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My first major contribution to the serialized adventures of Sterling City, featuring Rush, a hyperactive snow leopard granted superspeed, a full-body dye job and a lucrative sponsorship deal by an experimental energy drink. Some people get all the luck.
Can the frantic feats of the super speedster keep him one step ahead of the nefarious Narcosis and his villainous vapours? Only you, dear reader, will know the answer! Pick up your issue today!
Many thanks to
Kikatsu for creating yet another fun world to write stories for, and 
Barrel-o-TF for editing, and the both of them for inspiration.
Can the frantic feats of the super speedster keep him one step ahead of the nefarious Narcosis and his villainous vapours? Only you, dear reader, will know the answer! Pick up your issue today!
Many thanks to
Kikatsu for creating yet another fun world to write stories for, and 
Barrel-o-TF for editing, and the both of them for inspiration.
Category Story / Inflation
Species Leopard
Size 120 x 102px
File Size 45.2 kB
Listed in Folders
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He developed the setting and the characters, and wrote the first story where my greenboy makes an appearance. I recommend you check it out.
KikatsuHe developed the setting and the characters, and wrote the first story where my greenboy makes an appearance. I recommend you check it out.
Ah man this was a very fun read, Casey is just a great guy it is hard not to cheer him on, even if he is a horribly awkward mess in front of the cameras. A cool bit of action there, and the way you wrote the settings and characters were especially cool, that new villain was definitely a cool opponent as well, it was great fun to see it all play out. Good job on this!
Hmmm... Well, first thing that comes to mind is that I love that the main character is a big lovable goof, not to mention the amusing relationship he has with his co-worker. His powers were amusing and got a chuckle out of me. The action was very entertaining, the villain was nice, and I absolutely adored the inflation scene. The ending also got a laugh out of me. All in all, it was a very enjoyable read and I can't wait to read more.
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