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[UPDATE] The story of Wishes continues! :D You can read Wishes 2 here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/35156624
[ORIGINAL] The time has arrived. Here’s the last page of Wishes :)
Before I leave this comic and fully move to another one, I just wanted to say a few things and impressions about my own work. I felt a learned I few things from this comic just like from the first one „Gift from the Water God”
Originally I wanted a very simple story that I can build on the mature content, even I knew it was a little clishe. One of the reason why I intended to keep the story that simple, is to make the erotic part much more varied and creative than it was in Water God. To be honest, I think I could achive that, but I think it was still a bit off here and there.
But this is where I learned another thing I did not realised in Water God. That uninterrupted, long eroitc scenes are boring both making and reading. So this is what I’m going to focus on my next big comic.
I’m going to make them more story oriented, much more cute and/or romantic, and I’m going to divide the erotic scenes even better.
It feels quite great to finish my second whole, complete erotic comic :) I hope with your help, I can make a lot more in the future ;) So thank you guys again for helping me do what I love doing. Without you, there wouldn’t be a single comic, but now I’m planning the third and the fourth :D This is all thanks to you guys, you are awesome! :)
I hope you liked Wishes too, and I hope you’ll like what’s next to come :)
Every page will be published on my Patreon first, and only after 2 weeks will it be public.
If you want to help me to make more original contents, like comics and pictures, or if you are interrested in exclusive sketches, progressions, wips, PSD files, Q&As or monthly votes, Patreon exclusive streams and progress videos, and having access to all of my artworks 2 weeks before they get published, support me on Patreon! :)
https://www.patreon.com/zummeng
Or you can buy me a coffee :)
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[UPDATE] The story of Wishes continues! :D You can read Wishes 2 here: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/35156624
[ORIGINAL] The time has arrived. Here’s the last page of Wishes :)
Before I leave this comic and fully move to another one, I just wanted to say a few things and impressions about my own work. I felt a learned I few things from this comic just like from the first one „Gift from the Water God”
Originally I wanted a very simple story that I can build on the mature content, even I knew it was a little clishe. One of the reason why I intended to keep the story that simple, is to make the erotic part much more varied and creative than it was in Water God. To be honest, I think I could achive that, but I think it was still a bit off here and there.
But this is where I learned another thing I did not realised in Water God. That uninterrupted, long eroitc scenes are boring both making and reading. So this is what I’m going to focus on my next big comic.
I’m going to make them more story oriented, much more cute and/or romantic, and I’m going to divide the erotic scenes even better.
It feels quite great to finish my second whole, complete erotic comic :) I hope with your help, I can make a lot more in the future ;) So thank you guys again for helping me do what I love doing. Without you, there wouldn’t be a single comic, but now I’m planning the third and the fourth :D This is all thanks to you guys, you are awesome! :)
I hope you liked Wishes too, and I hope you’ll like what’s next to come :)
Every page will be published on my Patreon first, and only after 2 weeks will it be public.
If you want to help me to make more original contents, like comics and pictures, or if you are interrested in exclusive sketches, progressions, wips, PSD files, Q&As or monthly votes, Patreon exclusive streams and progress videos, and having access to all of my artworks 2 weeks before they get published, support me on Patreon! :)
https://www.patreon.com/zummeng
Or you can buy me a coffee :)
https://ko-fi.com/zummeng
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QwQ SHUT UP! I'm not crying! You're crying!!!
I love a happy ending!
Simple story yes, but effective! And they had so much love for one another we could see in their expressions and their eyes!
I hope we'll see them again one day! Or even once more in the ask sections.
I hope they'll be okay in that harsh, harsh world!
I love a happy ending!
Simple story yes, but effective! And they had so much love for one another we could see in their expressions and their eyes!
I hope we'll see them again one day! Or even once more in the ask sections.
I hope they'll be okay in that harsh, harsh world!
I'd like to say that long erotic scenes tend to be boring when reading in a weekly format because it does take ages to get through, but when you read it as a whole it isn't anywhere near as bad. It's one of those things you'll always get with any release schedule. Even daily webcomics tend to take ages to get anywhere, which is why people binge on them. A plot that takes a year to resolve can be read in under an hour, and the pacing feels better that way.
As long as I am not really enjoying the plot (since the erotic scenes started it was pretty obwious to guess how the ending will look like, just as I thought: Both leaving together with empty lamp on first plane) I really like it from more visual side.
The background turned really well, also the first pages were really promising, filled with dynamic poses <3
The background turned really well, also the first pages were really promising, filled with dynamic poses <3
At 30 pages, it was definitely a good ride.
When it comes to erotic comics of this length it's always good to keep the long term result in mind; comic pages and strips released on a schedule are always going to be a slog to go through if you're waiting for each new page to come out. It's when you look at the whole thing that you can do a proper assessment, since a major draw of erotica is the build up to the sex scene as much as sex itself. You can experiment by having "intermissions" between the stages if you wish like something drastically changing the scene onto a new one, just to mix it up a bit.
When it comes to erotic comics of this length it's always good to keep the long term result in mind; comic pages and strips released on a schedule are always going to be a slog to go through if you're waiting for each new page to come out. It's when you look at the whole thing that you can do a proper assessment, since a major draw of erotica is the build up to the sex scene as much as sex itself. You can experiment by having "intermissions" between the stages if you wish like something drastically changing the scene onto a new one, just to mix it up a bit.
One thing I have been noticing, is that there has been no dip in quality, though i did notice a couple of short cuts here and there,and that is expected. Mostly though you have been like a machine , putting out a page on schedule once a week and that is the mark of a true pro.
This comic was smoother than "Gift of the Water God" to read. The extended adult sequences, I agree, can be boring to draw, but they weren't all that bad to read, but the general pacing I have seen from other, successful adult comics is that ther are usually two or three sequences per "chapter" (or book, or story, ect.) One near the beginning, to set the tone and expectation of the comic, and one towards the end as the closer. the length of the sequences is generally 8 pages, or as long as 12 (though, other than flashback or joke panels they tend not to be shorter than 6) out of 28-32 pages. Total pages for adult content, should conform to what ever contract you are working with,m, but breaking them up for story (and context) is a good idea. if you are not under contract, then I'd suggest, just pace out the scenes in thumbnails so they work, and have the visuals that people like, and go from there, but 6-8 pages seems about right.
Where you excel in in the portrayal of moods, expressions and feelings. You do this superbly, through significant look and poses. You could do very well with a comic that few to no words with just expressions should you need to. You handle adult situations very well. You also handle humorous situations very well, and you have a good grasp of character. Where I have not seen a lot of content, is Melee combat (Swords, fists, ect.), and other more "Cinematic" actions. Having seen the Wak Fu movies (I am an animator RL, so I tend to watch a lot of cartoons for professional reasons), they handle action very well, especially giving an idea of the scope, and the violence of the actions. They borrow a lot from Anime, but they have their own distinct flavor. Borrowing from that in terms of "camera placement", layout, pacing and posing, might be a good direction to look at.
On the whole, you are still my favorite artist doing comics on FA, and I would buy your stuff if it was in stores. So, as always I look forward to your next comics work. Thank you for posting it here.
This comic was smoother than "Gift of the Water God" to read. The extended adult sequences, I agree, can be boring to draw, but they weren't all that bad to read, but the general pacing I have seen from other, successful adult comics is that ther are usually two or three sequences per "chapter" (or book, or story, ect.) One near the beginning, to set the tone and expectation of the comic, and one towards the end as the closer. the length of the sequences is generally 8 pages, or as long as 12 (though, other than flashback or joke panels they tend not to be shorter than 6) out of 28-32 pages. Total pages for adult content, should conform to what ever contract you are working with,m, but breaking them up for story (and context) is a good idea. if you are not under contract, then I'd suggest, just pace out the scenes in thumbnails so they work, and have the visuals that people like, and go from there, but 6-8 pages seems about right.
Where you excel in in the portrayal of moods, expressions and feelings. You do this superbly, through significant look and poses. You could do very well with a comic that few to no words with just expressions should you need to. You handle adult situations very well. You also handle humorous situations very well, and you have a good grasp of character. Where I have not seen a lot of content, is Melee combat (Swords, fists, ect.), and other more "Cinematic" actions. Having seen the Wak Fu movies (I am an animator RL, so I tend to watch a lot of cartoons for professional reasons), they handle action very well, especially giving an idea of the scope, and the violence of the actions. They borrow a lot from Anime, but they have their own distinct flavor. Borrowing from that in terms of "camera placement", layout, pacing and posing, might be a good direction to look at.
On the whole, you are still my favorite artist doing comics on FA, and I would buy your stuff if it was in stores. So, as always I look forward to your next comics work. Thank you for posting it here.
In the end, the thief stole the most valuable thing in his entire line of work: her heart.
Thank you for sharing these wonderful creations of yours, Viktria. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to find where those darn ninjas have been hiding their freshly-chopped onions in my apartment.
Thank you for sharing these wonderful creations of yours, Viktria. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to find where those darn ninjas have been hiding their freshly-chopped onions in my apartment.
Lovely ending!
I get what you're saying about varied sex, and it kind of getting overwhelming at times. You had some super-hot pages here, but the balance between sex and other story aspects could have been better.
Still, it was a very good comic, and I expect you'll be putting all you've learned from these two comics into your next one. It's going to be a doozy!
I get what you're saying about varied sex, and it kind of getting overwhelming at times. You had some super-hot pages here, but the balance between sex and other story aspects could have been better.
Still, it was a very good comic, and I expect you'll be putting all you've learned from these two comics into your next one. It's going to be a doozy!
I was waiting for him to say somrthing like that. Kind of cliche, but, eh, you know, sometimes you've gotta give the audience what they expect, too. :3 It did feel like the erotic stuff went on forever, but there's also that where most adult scenes don't convey much emotion at all, which can absolutely not be said for this one. Good work!
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