My response to
graveyardgreg's Tarbh Challenge, which you can find here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/893443/
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“...Shows a pause in a sentence.” The teacher finished explaining. Tirith already knew the proper use of a comma, but, regardless; it would seem the rest of the room didn't. He rolled his eyes as their pencils noisily jotted furious notes. He even noticed that none of these furious notes he laid eyes on were punctuated properly with commas.
He sighed, and sat back in his seat. His paper, which he'd now eschewed to the corner of his desk, contained one simple sentence: “Perhaps explain to them what a semi-colon is, and then, maybe, try the oxford comma?”
graveyardgreg's Tarbh Challenge, which you can find here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/893443/*****
“...Shows a pause in a sentence.” The teacher finished explaining. Tirith already knew the proper use of a comma, but, regardless; it would seem the rest of the room didn't. He rolled his eyes as their pencils noisily jotted furious notes. He even noticed that none of these furious notes he laid eyes on were punctuated properly with commas.
He sighed, and sat back in his seat. His paper, which he'd now eschewed to the corner of his desk, contained one simple sentence: “Perhaps explain to them what a semi-colon is, and then, maybe, try the oxford comma?”
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*Giggles*
You mean "woe", right? To woo is to attempt to court, or a much more formal version of flirting xP.
I can flirt with you if you'd like, though ^ ~.
(I couldn't resist x3. I'm very glad you liked this. It's always a delightful surprise to find a new comment on a written piece =D. Please don't take the joke too hard; it's just play, and "woe" isn't exactly a word most people use every day x3.)
You mean "woe", right? To woo is to attempt to court, or a much more formal version of flirting xP.
I can flirt with you if you'd like, though ^ ~.
(I couldn't resist x3. I'm very glad you liked this. It's always a delightful surprise to find a new comment on a written piece =D. Please don't take the joke too hard; it's just play, and "woe" isn't exactly a word most people use every day x3.)
Uh oh. Woe lead to a woo which can lead to a WOOO!(rejoice) It's funny how comma placement and proper grammar can affect a statement and it's impact.
You can flirt as you see fit, who am I to stop you?
(I didn't mind at all. It was cute. I was reading through my old challenges searching for motivation to keep writing and I found I had never read any of the other challenges. So I started looking them up. Glad I found yours cause it went from woe to woo. ;). Hehe. ))
You can flirt as you see fit, who am I to stop you?
(I didn't mind at all. It was cute. I was reading through my old challenges searching for motivation to keep writing and I found I had never read any of the other challenges. So I started looking them up. Glad I found yours cause it went from woe to woo. ;). Hehe. ))
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