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This is what i've been working on for a bit... and i think something is terribly wrong with it.... PLEASE TELL ME
i think the head might be too small.... i don't know... HELP
EDIT::: I've made a bunch of changes.i think that the head needs to be a bit bigger still but i did fix the cheeks and flattened the chest out even curved the neck, added some definition to the chest and cleaned up some areas havn't fixed up the clubs but w/e
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barti is the love of my life .... send him <3's
i think the head might be too small.... i don't know... HELP
EDIT::: I've made a bunch of changes.i think that the head needs to be a bit bigger still but i did fix the cheeks and flattened the chest out even curved the neck, added some definition to the chest and cleaned up some areas havn't fixed up the clubs but w/e
also
barti is the love of my life .... send him <3's
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ok first I think it looks great...however if I may? [yeah this coming from a girl who can't draw anatomy worth shit!]
The arm holding the club....look at where the elbow is there, and compare it to the elbow on the other arm...i think it's uneven?
That being said, perhaps the straight arm is too short? Perhaps his paw should be lower, down by his hip? Take a picture of yourself in that pose if you can, look where your hand is..that would help a lot i think.
the only Possible thing might be the head is a wee bit small for the body...again though I'm not sure.
I always feel bad for offering criticism. If I seem wishy washy about this, that is why.
The best advice I can give, is take pictures of yourself in the pose you wish to draw, study your weak points, it might help. Jt does this, he takes pictures of all the poses you see him draw, I'm starting to get into that habit as well. ^_^
All in all hun? it's Awesome! and if you'd like, I'll color it for you ^^
The arm holding the club....look at where the elbow is there, and compare it to the elbow on the other arm...i think it's uneven?
That being said, perhaps the straight arm is too short? Perhaps his paw should be lower, down by his hip? Take a picture of yourself in that pose if you can, look where your hand is..that would help a lot i think.
the only Possible thing might be the head is a wee bit small for the body...again though I'm not sure.
I always feel bad for offering criticism. If I seem wishy washy about this, that is why.
The best advice I can give, is take pictures of yourself in the pose you wish to draw, study your weak points, it might help. Jt does this, he takes pictures of all the poses you see him draw, I'm starting to get into that habit as well. ^_^
All in all hun? it's Awesome! and if you'd like, I'll color it for you ^^
I think this is what happened:
You had the workings of an up-shot, but the perspective of the club bag was more two-point than three-point, so the tentative three-point perspective that was going on with the figure started looking like it was a disproportionate two-point perspective. You'll probably have to scale the whole upper half of the figure to make it completely evened out.
Love it so far, though! *hugs teh coonboy*
You had the workings of an up-shot, but the perspective of the club bag was more two-point than three-point, so the tentative three-point perspective that was going on with the figure started looking like it was a disproportionate two-point perspective. You'll probably have to scale the whole upper half of the figure to make it completely evened out.
Love it so far, though! *hugs teh coonboy*
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