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Bloody War - Part 1 - The Beginning
Here it is, Part 1 of my oldest comic 'Bloody War' finally also on FurAffinity :D
The art here is years old, so don't get confused. Originally those pages were created from 2010-2013 :) But I recently gave the text a little overwork, because I translated some of it pretty wrong, or it made the characters look very odd for saying strange stuff >_>
IF you can't wait until the rest of the comic makes its way up here, you can read up to the most recent page here: https://naokohara.deviantart.com/ar.....over-201392264
Also: I am aware of the wrong text colors on page 6 and page 34. I will try to fix this as soon as possible. :)
Design, typography, drawings, character and background coloring by me.
Bloody War © Nadine Hartwig
naokohara
You're NOT authorized to use this work in any way, shape or form.
_____________________________________________________________________
You want to support the artist? Check out the Tip Jar :3
Or you can buy me a Coffee: Ko-Fi :D
The art here is years old, so don't get confused. Originally those pages were created from 2010-2013 :) But I recently gave the text a little overwork, because I translated some of it pretty wrong, or it made the characters look very odd for saying strange stuff >_>
IF you can't wait until the rest of the comic makes its way up here, you can read up to the most recent page here: https://naokohara.deviantart.com/ar.....over-201392264
Also: I am aware of the wrong text colors on page 6 and page 34. I will try to fix this as soon as possible. :)
Design, typography, drawings, character and background coloring by me.
Bloody War © Nadine Hartwig
naokoharaYou're NOT authorized to use this work in any way, shape or form.
_____________________________________________________________________
You want to support the artist? Check out the Tip Jar :3
Or you can buy me a Coffee: Ko-Fi :D
Category Flash / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 975 x 1450px
File Size 862 B
I'm not trying to make your illustrative decisions for you, but the colored text makes what characters are saying hard to read. But I can't really judge it, as it is years old. It's seems nicely assembled; story, characters, character sub-plots, and main plot alike. Hope to see more.
I actually changed the text into the colored versions over the last week, so this is new XD
But the problem with this is mostly due to the bad quality I had to put this in, due to the file-size restrictions :/
The text gets all blurred and since I had to shrink the pages down it gets even more difficult to read DX
For comparison, I have the full-sized version on my website: http://www.naokohara.de/part-1---th.....beginning.html This one should be MUCH easier to read.
I really hope I can someday find a way to get the full-sized version here too, because it is really inconvenient like this. I fully understand the difficulty with this. :/
But thank you very much for your feedback :D
But the problem with this is mostly due to the bad quality I had to put this in, due to the file-size restrictions :/
The text gets all blurred and since I had to shrink the pages down it gets even more difficult to read DX
For comparison, I have the full-sized version on my website: http://www.naokohara.de/part-1---th.....beginning.html This one should be MUCH easier to read.
I really hope I can someday find a way to get the full-sized version here too, because it is really inconvenient like this. I fully understand the difficulty with this. :/
But thank you very much for your feedback :D
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