Very good story, awesome descriptions, detail, and characters. I wish you the best with the rest of it.

thanks a lot )

good job lion ^^

<hugs> thanks much wolf )

awesome

thanks )

Welcome *hugs*

cool! =3

glad u liked )

I simply loved the story of the encounter between Galen and Karmakat ^ ^! You should continue the story any day and show their relationship as the most perfect and powerful duo warriors and Karmakat meeting with other friends of Galen! And who knows how to show the beginning of a burning passion between Karmakat and Galen (because after all the people of the Galen Valdahri not see this kind of relationship to the "malice" and "evil" as we humans, well I think it will even Karmakat Valdàhria stay then at least he can "enjoy" having a boyfriend and height and who better than the greatest warrior of that world! Anyway great job that will further ^ ^

hehe well am glad u really enjoyed it
not being really a writer its not exactly the easyest thing for me to do. but at times i do enjoy doing it for a little change. i even started a story for just karmakat but i stoped on chapter 2 on it so far lol.
i get a lot more inspiration in drawing than writing. after all i never had training in writing skills more than crappy school teaching lol.
about making a follow up, well yeah i really want to. i just need to find the time to really concentrate on it. i would really love to manage it and make it at least as good but u as u can see its not that easy.
im allready pilling up a few ideas about it. and well i admit i would love to do a kind of passion story between gallen and karmakat, u got no idea how much lol. but am not sure da2p would agree for that since even if he is gay, gallen is supposably straight except some "side fun" lol.
i guess i can try to ask him since i know him but i wouldn't bet that he'll agree hehe.
you could try asking him if he would mind that i write about that very precise subject hehe you never know.
that sure would motivate me even more lol since how much i love his character hehe.
could sure make a great story, i would probably go on it even without that just being carefull to not go to far lol.
maybe i need more motivation and "cheering" from others to make me work on it harder hehe
if a few people keep asking me to do it that woul for sure give me a boost lol <not so subtle hint> lol