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Just stumbled on this, read it from start to finish and I have to say this is quite a gem. For something that promises to go world-devouring, the pace is phenomenal. And the way Leviathan's body works is fascinating. Particularly after the development of the second brain. Loved how the two minds diverged and formed such a unique relationship, and really loved the head's growing preference for growing fatter in addition to larger. Made all the better for the little sister's admonishment.
Can't wait to see this continue.
Can't wait to see this continue.
Thank you so much! I too really felt that growing the second brain provided a dynamic the narrative really needed for telling the story of this alien destined to devour the planet =P
I do have a lot of backlog of Leviathan left to post, but I also haven't written in it for quite some time... =/ But I'll see about getting another chapter online here pretty soon =)
I do have a lot of backlog of Leviathan left to post, but I also haven't written in it for quite some time... =/ But I'll see about getting another chapter online here pretty soon =)
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