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Uploading this as just a sketch, in case anybody's able to offer critique. The poses have been giving me so much trouble.
This is an idea I had awhile back and was never able to successfully draw, then forgot about till now. A couple of people mentioned they like Susan, so I figured I'd try it again. I think I at least managed to get the general idea down, but there are probably issues with it.
If I can fix the issues with it, I'd kinda like to ink it and do at least some simple shading, so I can properly show Susan's eyes and mouth giving off light.
This is an idea I had awhile back and was never able to successfully draw, then forgot about till now. A couple of people mentioned they like Susan, so I figured I'd try it again. I think I at least managed to get the general idea down, but there are probably issues with it.
If I can fix the issues with it, I'd kinda like to ink it and do at least some simple shading, so I can properly show Susan's eyes and mouth giving off light.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Daemon
Size 908 x 600px
File Size 165.2 kB
Critique huh? Well, I know this was just a quick sketch so you probably didn't want to put too much effort into it. But Susan is missing a lot of definition here. He's too flat and missing some legs. Frank has got a better look here. especially her face and horns. I love the image and the poses though.
Well, he's in profile, so I figured two of his legs would be hidden behind the two that show? I always struggle with that, though...maybe if I made the background legs just barely visible next to the foreground legs it'd help without making it look no longer in profile?
I definitely forgot his eyebrows, now that I'm looking at it again, but not sure what other definition is missing.
Glad you think it looks good otherwise!
I definitely forgot his eyebrows, now that I'm looking at it again, but not sure what other definition is missing.
Glad you think it looks good otherwise!
This is precious!
Overall I think it looks fine! If I can think of anything critique-wise I'd be better off redlining it because I have a difficult time explaining stuff like this verbally. Though I think your anatomy skills are far superior to mine anyway. I'll note you with it later on!
Overall I think it looks fine! If I can think of anything critique-wise I'd be better off redlining it because I have a difficult time explaining stuff like this verbally. Though I think your anatomy skills are far superior to mine anyway. I'll note you with it later on!
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