Temple Trouble (Commission)
This was a sketch commission that I've really enjoyed doing to de-stress! I tried to make him as pudgy as possible, and I apologise the background doesn't look very 'temple' like, I'm still learning how to do backgrounds! (^ω^) And as requested, the small story to go along with this is below, please enjoy!
Some quick commission info:
Even if I am busy, my commissions are open still because I can't help drawing in my spare time... oops.
- Sketch - £8 ($10)
- Coloured Picture - £15 ($19)
- Coloured Picture + Small Story to go with it - £20 ($25)
- Short Story (1000 words or under) - £6 ($8)
- Longer Story/Multi-chapter - Would depend on the length you wanted, message me!
I can only accept payments through PayPal too.
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“This place is wonderful – are you sure it’s okay if I enter the sacred chambers? I mean, I’ll happily stay somewhere else?”
“No, you’re a sacred being – the mighty wolf! You can go anywhere you please in this temple.”
Toby hadn’t been expecting such a welcome… he’d been wanting to visit this temple for so long, and upon discovering it was inhabited, had been invited in by the animals that lived there: rodents, who seemed to live in a tightly-knit tribe and, as Toby had found out rather quickly, worshiped sacred beings.
And who were those sacred beings?
Wolves.
So it had been a rather eventful visit so far, being painted with the tribes’ patterns in honour of his status and shown around the large temple, also attending the nightly feast with more food than Toby had ever seen in his life. It would explain why his already rather large paunch was even rounder.
“Well, thank you, and thank you for the food too, it was-“
Toby stopped in his tracks when they reached the small, golden doorway that would lead into the chambers, lit up by the fires on the surrounding walls. It was small, yes… but he wasn’t that big, right?
“Go on, get yourself inside, there’s lots to see and do!” the lead rodent stated, to which Toby nodded.
“Yes, great, well, I’ll just… shuffle down here then,” he replied, having to retreat down onto his paws to be level with the small doorway. His large rump stuck out, and his belly jiggled as he moved, and he was completely unaware of the tight situation he was about to create.
Toby stuck his arms through first, the cold floor meeting his flabby gut as he slowly shuffled his upper half inside, his chest passing without a hitch. The chambers inside almost took his breath away – golden walls and large beds that looked fit for royalty, also lit up by fires.
“This is amazing!” he called back to the lead rodent, who – being able to see Toby’s lower end – began to feel rather flustered at the sight of the wolf’s belly and large backside getting ready to squeeze through the doorway.
“May I suggest, Wolf, that you-“
But Toby could now barely hear his rodent friend - the doorway had been completely submerged by flab. It was also in that moment, he realised he wasn’t moving any further forward.
“What the-? Oh no…”
On the other side of the temple wall, Toby’s gut had indeed tried to enter the small doorway and had plugged up the small space, his stuffed belly bulging around the golden walls. Toby was quick to place his paws on the wall and tried to shove his way through.
“My fat wolf friend, it appears you’re causing a bit of a blockage to the sacred chambers, do you require some assistance?” the rodent asked politely. Toby had managed to stuff half of his belly through, but he could feel the fattest part refusing to enter and he puffed out an exasperated breath.
“If you could, yes…” Toby replied, to which the small rodent approached the fat wolf and didn’t hesitate to place his small clawed hands on the bulging flab. Tony only managed to supress a yelp before the rodent began pushing. “Ow – claws!”
But the rodent didn’t reply, and instead, they both worked to try and get Toby through the doorway. The wolf wriggled and squirmed, pushed and heaved with his legs… until finally, his gut slipped through the doorway and onto the other side.
“Ah, there you are,” he stated, giving his belly a pat and, thinking the problem had passed, then tried to move inside the chambers again. But this time, there was a much bigger problem – or rather, a bigger blockage.
When he tried to move forwards, Toby could feel his large backside squashing against the walls, much too big to fit inside. He wriggled in a slight panic, feeling just how big his backside was compared to the doorway.
“Maybe if I-“ he mumbled, deciding it was maybe best to go back, and tried to shuffle himself out. But that only caused his belly to surge up on the inside, creating a flabby barrier that stopped him from going anywhere… that was when he realised, he was well and truly wedged. “Why did I eat so much?!”
“Oh dear, it seems your behind is the obstruction now, my fat friend! We need to get you through!” the rodent said, somehow keeping his cool despite their being a large backside now blocking their way into the sacred chambers.
“That would be helpful…” Toby replied, placing his paws on the wall again whilst also feeling the rodents’ hands meet his backside – they were so small, the rodent could only push on one of the round blobs of fat obstructing the doorway.
“Hurry, we must assist our chubby friend!”
“Wait, what?”
The patter of tiny feet seemed to echo behind him and Toby realised the rodent had obviously called for assistance, and there was soon two, three, four… five… six… seven? No, even more.
“How many of you guys are there?” Toby asked, only just able to hear the squeaking and chattering coming from the other side.
“We need a few to get you through, my tubby fellow! Now – push!”
Suddenly, Toby felt himself surge forwards as all the tiny little clawed hands began shoving on his backside, all of them sinking in to the soft, bouncy flesh. Toby also felt himself blushing, but knew he needed to help and began trying to shove his way through, squirming slightly from side to side to try and ease his bloated behind inside. His butt merely bulged around the doorway, even as the rodents heaved with all their strength to try and push Toby through.
"It's no use!"
"He's too fat!"
Voices echoed around the hall in worry that the fat wolf had completely blocked the entrance - but Toby was rather enjoying the attention he was getting. He didn't really realise how serious the situation was for the little guys, and instead enjoyed the tickle-ish sensation of the clawed hands on his flabby behind.
After a few minutes, Toby hadn't moved an inch and some of the rodents stopped pushing, completely worn out.
"What are we supposed to do now?" Toby asked, squirming uselessly, which only caused his backside to jiggle.
"My fat friend... you seem to have engorged yourself too much, and your rump is not fit for entrance to the chamber... perhaps some oil will suffice to try and ease you through?" the lead rodent stated.
Hm...
Some day this was turning out to be, Toby thought.
Some quick commission info:
Even if I am busy, my commissions are open still because I can't help drawing in my spare time... oops.
- Sketch - £8 ($10)
- Coloured Picture - £15 ($19)
- Coloured Picture + Small Story to go with it - £20 ($25)
- Short Story (1000 words or under) - £6 ($8)
- Longer Story/Multi-chapter - Would depend on the length you wanted, message me!
I can only accept payments through PayPal too.
-
“This place is wonderful – are you sure it’s okay if I enter the sacred chambers? I mean, I’ll happily stay somewhere else?”
“No, you’re a sacred being – the mighty wolf! You can go anywhere you please in this temple.”
Toby hadn’t been expecting such a welcome… he’d been wanting to visit this temple for so long, and upon discovering it was inhabited, had been invited in by the animals that lived there: rodents, who seemed to live in a tightly-knit tribe and, as Toby had found out rather quickly, worshiped sacred beings.
And who were those sacred beings?
Wolves.
So it had been a rather eventful visit so far, being painted with the tribes’ patterns in honour of his status and shown around the large temple, also attending the nightly feast with more food than Toby had ever seen in his life. It would explain why his already rather large paunch was even rounder.
“Well, thank you, and thank you for the food too, it was-“
Toby stopped in his tracks when they reached the small, golden doorway that would lead into the chambers, lit up by the fires on the surrounding walls. It was small, yes… but he wasn’t that big, right?
“Go on, get yourself inside, there’s lots to see and do!” the lead rodent stated, to which Toby nodded.
“Yes, great, well, I’ll just… shuffle down here then,” he replied, having to retreat down onto his paws to be level with the small doorway. His large rump stuck out, and his belly jiggled as he moved, and he was completely unaware of the tight situation he was about to create.
Toby stuck his arms through first, the cold floor meeting his flabby gut as he slowly shuffled his upper half inside, his chest passing without a hitch. The chambers inside almost took his breath away – golden walls and large beds that looked fit for royalty, also lit up by fires.
“This is amazing!” he called back to the lead rodent, who – being able to see Toby’s lower end – began to feel rather flustered at the sight of the wolf’s belly and large backside getting ready to squeeze through the doorway.
“May I suggest, Wolf, that you-“
But Toby could now barely hear his rodent friend - the doorway had been completely submerged by flab. It was also in that moment, he realised he wasn’t moving any further forward.
“What the-? Oh no…”
On the other side of the temple wall, Toby’s gut had indeed tried to enter the small doorway and had plugged up the small space, his stuffed belly bulging around the golden walls. Toby was quick to place his paws on the wall and tried to shove his way through.
“My fat wolf friend, it appears you’re causing a bit of a blockage to the sacred chambers, do you require some assistance?” the rodent asked politely. Toby had managed to stuff half of his belly through, but he could feel the fattest part refusing to enter and he puffed out an exasperated breath.
“If you could, yes…” Toby replied, to which the small rodent approached the fat wolf and didn’t hesitate to place his small clawed hands on the bulging flab. Tony only managed to supress a yelp before the rodent began pushing. “Ow – claws!”
But the rodent didn’t reply, and instead, they both worked to try and get Toby through the doorway. The wolf wriggled and squirmed, pushed and heaved with his legs… until finally, his gut slipped through the doorway and onto the other side.
“Ah, there you are,” he stated, giving his belly a pat and, thinking the problem had passed, then tried to move inside the chambers again. But this time, there was a much bigger problem – or rather, a bigger blockage.
When he tried to move forwards, Toby could feel his large backside squashing against the walls, much too big to fit inside. He wriggled in a slight panic, feeling just how big his backside was compared to the doorway.
“Maybe if I-“ he mumbled, deciding it was maybe best to go back, and tried to shuffle himself out. But that only caused his belly to surge up on the inside, creating a flabby barrier that stopped him from going anywhere… that was when he realised, he was well and truly wedged. “Why did I eat so much?!”
“Oh dear, it seems your behind is the obstruction now, my fat friend! We need to get you through!” the rodent said, somehow keeping his cool despite their being a large backside now blocking their way into the sacred chambers.
“That would be helpful…” Toby replied, placing his paws on the wall again whilst also feeling the rodents’ hands meet his backside – they were so small, the rodent could only push on one of the round blobs of fat obstructing the doorway.
“Hurry, we must assist our chubby friend!”
“Wait, what?”
The patter of tiny feet seemed to echo behind him and Toby realised the rodent had obviously called for assistance, and there was soon two, three, four… five… six… seven? No, even more.
“How many of you guys are there?” Toby asked, only just able to hear the squeaking and chattering coming from the other side.
“We need a few to get you through, my tubby fellow! Now – push!”
Suddenly, Toby felt himself surge forwards as all the tiny little clawed hands began shoving on his backside, all of them sinking in to the soft, bouncy flesh. Toby also felt himself blushing, but knew he needed to help and began trying to shove his way through, squirming slightly from side to side to try and ease his bloated behind inside. His butt merely bulged around the doorway, even as the rodents heaved with all their strength to try and push Toby through.
"It's no use!"
"He's too fat!"
Voices echoed around the hall in worry that the fat wolf had completely blocked the entrance - but Toby was rather enjoying the attention he was getting. He didn't really realise how serious the situation was for the little guys, and instead enjoyed the tickle-ish sensation of the clawed hands on his flabby behind.
After a few minutes, Toby hadn't moved an inch and some of the rodents stopped pushing, completely worn out.
"What are we supposed to do now?" Toby asked, squirming uselessly, which only caused his backside to jiggle.
"My fat friend... you seem to have engorged yourself too much, and your rump is not fit for entrance to the chamber... perhaps some oil will suffice to try and ease you through?" the lead rodent stated.
Hm...
Some day this was turning out to be, Toby thought.
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