest a little bit longer, but that's just me. I always want the fun to never end. That's a good thing I suppose though, it just means I really wanted to read more! You wrote them out to be very cute and just adorable together! Giant nerdy mouse girls are awesome!
...Heh, I couldn't help but notice his name too. Isaac.
I only wish their date and conversations lastest a little bit longer, but that's just me. I always want the fun to never end. That's a good thing I suppose though, it just means I really wanted to read more! You wrote them out to be very cute and just adorable together! Giant nerdy mouse girls are awesome!
...Heh, I couldn't help but notice his name too. Isaac.
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