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Sketches of one of my oldest characters, Jennie. Unlike, say, Bee, her design has never, ever changed. I'm trying to make it look a lot better than the way I have been drawing it, though.
Anything that's an issue, I'm trying to fix.
Critique/advice/free pie is most appreciated.
Anything that's an issue, I'm trying to fix.
Critique/advice/free pie is most appreciated.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 800 x 1159px
File Size 295 kB
Cute, and Jennie is pretty hot... Some critique.
The picture on the far lower right needs heavy re-adjusting. The bridge of her nose is almost not existant and the head is too round, almost like a pumpkin. I suggest you look at profile views of real people heads in order to take in what needs to be improved upon. Also, her but is too far out and isn't round, it has this ridgid look to it, like almost square like. Work on that.
The eyes in most of these pics are too large, unless you were going for the cartoonish look.
The picture on the far lower right needs heavy re-adjusting. The bridge of her nose is almost not existant and the head is too round, almost like a pumpkin. I suggest you look at profile views of real people heads in order to take in what needs to be improved upon. Also, her but is too far out and isn't round, it has this ridgid look to it, like almost square like. Work on that.
The eyes in most of these pics are too large, unless you were going for the cartoonish look.
this is pretty cute!!!!!!!
I have to tell you.... of course, this doesn´t looks completelly perfect, but over it all, i have to say that your expresions and faces ARE COMPLETELLY ALIVE and this is something that no eveyone gets in their skills.
you must be proud, I asure you you have the right stuff, just keep going, you´ll improve and get even better results than you get now....and then, those will be fabulous..... my good...she is really so cute!!!
I´ll watch the rest of your work... but I have to go to bed now, is late for me...
I have to tell you.... of course, this doesn´t looks completelly perfect, but over it all, i have to say that your expresions and faces ARE COMPLETELLY ALIVE and this is something that no eveyone gets in their skills.
you must be proud, I asure you you have the right stuff, just keep going, you´ll improve and get even better results than you get now....and then, those will be fabulous..... my good...she is really so cute!!!
I´ll watch the rest of your work... but I have to go to bed now, is late for me...
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