
Regression Reform (Regression)
WARNING: I did not edit this. I typed it out and did not like what I wrote, so I abandoned it. However, I felt that some people might be interested in it anyways, so I uploaded it regardless. It may be messy at times, and seem rushed or incomplete.
Dusk decides to infiltrate a regression reform center to try and help his confidants escape, but may not want to leave.
Dusk decides to infiltrate a regression reform center to try and help his confidants escape, but may not want to leave.
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Pokemon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 29 kB
Listed in Folders
The beginning part was and interesting little change of pace, how you getting all babied up was being done voluntarily for once. The bits about how you want to throw yourself into the lake after seeing what you look like were a nice touch. I think a bit of humor like that works well in your stories.
I'm really glad that the humor component worked out. I'll be trying to work it more into my stories to give them more flavor.
Willingly being babied is definitely a change from what I usually write, and honestly, I might do it again, it felt fresh to write in that way.
Thanks for the feedback, it'll really help me grow as a writer.
Willingly being babied is definitely a change from what I usually write, and honestly, I might do it again, it felt fresh to write in that way.
Thanks for the feedback, it'll really help me grow as a writer.
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