Good.

Good Now we say Good indeeed heheh ahahah

Feeling animalistic, are we?

YES INDEED MY DEAR FRIEND

Cool. That happens to me sometimes as well.

*grabs you and twrils really now wondertful

really liked, a change of pace from your other poems.
but i think you left out where you love hello kitty ;3

Yeah trying something new for a change but going back to the hearts soon
just a little fun

Twas intreasting and of diffrent views good job.

everyone has some evil in their hearts even the most angelic one

Very nice, I like it!

just the kind of nature that i expected under your normal self and also very good poem

Hm...Interesting, but not in the way you think, I would suggest you take more than a few minutes to write up your poetry, to put some work in your art for the best effect. Good Day sir,

Why thank you kind sir ^_^
Yeah I think I rush on this one indeed
But then I'm trying to take a break from some but
practicing on some

From going over the hundreds of poems you have on your page it seems like you rush on all of them. I see little to no improvement from your first poem. But this happens to be one of the worst that I've read...The words don't make sense nor flow in any way together. It is like just random words put together. I see what you tried to do, but you missed the mark by far.

Yeah true true huh Can't really sit down and do them cause well been busy lately but I've been rewriting
some poems down and redoing them I'm not gonna put them on though but I'm still rewriting some and all
soo thank you

Don't rewrite old poems, It's the quickest way to hit a dry spell. Just take a break, grab some books to read, brush up on your spelling and grammar, look at a movie, listen to different kinds of music, just do things out of your normal routine. now don't get me wrong,, It'm not being malicious. More like heavy handed with critique. It's not like i'm telling you that you suck, just that you rush when you write and there seems to be no improvement.

I go through the same thing when someone tells me they hate/dislike my poetry because of the weird setups i use.

I see Well actualy I'm taking a break soo I'm free reading things and
and all soo Don't worry someone told me to do the same thing and all
but Still Hmm I might go back to Haku next month

Haiku, and maybe. do some reading backand practice befor you decide to post anything.

Yeah I kinda figure that out hun ^_^

Hun? no.

Oh don't worry I get to it and do my writing and don't worry
I'm not hitting on you if your affended

Trust me, offended I am not.

Good night.

take care

but thanks I guess.