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The first written material for the account, and already I could use some help! :)
This is the exciting glimpse into what my fursona, Balans, is like. However, this is the first rough draft. I could really use your help to make the final copy better. I'd be honored if you look through the story and let me know what to fix. As things stand right now, this is the first rough draft, so if anything sounds fishy or needs attention then now is the time to tell me so I can fix it in a later, more finished copy. Don't worry about being "too harsh" in the comments section. Any comment helps in making this story the best.
With that, please enjoy the sneak peek / rough draft of the Balans Introduction story. Let me know what you think!
The final copy is complete! Click here to read it!
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The first written material for the account, and already I could use some help! :)
This is the exciting glimpse into what my fursona, Balans, is like. However, this is the first rough draft. I could really use your help to make the final copy better. I'd be honored if you look through the story and let me know what to fix. As things stand right now, this is the first rough draft, so if anything sounds fishy or needs attention then now is the time to tell me so I can fix it in a later, more finished copy. Don't worry about being "too harsh" in the comments section. Any comment helps in making this story the best.
With that, please enjoy the sneak peek / rough draft of the Balans Introduction story. Let me know what you think!
Category Story / All
Species Western Dragon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 194 kB
Listed in Folders
Thank you for the compliments! It's been hard to find someone who wanted to leave one. Glad to say your the first haha. Unfortunately this isn't a love story between Darrin and Balans. This story is meant more to summarize what Balans is and to explain his backstory in a way that isn't 50 Microsoft pages long. The posters in the picture, the showing of his powers, and smaller things like how he acts are shown here to accomplish that (which I hope that did well). Now there is a love between Darrin and Balans, just not like a romantic love. Balans used to be partnered with Darrin like a pet might be with us. I wanted to convey that with the smaller picture, which I hopefully did haha.
Thank you again for looking at the story. The comment is really valued! I'm currently editing this draft and I expect to have draft two out soon. Would you want me to note you when it comes out?
Thank you again for looking at the story. The comment is really valued! I'm currently editing this draft and I expect to have draft two out soon. Would you want me to note you when it comes out?
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