I probably should have done these in one-page installments in the first place...

The linework is a lot better here. I wish I could take credit for that but the truth is I had my friend take up the task of inking because I, as you saw/will see in comics 1 and 2, am a very bad inker. It was interesting having somebody else ink for me (they don't have an FA account else I'd credit them directly, but they do have a page on http://theguindo.deviantart.com/ ). Amusingly, I had to go back afterword and make changes because they draw a few things drastically different than I do, and I'd like to preserve my art style at least a little!