I'm working at improving my comics. This is a little idea to experiment with styles. I know the japanese onomatopoeias are maybe too much, but take it as a parody (and they make it look so epic =P)
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The japanese onomatopeia aren't too much just too ... straight? You know, giving them some effect and all, not just put them here as word, "tremble" could be a bit "blurr" and letter could be a bit "away" from each other, a bit to the left, another bit to the right, and turned in a bit to make it like shaky heartbeat could have a bit bigger one but a bit transparent like the word is beating itself and the translation of them right under it is kinda weird, why not put them under or next to the panel, I saw a lot of translated comics like this with "SFX: tremble" or things like this
But still, nice work, look really good, wanna see some, not about this one because you said it's a parody, but a full story maybe? it doesn't have to be long~
But still, nice work, look really good, wanna see some, not about this one because you said it's a parody, but a full story maybe? it doesn't have to be long~
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