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This is a sketch to Blitz~~!
crispr
He got enought bear points, so I drew his full form of valefor with spear.
►Character Info:
Hero name: Blitz Krieger
Species: bear/dragon
Height: 6ft
Weight:220lbs
Appearance: muscular build with white fur and icy blue eyes, muzzle of a bear eyes feet and hands of a dragons, short icy blue hair spiked back
Attire: eastern tibetan monk: royal blue gi with matching pants and a regular blue sash around his waist with a pauldron on his right shoulder
Abilities: Cryomancy and control of temperature, stagnation of time and slight dimensional warping using his ice, super stregnth and speed and flight, immortality
Hobbies: writing poetry meditating and gardening
Personality: kind gentle quiet reserved and patient
Weapon: Absolute Zero is his trusted spear similar to Gáe Buidhe used by lancer of Fate/zero only a light blue color pallet with a royal blue sash around it from his friend azinu
Background: abandoned as an infant blitz was found by a dragon named valefor who descended from the heavens and took pity on him as he too was alone cast out by the gods. Seeing the child near death he melded to the boy and raised him alone within his mind being his only friend and solace in the world isolated form people he realized he was immortal and now wishing only to find the comrade or a friend to make him whole again discovering he is the embodiment of wrath
The interesting dialogue is written by Pety~~!
petyaorlov2
Petya: yo Blitzy!~
Blitz: Petya its Blitz! not Blitzy!~
Petya: Blitzy sound cooler ehehe
Blitz: hrmph what do you want?
Petya: ehehee I have something rather more interesting than your magic
Blitz: what is it?
Petya: ehehe a stolen Moritaka speedo and Kamui speedo interested?
Blitz: ?! my... my puppies speedos?! where did you get them?~!
Petya: a certain "friend" ehehe interested?
Blitz: ....////////// maybe?
Petya: well since you not interested I won't sell it to you
Blitz: wha wait!! I do~! I do~!...////////
Petya: sure a nice $200 will do
Blitz: damn... that's agreeable... ok here
Petya: thank you!~ enjoy!~ ahaha *give the speedos and run*
Blitz: ....////// now what I should do with these speedos?
Kamui: FIND YOU SPEEDO THIEF!!
Moritaka: YOU WON'T GET AWAY YOU THIEF!!
Blitz: HEY I AIN'T THIEF! SOMEONE SELL THIS TO ME!~
Kamui: serve you right thief I don't care if you my friend YOU UNDER ARREST!
Moritaka: AND WE WILL PUNISH YOU!!!
Blitz: NOOOOO!!!!!
The original full story is written by Blitz~~!
crispr
A dragon among the heavens weeps over the earth covering the world in its snow and his anger forms the blizzards the gods look upon him as the youngest of the celestial dragons bent only as a tool to control the earths motions the young dragon sees the eyes of his father for the last time when he used his powe to save a new born child from being killed from his unwanted child
God: valefor why did you choose to save an life of a child
Valefor: it is not our place to control the mortality of the people but to protect them
God: you chose wrong my son.....I saw you for ages see the death of many by our hands but now you chose to save this infant why?
Valefor: he was innocent he is but a lonely one in this world with no love to be with him I just wanted to show him only sliver of it before he passed on
God: because of that the child will never enter our kingdom
Valefor: and why is that my father....?
God: it is not our will....
Valefor: that is not for you to choose for him!!!!
God: it was not your either but you chose to intervene what do you have in your mind that makes you think this way
Valefor: not in my mind but my heart to guide at least one child to a place where he can dream and hope!!!!!
God: enough.....I must see a punishment for you on Is matter
As Valefor leaves he peers through his pillars hearing the child crying for the embrace of someone as the snow falls
Valefor: If no one find you....you are sure to die....then I must make one decison on own
Flying below the heavens Valefor lands to the earth and wraps himself around the child nuzzling him against his chest
Valefor: shhhhhhh quiet child you are in my hands now.....rest and you shall feel the love of one if only for a moment
Valefor begins to tear as they drop on the child's face seeing him giggle and laugh opening his eyes to the dragon and puts his hands to his nose as he looks below and smiles for the first time himself
Valefor: dear little one I'm so glad you smile if not once....you need a name don't you how about.....blizzard that's good.....blizzard Krieger or blitz for s nickname do you like that precious one
The infant laughs as Valefor feels himself fading
Valefor: no....no.....please let me be with him just one minute longer......let him live father.....
God: it is not our will....now pay for your sin
Valefor: very well if not to save myself then for this child. Rest little one I shall end your sadness as best as I can
Placing his hands on the swaddle a light burst through the mountains as monks come seeing s blue child asleep on the snow banks and take him in as the boy walks and speaks he at the age of three is ignored and Hated among the monastery looking into the frozen pond he sees two gazing eyes peering to him and hears a voice
Valefor: my dear blitz....please know that I care for you with all of my heart and I shall guide you in the world but you House a curse within you that turns other love to wrath....I wish I could help you my dear little one....I will be here if you ever must escape your lonliness....I am so sorry my son
The parallel story is written by Lyon~~!
lorneLyon
It was a dark time in the land when Blitz stands on the rock looking out over the village.
He knew it... he knew he had to protect them, the one who where innosence, the one who weren't, the childeren, the adults, the elders.
He looked to his fingers, made of ice. After the accident, this weren't the same anymore. He had this powers, it was a curse and a relief.
The villagers had chased him away when they discover he could transform water and air into ice. They called him monster. But the thing that really broke his heart. He had saw his family standing in the crow, emotionless, doing nothing. That really broke his heart. But he knew it wasn't thier fault.
After that day, he was living in the woods. He had build himself an armor and weapon to protect himself against all the monsters living in the woods.
After a couple of weaks, he saw a baby dragon, being attacked by valtures. He saved the dragon and took him to his tree house to take care of him. After 1 year of care taking, he let the baby go, strong enough to go by himself.
But, a couple of weeks later, the dragon came back.
'Fear not, mighty protector. You saved my live. And I want to thank you by giving you my help in your fight. I know you protect your village, even if they chaged you away. I want to help you, To pay your back.'
From that day on, the two protect the village, thier fields and people against the danger of the forrest. They also protect the forest and try to keep the peace into it.
Blitz looked to the sun, who was slowely going under against the mountains. His dragon was flying into the air arround him.
'Do you see anything?': Blitz ask.
'Nothing on this moment. However I've heard the ogres of the north will try to attack the werewolves in the west.'
Blitz nooded. 'Time to try the new power I've teach myself yesterday. I hope this ice crystals will keep them away for a moment.'
'Where did you learn that?'
Blitz looked up into the air, his dragon looked back.
'You know you can tell me.': he said.
'I got into the village a couple of days ago and looked into the spell shop. They had a couple of great ice spells.'
'Why would a village like yours keep spells. They chaged you away for ice magic. They could have learn you the things they know.'
Blitz looked to the last beams of the moon.
'Your right, there must be another reason they didn't want me there.
The head of the dragon was floating next to Blitz's
'Let's find out together.'
The dialogue is written by Ryuga~~!
RyugaKuma
It was a long night after the battle. The Ice Claw been wounded but got taken to safety by his loyalty dragon
Ice Claw: wh...where am i ? *he laid in side a dark unknown cave by his dragon*. Did you take me to this cave ? *asked the dragon*
*the Dragon roawr calmly as for a yes*
Ice Claw: well and thank you for healing my wounds. *looking around aimlessly*
*the dragon help Ice Claw get up*
Ice Claw: thank you. Do you know where we are ?
*the dragon nervously roawr*
Ice Claw: well it won't hurt if we do a little exploring right ?
*the dragon stood up as both of them begin to walk deeper into the caves*
The story is written by Hack~~!
raionnochi
Cold... Those wind were always cold in this mountain, especially during the night, but Blitz didn't care it wasn't bothering him during his medication. After a really hard fight he had, his body needed to recover. It had been a long time, since he had to release that much power. The recovering will take some time, and no one will come and bother him here. It was too cold for any normal mortal, but he did thought of someone who could come here.
Valefor: "He's here."
Blitz immediately got up, and took our his spear.
Blitz: (I can't sense him... Where is he?)
Valefor: "It's hard to find a soulless being... but I know he's here."
Hack: "I'm just here."
Hack immediately appear in front of Blitz. Blitz jumped back, and point his spear in Hack's direction.
Blitz: "How did you find me?"
Hack show him the inside of the book he had in hand, but it was empty.
Blitz: "There is nothing written on it..."
Hack: "It's normal only some people can read them. This is your destiny... everything about you is written in it."
Blitz: "You use it to find me."
Hack nodded, closed the book, and it disappeared.
Blitz: "Are you here to continued the match?"
Hack: "No, there is no point to fight you anymore."
Blitz: "What do you mean?"
Hack: "The first fight, Death wanted to see if you were really a immortal. Second fight, I knew you didn't use all your strength, that why I came back. Now, there is no point for me to fight you."
Blitz: "You don't want to take my soul."
Hack: "You can't die, I can't take your souls, that's why your book is grey."
Blitz: "The book... my destiny..."
Hack: "All book have different color, Grey mean a indecisive ending. Your ending is not good, normal or bad."
Blitz: "I see..."
Blitz make his spear disappeared.
Hack: "Now that things are said, I must take my leave."
Hack was going to turn around.
Blitz: "Wait!"
Hack: "What?"
Blitz: "What about my people? Where are they?"
Hack: "Since they were soulless, they didn't go to heaven or hell, they will be no reincarnation for them."
It hurt Blitz to hear this, his people were gone, and they will never come back. He will again be alone.
Hack: "Other question?"
Blitz: "Yes... Do you know other immortal like me?"
Hack: "No. Even Gods aren't immortal, when the time come they must be replaced, and their souls will be reincarnated. Me too, when Death will no longer needs me, or grew bored of me, she will discarded me. Only her, can do this."
Blitz: "You don't care about that?"
Hack: "I do not care."
Blitz: "I have one last question... Will I see you again?"
Hack: "There is no need for us to see each other."
Blitz: "But..."
Hack: "Why would you want to see the one who kill your people?"
Blitz: "I do hate you for that, but... that's doesn't mean, I don't want to see you again."
Hack: "You don't make sense."
Blitz: "Yeah... I know. So... Will I see you again?"
Hack: "I cannot say."
Blitz: "Then... Next time we meet, let's talk, and not fight."
Valefor: "I'm actually for the fight part."
Blitz: (Shut up!)
Hack: "You really are making no sense, but sure."
Blitz: "Thanks."
Hack disappeared in a blink of a eyes, leaving Blitz alone. Blitz returned to his medication, wondering if he will meet his new "Friend" again.
This is a sketch to Blitz~~!
crisprHe got enought bear points, so I drew his full form of valefor with spear.
►Character Info:
Hero name: Blitz Krieger
Species: bear/dragon
Height: 6ft
Weight:220lbs
Appearance: muscular build with white fur and icy blue eyes, muzzle of a bear eyes feet and hands of a dragons, short icy blue hair spiked back
Attire: eastern tibetan monk: royal blue gi with matching pants and a regular blue sash around his waist with a pauldron on his right shoulder
Abilities: Cryomancy and control of temperature, stagnation of time and slight dimensional warping using his ice, super stregnth and speed and flight, immortality
Hobbies: writing poetry meditating and gardening
Personality: kind gentle quiet reserved and patient
Weapon: Absolute Zero is his trusted spear similar to Gáe Buidhe used by lancer of Fate/zero only a light blue color pallet with a royal blue sash around it from his friend azinu
Background: abandoned as an infant blitz was found by a dragon named valefor who descended from the heavens and took pity on him as he too was alone cast out by the gods. Seeing the child near death he melded to the boy and raised him alone within his mind being his only friend and solace in the world isolated form people he realized he was immortal and now wishing only to find the comrade or a friend to make him whole again discovering he is the embodiment of wrath
The interesting dialogue is written by Pety~~!
petyaorlov2Petya: yo Blitzy!~
Blitz: Petya its Blitz! not Blitzy!~
Petya: Blitzy sound cooler ehehe
Blitz: hrmph what do you want?
Petya: ehehee I have something rather more interesting than your magic
Blitz: what is it?
Petya: ehehe a stolen Moritaka speedo and Kamui speedo interested?
Blitz: ?! my... my puppies speedos?! where did you get them?~!
Petya: a certain "friend" ehehe interested?
Blitz: ....////////// maybe?
Petya: well since you not interested I won't sell it to you
Blitz: wha wait!! I do~! I do~!...////////
Petya: sure a nice $200 will do
Blitz: damn... that's agreeable... ok here
Petya: thank you!~ enjoy!~ ahaha *give the speedos and run*
Blitz: ....////// now what I should do with these speedos?
Kamui: FIND YOU SPEEDO THIEF!!
Moritaka: YOU WON'T GET AWAY YOU THIEF!!
Blitz: HEY I AIN'T THIEF! SOMEONE SELL THIS TO ME!~
Kamui: serve you right thief I don't care if you my friend YOU UNDER ARREST!
Moritaka: AND WE WILL PUNISH YOU!!!
Blitz: NOOOOO!!!!!
The original full story is written by Blitz~~!
crisprA dragon among the heavens weeps over the earth covering the world in its snow and his anger forms the blizzards the gods look upon him as the youngest of the celestial dragons bent only as a tool to control the earths motions the young dragon sees the eyes of his father for the last time when he used his powe to save a new born child from being killed from his unwanted child
God: valefor why did you choose to save an life of a child
Valefor: it is not our place to control the mortality of the people but to protect them
God: you chose wrong my son.....I saw you for ages see the death of many by our hands but now you chose to save this infant why?
Valefor: he was innocent he is but a lonely one in this world with no love to be with him I just wanted to show him only sliver of it before he passed on
God: because of that the child will never enter our kingdom
Valefor: and why is that my father....?
God: it is not our will....
Valefor: that is not for you to choose for him!!!!
God: it was not your either but you chose to intervene what do you have in your mind that makes you think this way
Valefor: not in my mind but my heart to guide at least one child to a place where he can dream and hope!!!!!
God: enough.....I must see a punishment for you on Is matter
As Valefor leaves he peers through his pillars hearing the child crying for the embrace of someone as the snow falls
Valefor: If no one find you....you are sure to die....then I must make one decison on own
Flying below the heavens Valefor lands to the earth and wraps himself around the child nuzzling him against his chest
Valefor: shhhhhhh quiet child you are in my hands now.....rest and you shall feel the love of one if only for a moment
Valefor begins to tear as they drop on the child's face seeing him giggle and laugh opening his eyes to the dragon and puts his hands to his nose as he looks below and smiles for the first time himself
Valefor: dear little one I'm so glad you smile if not once....you need a name don't you how about.....blizzard that's good.....blizzard Krieger or blitz for s nickname do you like that precious one
The infant laughs as Valefor feels himself fading
Valefor: no....no.....please let me be with him just one minute longer......let him live father.....
God: it is not our will....now pay for your sin
Valefor: very well if not to save myself then for this child. Rest little one I shall end your sadness as best as I can
Placing his hands on the swaddle a light burst through the mountains as monks come seeing s blue child asleep on the snow banks and take him in as the boy walks and speaks he at the age of three is ignored and Hated among the monastery looking into the frozen pond he sees two gazing eyes peering to him and hears a voice
Valefor: my dear blitz....please know that I care for you with all of my heart and I shall guide you in the world but you House a curse within you that turns other love to wrath....I wish I could help you my dear little one....I will be here if you ever must escape your lonliness....I am so sorry my son
The parallel story is written by Lyon~~!
lorneLyonIt was a dark time in the land when Blitz stands on the rock looking out over the village.
He knew it... he knew he had to protect them, the one who where innosence, the one who weren't, the childeren, the adults, the elders.
He looked to his fingers, made of ice. After the accident, this weren't the same anymore. He had this powers, it was a curse and a relief.
The villagers had chased him away when they discover he could transform water and air into ice. They called him monster. But the thing that really broke his heart. He had saw his family standing in the crow, emotionless, doing nothing. That really broke his heart. But he knew it wasn't thier fault.
After that day, he was living in the woods. He had build himself an armor and weapon to protect himself against all the monsters living in the woods.
After a couple of weaks, he saw a baby dragon, being attacked by valtures. He saved the dragon and took him to his tree house to take care of him. After 1 year of care taking, he let the baby go, strong enough to go by himself.
But, a couple of weeks later, the dragon came back.
'Fear not, mighty protector. You saved my live. And I want to thank you by giving you my help in your fight. I know you protect your village, even if they chaged you away. I want to help you, To pay your back.'
From that day on, the two protect the village, thier fields and people against the danger of the forrest. They also protect the forest and try to keep the peace into it.
Blitz looked to the sun, who was slowely going under against the mountains. His dragon was flying into the air arround him.
'Do you see anything?': Blitz ask.
'Nothing on this moment. However I've heard the ogres of the north will try to attack the werewolves in the west.'
Blitz nooded. 'Time to try the new power I've teach myself yesterday. I hope this ice crystals will keep them away for a moment.'
'Where did you learn that?'
Blitz looked up into the air, his dragon looked back.
'You know you can tell me.': he said.
'I got into the village a couple of days ago and looked into the spell shop. They had a couple of great ice spells.'
'Why would a village like yours keep spells. They chaged you away for ice magic. They could have learn you the things they know.'
Blitz looked to the last beams of the moon.
'Your right, there must be another reason they didn't want me there.
The head of the dragon was floating next to Blitz's
'Let's find out together.'
The dialogue is written by Ryuga~~!
RyugaKumaIt was a long night after the battle. The Ice Claw been wounded but got taken to safety by his loyalty dragon
Ice Claw: wh...where am i ? *he laid in side a dark unknown cave by his dragon*. Did you take me to this cave ? *asked the dragon*
*the Dragon roawr calmly as for a yes*
Ice Claw: well and thank you for healing my wounds. *looking around aimlessly*
*the dragon help Ice Claw get up*
Ice Claw: thank you. Do you know where we are ?
*the dragon nervously roawr*
Ice Claw: well it won't hurt if we do a little exploring right ?
*the dragon stood up as both of them begin to walk deeper into the caves*
The story is written by Hack~~!
raionnochiCold... Those wind were always cold in this mountain, especially during the night, but Blitz didn't care it wasn't bothering him during his medication. After a really hard fight he had, his body needed to recover. It had been a long time, since he had to release that much power. The recovering will take some time, and no one will come and bother him here. It was too cold for any normal mortal, but he did thought of someone who could come here.
Valefor: "He's here."
Blitz immediately got up, and took our his spear.
Blitz: (I can't sense him... Where is he?)
Valefor: "It's hard to find a soulless being... but I know he's here."
Hack: "I'm just here."
Hack immediately appear in front of Blitz. Blitz jumped back, and point his spear in Hack's direction.
Blitz: "How did you find me?"
Hack show him the inside of the book he had in hand, but it was empty.
Blitz: "There is nothing written on it..."
Hack: "It's normal only some people can read them. This is your destiny... everything about you is written in it."
Blitz: "You use it to find me."
Hack nodded, closed the book, and it disappeared.
Blitz: "Are you here to continued the match?"
Hack: "No, there is no point to fight you anymore."
Blitz: "What do you mean?"
Hack: "The first fight, Death wanted to see if you were really a immortal. Second fight, I knew you didn't use all your strength, that why I came back. Now, there is no point for me to fight you."
Blitz: "You don't want to take my soul."
Hack: "You can't die, I can't take your souls, that's why your book is grey."
Blitz: "The book... my destiny..."
Hack: "All book have different color, Grey mean a indecisive ending. Your ending is not good, normal or bad."
Blitz: "I see..."
Blitz make his spear disappeared.
Hack: "Now that things are said, I must take my leave."
Hack was going to turn around.
Blitz: "Wait!"
Hack: "What?"
Blitz: "What about my people? Where are they?"
Hack: "Since they were soulless, they didn't go to heaven or hell, they will be no reincarnation for them."
It hurt Blitz to hear this, his people were gone, and they will never come back. He will again be alone.
Hack: "Other question?"
Blitz: "Yes... Do you know other immortal like me?"
Hack: "No. Even Gods aren't immortal, when the time come they must be replaced, and their souls will be reincarnated. Me too, when Death will no longer needs me, or grew bored of me, she will discarded me. Only her, can do this."
Blitz: "You don't care about that?"
Hack: "I do not care."
Blitz: "I have one last question... Will I see you again?"
Hack: "There is no need for us to see each other."
Blitz: "But..."
Hack: "Why would you want to see the one who kill your people?"
Blitz: "I do hate you for that, but... that's doesn't mean, I don't want to see you again."
Hack: "You don't make sense."
Blitz: "Yeah... I know. So... Will I see you again?"
Hack: "I cannot say."
Blitz: "Then... Next time we meet, let's talk, and not fight."
Valefor: "I'm actually for the fight part."
Blitz: (Shut up!)
Hack: "You really are making no sense, but sure."
Blitz: "Thanks."
Hack disappeared in a blink of a eyes, leaving Blitz alone. Blitz returned to his medication, wondering if he will meet his new "Friend" again.
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Well, I've always imagined my fursona as a naturally born 'heir' to the powers of Egyptian Gods for his world (which is still a wip) and as such he can be like any normal wolf but with his inherited powers he can augment his abilities according to whatever god he attunes to presently For instance, attuned to Horus/Ra, he wields the power of holy light. Anubis, powers of darkness and death over enemies. Also in his world, the Egyptian god Maahes is re-imagined as the progenitor of all shamanistic powers as it is in Word of Warcraft, so elemental powers rest under that god. He just needs to attune himself to Maahes and he can wield earth, lightning, water, ice, fire and wind
EDIT: To avoid confusion, I should have said "the shamanistic powers of World of Warcraft" instead of what I did put
EDIT: To avoid confusion, I should have said "the shamanistic powers of World of Warcraft" instead of what I did put
freeze fire? ahaha here some hillarious story ehehe
Petya: yo Blitzy!~
Blitz: Petya its Blitz! not Blitzy!~
Petya: Blitzy sound cooler ehehe
Blitz: hrmph what do you want?
Petya: ehehee I have something rather more interesting than your magic
Blitz: what is it?
Petya: ehehe a stolen Moritaka speedo and Kamui speedo interested?
Blitz: ?! my... my puppies speedos?! where did you get them?~!
Petya: a certain "friend" ehehe interested?
Blitz: ....////////// maybe?
Petya: well since you not interested I won't sell it to you
Blitz: wha wait!! I do~! I do~!...////////
Petya: sure a nice $200 will do
Blitz: damn... that's agreeable... ok here
Petya: thank you!~ enjoy!~ ahaha *give the speedos and run*
Blitz: ....////// now what I should do with these speedos?
Kamui: FIND YOU SPEEDO THIEF!!
Moritaka: YOU WON'T GET AWAY YOU THIEF!!
Blitz: HEY I AIN'T THIEF! SOMEONE SELL THIS TO ME!~
Kamui: serve you right thief I don't care if you my friend YOU UNDER ARREST!
Moritaka: AND WE WILL PUNISH YOU!!!
Blitz: NOOOOO!!!!!
the end!~ lol
Petya: yo Blitzy!~
Blitz: Petya its Blitz! not Blitzy!~
Petya: Blitzy sound cooler ehehe
Blitz: hrmph what do you want?
Petya: ehehee I have something rather more interesting than your magic
Blitz: what is it?
Petya: ehehe a stolen Moritaka speedo and Kamui speedo interested?
Blitz: ?! my... my puppies speedos?! where did you get them?~!
Petya: a certain "friend" ehehe interested?
Blitz: ....////////// maybe?
Petya: well since you not interested I won't sell it to you
Blitz: wha wait!! I do~! I do~!...////////
Petya: sure a nice $200 will do
Blitz: damn... that's agreeable... ok here
Petya: thank you!~ enjoy!~ ahaha *give the speedos and run*
Blitz: ....////// now what I should do with these speedos?
Kamui: FIND YOU SPEEDO THIEF!!
Moritaka: YOU WON'T GET AWAY YOU THIEF!!
Blitz: HEY I AIN'T THIEF! SOMEONE SELL THIS TO ME!~
Kamui: serve you right thief I don't care if you my friend YOU UNDER ARREST!
Moritaka: AND WE WILL PUNISH YOU!!!
Blitz: NOOOOO!!!!!
the end!~ lol
A dragon among the heavens weeps over the earth covering the world in its snow and his anger forms the blizzards the gods look upon him as the youngest of the celestial dragons bent only as a tool to control the earths motions the young dragon sees the eyes of his father for the last time when he used his powe to save a new born child from being killed from his unwanted child
God: valefor why did you choose to save an life of a child
Valefor: it is not our place to control the mortality of the people but to protect them
God: you chose wrong my son.....I saw you for ages see the death of many by our hands but now you chose to save this infant why?
Valefor: he was innocent he is but a lonely one in this world with no love to be with him I just wanted to show him only sliver of it before he passed on
God: because of that the child will never enter our kingdom
Valefor: and why is that my father....?
God: it is not our will....
Valefor: that is not for you to choose for him!!!!
God: it was not your either but you chose to intervene what do you have in your mind that makes you think this way
Valefor: not in my mind but my heart to guide at least one child to a place where he can dream and hope!!!!!
God: enough.....I must see a punishment for you on Is matter
As Valefor leaves he peers through his pillars hearing the child crying for the embrace of someone as the snow falls
Valefor: If no one find you....you are sure to die....then I must make one decison on own
Flying below the heavens Valefor lands to the earth and wraps himself around the child nuzzling him against his chest
Valefor: shhhhhhh quiet child you are in my hands now.....rest and you shall feel the love of one if only for a moment
Valefor begins to tear as they drop on the child's face seeing him giggle and laugh opening his eyes to the dragon and puts his hands to his nose as he looks below and smiles for the first time himself
Valefor: dear little one I'm so glad you smile if not once....you need a name don't you how about.....blizzard that's good.....blizzard Krieger or blitz for s nickname do you like that precious one
The infant laughs as Valefor feels himself fading
Valefor: no....no.....please let me be with him just one minute longer......let him live father.....
God: it is not our will....now pay for your sin
Valefor: very well if not to save myself then for this child. Rest little one I shall end your sadness as best as I can
Placing his hands on the swaddle a light burst through the mountains as monks come seeing s blue child asleep on the snow banks and take him in as the boy walks and speaks he at the age of three is ignored and Hated among the monastery looking into the frozen pond he sees two gazing eyes peering to him and hears a voice
Valefor: my dear blitz....please know that I care for you with all of my heart and I shall guide you in the world but you House a curse within you that turns other love to wrath....I wish I could help you my dear little one....I will be here if you ever must escape your lonliness....I am so sorry my son
God: valefor why did you choose to save an life of a child
Valefor: it is not our place to control the mortality of the people but to protect them
God: you chose wrong my son.....I saw you for ages see the death of many by our hands but now you chose to save this infant why?
Valefor: he was innocent he is but a lonely one in this world with no love to be with him I just wanted to show him only sliver of it before he passed on
God: because of that the child will never enter our kingdom
Valefor: and why is that my father....?
God: it is not our will....
Valefor: that is not for you to choose for him!!!!
God: it was not your either but you chose to intervene what do you have in your mind that makes you think this way
Valefor: not in my mind but my heart to guide at least one child to a place where he can dream and hope!!!!!
God: enough.....I must see a punishment for you on Is matter
As Valefor leaves he peers through his pillars hearing the child crying for the embrace of someone as the snow falls
Valefor: If no one find you....you are sure to die....then I must make one decison on own
Flying below the heavens Valefor lands to the earth and wraps himself around the child nuzzling him against his chest
Valefor: shhhhhhh quiet child you are in my hands now.....rest and you shall feel the love of one if only for a moment
Valefor begins to tear as they drop on the child's face seeing him giggle and laugh opening his eyes to the dragon and puts his hands to his nose as he looks below and smiles for the first time himself
Valefor: dear little one I'm so glad you smile if not once....you need a name don't you how about.....blizzard that's good.....blizzard Krieger or blitz for s nickname do you like that precious one
The infant laughs as Valefor feels himself fading
Valefor: no....no.....please let me be with him just one minute longer......let him live father.....
God: it is not our will....now pay for your sin
Valefor: very well if not to save myself then for this child. Rest little one I shall end your sadness as best as I can
Placing his hands on the swaddle a light burst through the mountains as monks come seeing s blue child asleep on the snow banks and take him in as the boy walks and speaks he at the age of three is ignored and Hated among the monastery looking into the frozen pond he sees two gazing eyes peering to him and hears a voice
Valefor: my dear blitz....please know that I care for you with all of my heart and I shall guide you in the world but you House a curse within you that turns other love to wrath....I wish I could help you my dear little one....I will be here if you ever must escape your lonliness....I am so sorry my son
The epic and touching story is like the melodious melodies of a violin.
From this story we can understand the process before Blitz was born
But I want to know, where did Valefor go when the monks found Blitz?
Anyway, another great story , due to you were rewarded, you bear points would be reset.
But I decide to give you discount, you can begin from 3BP in next round.
BP: 3
From this story we can understand the process before Blitz was born
But I want to know, where did Valefor go when the monks found Blitz?
Anyway, another great story , due to you were rewarded, you bear points would be reset.
But I decide to give you discount, you can begin from 3BP in next round.
BP: 3
It was a dark time in the land when Blitz stands on the rock looking out over the village.
He knew it... he knew he had to protect them, the one who where innosence, the one who weren't, the childeren, the adults, the elders.
He looked to his fingers, made of ice. After the accident, this weren't the same anymore. He had this powers, it was a curse and a relief.
The villagers had chased him away when they discover he could transform water and air into ice. They called him monster. But the thing that really broke his heart. He had saw his family standing in the crow, emotionless, doing nothing. That really broke his heart. But he knew it wasn't thier fault.
After that day, he was living in the woods. He had build himself an armor and weapon to protect himself against all the monsters living in the woods.
After a couple of weaks, he saw a baby dragon, being attacked by valtures. He saved the dragon and took him to his tree house to take care of him. After 1 year of care taking, he let the baby go, strong enough to go by himself.
But, a couple of weeks later, the dragon came back.
'Fear not, mighty protector. You saved my live. And I want to thank you by giving you my help in your fight. I know you protect your village, even if they chaged you away. I want to help you, To pay your back.'
From that day on, the two protect the village, thier fields and people against the danger of the forrest. They also protect the forest and try to keep the peace into it.
Blitz looked to the sun, who was slowely going under against the mountains. His dragon was flying into the air arround him.
'Do you see anything?': Blitz ask.
'Nothing on this moment. However I've heard the ogres of the north will try to attack the werewolves in the west.'
Blitz nooded. 'Time to try the new power I've teach myself yesterday. I hope this ice crystals will keep them away for a moment.'
'Where did you learn that?'
Blitz looked up into the air, his dragon looked back.
'You know you can tell me.': he said.
'I got into the village a couple of days ago and looked into the spell shop. They had a couple of great ice spells.'
'Why would a village like yours keep spells. They chaged you away for ice magic. They could have learn you the things they know.'
Blitz looked to the last beams of the moon.
'Your right, there must be another reason they didn't want me there.
The head of the dragon was floating next to Blitz's
'Let's find out together.'
He knew it... he knew he had to protect them, the one who where innosence, the one who weren't, the childeren, the adults, the elders.
He looked to his fingers, made of ice. After the accident, this weren't the same anymore. He had this powers, it was a curse and a relief.
The villagers had chased him away when they discover he could transform water and air into ice. They called him monster. But the thing that really broke his heart. He had saw his family standing in the crow, emotionless, doing nothing. That really broke his heart. But he knew it wasn't thier fault.
After that day, he was living in the woods. He had build himself an armor and weapon to protect himself against all the monsters living in the woods.
After a couple of weaks, he saw a baby dragon, being attacked by valtures. He saved the dragon and took him to his tree house to take care of him. After 1 year of care taking, he let the baby go, strong enough to go by himself.
But, a couple of weeks later, the dragon came back.
'Fear not, mighty protector. You saved my live. And I want to thank you by giving you my help in your fight. I know you protect your village, even if they chaged you away. I want to help you, To pay your back.'
From that day on, the two protect the village, thier fields and people against the danger of the forrest. They also protect the forest and try to keep the peace into it.
Blitz looked to the sun, who was slowely going under against the mountains. His dragon was flying into the air arround him.
'Do you see anything?': Blitz ask.
'Nothing on this moment. However I've heard the ogres of the north will try to attack the werewolves in the west.'
Blitz nooded. 'Time to try the new power I've teach myself yesterday. I hope this ice crystals will keep them away for a moment.'
'Where did you learn that?'
Blitz looked up into the air, his dragon looked back.
'You know you can tell me.': he said.
'I got into the village a couple of days ago and looked into the spell shop. They had a couple of great ice spells.'
'Why would a village like yours keep spells. They chaged you away for ice magic. They could have learn you the things they know.'
Blitz looked to the last beams of the moon.
'Your right, there must be another reason they didn't want me there.
The head of the dragon was floating next to Blitz's
'Let's find out together.'
As a parallel world story
I think you wrote a very detailed and clear description of the ins and outs
I'm curious about the spell shop
In your story, the owner of the spell shop is definitely not an ordinary guy. XD
Also want to know if you had a powerful ice magic, what would you do?
Thanks for writing, you can get 1 bear point~~!
BP:8
I think you wrote a very detailed and clear description of the ins and outs
I'm curious about the spell shop
In your story, the owner of the spell shop is definitely not an ordinary guy. XD
Also want to know if you had a powerful ice magic, what would you do?
Thanks for writing, you can get 1 bear point~~!
BP:8
So... I don't know, if I respect the way Blitz must act, I tried my best, so... hope you will like it. (You too, Bear!)
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Cold... Those wind were always cold in this mountain, especially during the night, but Blitz didn't care it wasn't bothering him during his medication. After a really hard fight he had, his body needed to recover. It had been a long time, since he had to release that much power. The recovering will take some time, and no one will come and bother him here. It was too cold for any normal mortal, but he did thought of someone who could come here.
Valefor: "He's here."
Blitz immediately got up, and took our his spear.
Blitz: (I can't sense him... Where is he?)
Valefor: "It's hard to find a soulless being... but I know he's here."
Hack: "I'm just here."
Hack immediately appear in front of Blitz. Blitz jumped back, and point his spear in Hack's direction.
Blitz: "How did you find me?"
Hack show him the inside of the book he had in hand, but it was empty.
Blitz: "There is nothing written on it..."
Hack: "It's normal only some people can read them. This is your destiny... everything about you is written in it."
Blitz: "You use it to find me."
Hack nodded, closed the book, and it disappeared.
Blitz: "Are you here to continued the match?"
Hack: "No, there is no point to fight you anymore."
Blitz: "What do you mean?"
Hack: "The first fight, Death wanted to see if you were really a immortal. Second fight, I knew you didn't use all your strength, that why I came back. Now, there is no point for me to fight you."
Blitz: "You don't want to take my soul."
Hack: "You can't die, I can't take your souls, that's why your book is grey."
Blitz: "The book... my destiny..."
Hack: "All book have different color, Grey mean a indecisive ending. Your ending is not good, normal or bad."
Blitz: "I see..."
Blitz make his spear disappeared.
Hack: "Now that things are said, I must take my leave."
Hack was going to turn around.
Blitz: "Wait!"
Hack: "What?"
Blitz: "What about my people? Where are they?"
Hack: "Since they were soulless, they didn't go to heaven or hell, they will be no reincarnation for them."
It hurt Blitz to hear this, his people were gone, and they will never come back. He will again be alone.
Hack: "Other question?"
Blitz: "Yes... Do you know other immortal like me?"
Hack: "No. Even Gods aren't immortal, when the time come they must be replaced, and their souls will be reincarnated. Me too, when Death will no longer needs me, or grew bored of me, she will discarded me. Only her, can do this."
Blitz: "You don't care about that?"
Hack: "I do not care."
Blitz: "I have one last question... Will I see you again?"
Hack: "There is no need for us to see each other."
Blitz: "But..."
Hack: "Why would you want to see the one who kill your people?"
Blitz: "I do hate you for that, but... that's doesn't mean, I don't want to see you again."
Hack: "You don't make sense."
Blitz: "Yeah... I know. So... Will I see you again?"
Hack: "I cannot say."
Blitz: "Then... Next time we meet, let's talk, and not fight."
Valefor: "I'm actually for the fight part."
Blitz: (Shut up!)
Hack: "You really are making no sense, but sure."
Blitz: "Thanks."
Hack disappeared in a blink of a eyes, leaving Blitz alone. Blitz returned to his medication, wondering if he will meet his new "Friend" again.
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Cold... Those wind were always cold in this mountain, especially during the night, but Blitz didn't care it wasn't bothering him during his medication. After a really hard fight he had, his body needed to recover. It had been a long time, since he had to release that much power. The recovering will take some time, and no one will come and bother him here. It was too cold for any normal mortal, but he did thought of someone who could come here.
Valefor: "He's here."
Blitz immediately got up, and took our his spear.
Blitz: (I can't sense him... Where is he?)
Valefor: "It's hard to find a soulless being... but I know he's here."
Hack: "I'm just here."
Hack immediately appear in front of Blitz. Blitz jumped back, and point his spear in Hack's direction.
Blitz: "How did you find me?"
Hack show him the inside of the book he had in hand, but it was empty.
Blitz: "There is nothing written on it..."
Hack: "It's normal only some people can read them. This is your destiny... everything about you is written in it."
Blitz: "You use it to find me."
Hack nodded, closed the book, and it disappeared.
Blitz: "Are you here to continued the match?"
Hack: "No, there is no point to fight you anymore."
Blitz: "What do you mean?"
Hack: "The first fight, Death wanted to see if you were really a immortal. Second fight, I knew you didn't use all your strength, that why I came back. Now, there is no point for me to fight you."
Blitz: "You don't want to take my soul."
Hack: "You can't die, I can't take your souls, that's why your book is grey."
Blitz: "The book... my destiny..."
Hack: "All book have different color, Grey mean a indecisive ending. Your ending is not good, normal or bad."
Blitz: "I see..."
Blitz make his spear disappeared.
Hack: "Now that things are said, I must take my leave."
Hack was going to turn around.
Blitz: "Wait!"
Hack: "What?"
Blitz: "What about my people? Where are they?"
Hack: "Since they were soulless, they didn't go to heaven or hell, they will be no reincarnation for them."
It hurt Blitz to hear this, his people were gone, and they will never come back. He will again be alone.
Hack: "Other question?"
Blitz: "Yes... Do you know other immortal like me?"
Hack: "No. Even Gods aren't immortal, when the time come they must be replaced, and their souls will be reincarnated. Me too, when Death will no longer needs me, or grew bored of me, she will discarded me. Only her, can do this."
Blitz: "You don't care about that?"
Hack: "I do not care."
Blitz: "I have one last question... Will I see you again?"
Hack: "There is no need for us to see each other."
Blitz: "But..."
Hack: "Why would you want to see the one who kill your people?"
Blitz: "I do hate you for that, but... that's doesn't mean, I don't want to see you again."
Hack: "You don't make sense."
Blitz: "Yeah... I know. So... Will I see you again?"
Hack: "I cannot say."
Blitz: "Then... Next time we meet, let's talk, and not fight."
Valefor: "I'm actually for the fight part."
Blitz: (Shut up!)
Hack: "You really are making no sense, but sure."
Blitz: "Thanks."
Hack disappeared in a blink of a eyes, leaving Blitz alone. Blitz returned to his medication, wondering if he will meet his new "Friend" again.
Compared to Hack, Blitz shows more of his emotional side in your story.
Blitz is no longer hidden in the mysterious storm. He is lonely and eager for any friends.
Even if the guy he faced was a feelingless soul executor,Hack, Blitz still didn't give up any possibility of negotiation
As for both of your meeting , I hope so.XD
I'm not sure if I would draw this status of Blitz's again,
also your wishes are also a key factor that affects whether Hack will reappear or not.
so I can only say about these three meets between your two....just like destiny.XD
anyway, good story, you can get 1 bear point~~!
BP:7
Blitz is no longer hidden in the mysterious storm. He is lonely and eager for any friends.
Even if the guy he faced was a feelingless soul executor,Hack, Blitz still didn't give up any possibility of negotiation
As for both of your meeting , I hope so.XD
I'm not sure if I would draw this status of Blitz's again,
also your wishes are also a key factor that affects whether Hack will reappear or not.
so I can only say about these three meets between your two....just like destiny.XD
anyway, good story, you can get 1 bear point~~!
BP:7
It was a long night after the battle. The Ice Claw been wounded but got taken to safety by his loyalty dragon
Ice Claw: wh...where am i ? *he laid in side a dark unknown cave by his dragon*. Did you take me to this cave ? *asked the dragon*
*the Dragon roawr calmly as for a yes*
Ice Claw: well and thank you for healing my wounds. *looking around aimlessly*
*the dragon help Ice Claw get up*
Ice Claw: thank you. Do you know where we are ?
*the dragon nervously roawr*
Ice Claw: well it won't hurt if we do a little exploring right ?
*the dragon stood up as both of them begin to walk deeper into the caves*
Ice Claw: wh...where am i ? *he laid in side a dark unknown cave by his dragon*. Did you take me to this cave ? *asked the dragon*
*the Dragon roawr calmly as for a yes*
Ice Claw: well and thank you for healing my wounds. *looking around aimlessly*
*the dragon help Ice Claw get up*
Ice Claw: thank you. Do you know where we are ?
*the dragon nervously roawr*
Ice Claw: well it won't hurt if we do a little exploring right ?
*the dragon stood up as both of them begin to walk deeper into the caves*
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