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YAY for companion pictures! arenty thy just great? this one I took a bit more time on, seeing as how.. well, it's in quite a bit more detail and a smaller sumject range xD but this is the companion to "goodbye" there may Be a third one or not, I'm not sure.. depends on how long my depression holds ^^
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I haven't the slightest clue what is in your hand, and the teardrop seems out of place. water (or saline, whatever) does not reflect light like that, so you might want to look up a few images of water dropping or splashing to get the reflective and refractive qualities. you need a little bit of work on the structure of the hand, the index finger looks like it starts halfway into the palm, and is fused with the middle finger at the base. the blood (that is blood, correct?) follows a good path, though the bend in the trail halfway between the drips and where the blood is stemming from, would not go to the right, but to the left. it has to follow the contours of the hand.
Those are the most noticable things to me, otherwise, i'd say you're getting better with form. the emotion needs a bit of work.
Cheers!
I haven't the slightest clue what is in your hand, and the teardrop seems out of place. water (or saline, whatever) does not reflect light like that, so you might want to look up a few images of water dropping or splashing to get the reflective and refractive qualities. you need a little bit of work on the structure of the hand, the index finger looks like it starts halfway into the palm, and is fused with the middle finger at the base. the blood (that is blood, correct?) follows a good path, though the bend in the trail halfway between the drips and where the blood is stemming from, would not go to the right, but to the left. it has to follow the contours of the hand.
Those are the most noticable things to me, otherwise, i'd say you're getting better with form. the emotion needs a bit of work.
Cheers!
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