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Geamex, stop leaving comments on my posts.
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Category All / Muscle
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Size 1006 x 1280px
File Size 363.9 kB
Okay, I get it now. From the way his mouth looked when he pulled loose from the kid's head, I thought he might have a certain kind of mollusk in him. Conches do that with their mouths, y'know. Mollusks are pretty much all muscle, too, which might give you a gag for your contest- A giant mussel shell is wheeled out on stage- It opens, revealing big shapeless blob- Slowly, the blob rises up out of the shell and turns into a humanoid contestant, the bodybuilding champion of Mud Bay Beach trying out for the big time.
Ahhh. That was just a silly little cartoon gag. :)
I love the mollusk idea too. I could get into that. You also reminded me of this one scene from this Merrie Melodies short: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4a3u7z
I love the mollusk idea too. I could get into that. You also reminded me of this one scene from this Merrie Melodies short: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4a3u7z
Well, you might try this as a gag- I'm certain I made it up out of whole cloth- Your contest- It's not enough you look strong, you have to prove it, too. After the finalists have been chosen by a pose-down, they face the final challenge- Unscrewing the lid off a grocery store jar of dill pickles. The guy who does it wins.
Love it. I'll have to take that into account if I make it to the contest part of the comic.
The one the spider brings up takes place at an adult club, but I have had thoughts of mentioning one to take place in-store. Though I may end up typing it out as side stories since I still have a lot of other stuff I'd like to cover for the comic version.
The one the spider brings up takes place at an adult club, but I have had thoughts of mentioning one to take place in-store. Though I may end up typing it out as side stories since I still have a lot of other stuff I'd like to cover for the comic version.
Suggestion- Move the contest to the store. Stay with your set up. And play up the comedy. The contest starts well enough, but gradually slides sideways. An example, the pickle jar challenge- The strongest looking guys you've ever seen have exhausted themselves on the jar, unable to open it. The wolf guy picks it up, looks at jar in disbelief, give the lid a weak twist, and the lid unexpectedly pops off. Cut to next panel- The wolf guy chased by an enraged mob of bodybuilders throwing dill pickles at him... Hard! Anyway, I'll stop making suggestions. Thanks for watching.
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