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YAY, I has new poem for you! :>
I'll admit that this one took a bit longer than expected; HOWEVER, I do believe that just made it more AWEsome! I'm rather happy with how this shadow concept turned out. =D
Also, mid-write, I was in a nice little conversation with
riddle_me_this. I was discussing the subject with him, and he brought up an interesting idea to contribute to the poem. Of course, me being me, I really didn't want to use a concept that wasn't my own...especially if it was a GOOD one! Alas, he insisted, and I gave in. He'll see the fruits of the convo in this poem. x3
Well, I've yakked enough. I hope you find this to be a good read guys! ;D
Until next poem! \(^o^)/
I'll admit that this one took a bit longer than expected; HOWEVER, I do believe that just made it more AWEsome! I'm rather happy with how this shadow concept turned out. =D
Also, mid-write, I was in a nice little conversation with
riddle_me_this. I was discussing the subject with him, and he brought up an interesting idea to contribute to the poem. Of course, me being me, I really didn't want to use a concept that wasn't my own...especially if it was a GOOD one! Alas, he insisted, and I gave in. He'll see the fruits of the convo in this poem. x3Well, I've yakked enough. I hope you find this to be a good read guys! ;D
Until next poem! \(^o^)/
Category Poetry / Human
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File Size 1.1 kB
Twas nice, twas nice. No, wait, it wasn't. It was awesome! Once again my friend, excellent poetry there. There is a certain mysticism to it, and it just flows seemlessly, like shadows dancing in candle's sputtering light. I think my favorite line was your umbrage doesn't harbor lies, although the ending was strong. You know I love the strong endings ^^
One thing, in line 3 stanza one... did you consider "though, to my motion you do adhere:" IT has a better feel for the meter...
One thing, in line 3 stanza one... did you consider "though, to my motion you do adhere:" IT has a better feel for the meter...
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