Them eyyyyyyyyes!

Eyes are so fun! ♥

Always a favorite feature of mine. ~<3

Oooh very nice! O:
I like how you did the thick lining, very nice and stylistic! The hair strands are a nice touch, the ones hanging out, but it would better if they were above the lineart I feel. But I really like how you did that lock of hair on her shoulder, it's bent kind of angular, and it works SOO WEELLL with the thick lineart!
I really like how you shined the eyeballs, and how you did the eyelashes and the way you angled it outward and even the bottom eyelashes... very well done! Also with the shape of the eyeballs!
The way you lit the lips is well done :D The lines of the creases of the lips, oh yes very well done! I like the little glow you added there too. For the top lips, I feel it'd be nicer if you added the dip like how regular lips look.. or else maybe stylise the upper lip a bit more for the roundness, since right now it looks far too much like the bottom lip.
But overall, this is really lovely, Pita! :D Good job!

Thank you! And I agree with everything you said. I'm going to go back and fix some of the stuff, but I wanted to go look at how I did the skin. She turned out darker than I meant, but it works. XD I really need to figure out how to fix colors on this monitor. ;w;