Ooh. Extended vore stays. This should get interesting...

Here's hoping part 2 delivers, my dude.

I bet it will!

Great job. I wonder what will happen next?

After I finish a few other projects, you won't have to wait long.

Link could give him heartburn using'Din's fire'

Loving it so far!

Glad to hear it.

I really like your stance on this. :)

Too late to read it now but ill be sure to download it in the morning!

Thanks, dude. Hope you like it.

I predict a pretty intense bellyache in the near future...

Quite likely.

Which raises the question, what does Bossall gain from keeping Link in his belly once he learns the kid isn’t going anywhere? I mean, yeah, having a full belly probably feels nice, but all the struggling would probably get really nauseating after a while. Not to mention there’s no reason Link would give in and take off his tunic, so Bossall’s gonna experience a lot worse than a minor inconvenience...

Arrogance is a big part of it. Bossall's been bested once by child Link. Now that he has adult Link in his gut, he isn't willing to accept the losing situation. So he may keep trying to beat Link down, even if it results in more than a little pain.

Of course. The big baddie doesn’t know when to quit. XD

Defeat is a hard thing to swallow, especially when it means losing a delicious victory.

Oh man, now I really want to see how this all turns out. I can just imagine the grumpy dialogue between the two...especially if Bossall tries to annoy Link as much as he can to gain some kind of victory, laying on top of his gut, eating and drinking while Link’s still in there, etc.

If he can't digest him, he can certainly spite and disgust him. Gotta enjoy the simple things.

and it's not difficult for you to work on several stories at once?

I'm pretty much always working on several things at once tbh. Unless a story is really short, it's hard to stay 100% focused on just one thing and not occasionally take a break to work on something else in the back-burners.

Good writing and looking forward to the next installment. One thing that didn't make sense to me though was Link's ability to keep breathing normally in the cramped confines of a stomach that has repeatedly been burped of its existing air. Perhaps the lizardman was deliberately gulping down more air to insure the human suffers from being digested alive, (so perhaps you might mention this), but would obviously stop providing air once learning that he swallowed a magical object that will supposedly prevent his ability to digest him.

I suppose we have to just accept this is based on a cartoony children's video game and roll with all of the inherent implausibilities, though given the Lizardman's intelligence, one has to wonder why he wouldn't have stripped Link of his magical garment before ingesting him. Even if he didn't realize it had magical properties, any clothing or footwear could cause a dangerous intestinal blockage, not to mention small weapons, poison vials, magical items, etc. that could be hidden in the garments so any predator in a fantasy world with more intelligence than a bullfrog would almost certainly strip any human prey naked before ingesting them. This would not only be prudent for health reasons, but would humiliate the human victim all the more, and especially so if they prey some kind of dangerous 'hero' as the Lizardman acknowledges.

It would also be logical for the lizardman to subdue both human and animal prey swallowed whole and alive by the quick and simple snapping of their limbs like they were just so many twigs with his far greater physical strength. This would be an obligatory, even reflexive and instinctive part of the act of feeding on whole prey we would expect every lizardman to be taught as a hatchling. Even a simple bird often pulls of the legs of larger insects that may trouble their stomachs, so when a highly intelligent creature like a dragon doesn't, and the hero kills it from the inside, it just shows how dumb these kind of video games, and b fantasy novels where this invariably occurs, really are.

Thanks for sharing, and hope we will see a sensible, non-video game type outcome to this story!

I actually thought about that, and were I not short on time, I would've addressed the air thing. But in a nutshell, tunics provide oxygen to those who wear them. See, in addition to providing Link with the ability to not burn to ash, the tunic provides the necessary oxygen for Link to breathe in such unGodly climate conditions. Similar to how the Water Tunic allows Link to breathe underwater. So even with Bossall burping as much as he is and will continue to, the Tunic itself provides just enough oxygen for Link to breathe amidst incredibly scorching temperatures.

As for the striping and not snagging of the limbs, that can be jotted down to simple taste. I don't do nudity for any reason in any of my stories and don't do extreme violence either, as I don't put an emphasis on suffering for any reason in my stories. Those elements are a bit more realistic, but they're just not elements I've any interest in writing in any of my stories.

Thanks for the feedback, dude! Hope the next segment delivers!

That makes sense then why he wouldn't suffocate, and the magical generation of fresh oxygen would likely be one of the causes of Bossall/s continuous burping. He likely would have never burped so much in his life as he has since ingesting Link and the magical tunic.

Absolutely love this story! Here's to hoping a part 2 emerges soon!

Really good <3

I think this is one of the best stories I have seen! Can't wait for chapter 2!!

Are those three Lizalfos your characters? :3

Yep.

Does Bossall have a bellybutton? My Lizalfos character does.

is this still gonna have a part 2? Just curious.

One day, probably. Just focusing on commissions and trades for now though.

ok. Thanks for responding! I look forward to whenever you can get around to it!

Is the next chapter to this story coming out soon?