Yay updates!
Also good for Mori, poor guy needed something good, and I am glad that Olivander recognized that Mori was trying, and doing pretty good really, all things considered.

Indeed, he did a nice save on a situation that could have gone really bad.
The yinglet just dosen´t understand why the old man rewards him for such an action " He cant quite see the depth of it all" But no one is perfect!

Thats understandable. I figure Mori is not that old, so hes not got a whole lot of experence as yet. Honestly Mori did really really well in being able to control himself and step out into the the siduation, and he did a very good job in dealing with it. Kinda fits whith what I thought before, he was started, not so much scared, then it took him a little to overcome the startle responce. Most Yinglets would have run, its a servival thing, not even something most can control. (I am including humans in that, we got some of thoes too) Hes being reworded for a few reasons I expect. One, being honest enough to be confused about being asked if he was faking his responce. Two, Olivander recognized, if you will, someone who wants to do the right thing, and wants to learn and be good at something. Mori did better than he expected with getting this job thats for sure, and I expect that Mori is going to be meeting more of the excusive customers that visit the shop as well.

First day as an apprentice was not so bad and the next day will be the first full day of apprenticeship. Looks like he proved himself well. But now he got out just in time to see something interesting. Is it a new character or something that beautiful that marks understandably marks it as his first day he got to work in a store.

Yea, all in all it was a good day! But what could this display be?

Wall of text!!! Which happens to be on the marble floor, covered in text! I see what you did there! Floor of text!

Bingo! 1+ clam for you.
Have recived some feedback on the amount of text on this one.
Will be tuned down to are more manageable amount for people to read.

It looks like the crowd are watching the gates of oblivion opening up. Time for Mori'rai to get roped into some shenanigans.

But aren't oblivion gates orange and red? There are definitely some mischiefs going on if they have gone green!
How well would a yinglet wear daedric armor?

Nice storytelling, and your environments and poses seem to take leaps forward with each page! Keep at it, man.

Thanks!
I have received some meaningful critique as well that I am looking into, as to iimprove further.

That's definitely the way to do it! It's ironic that the more that you are able to see the things that are *wrong* with what you've drawn, the faster you will improve! So one of the most useful things you can do is ask other people to tell you WHAT IS WRONG/BAD WITH WHAT YOU SPENT TIME AND EFFORT ON.

It's because of this that the artists who see everything that's wrong and they don't like about something they've drawn actually have the ability to improve the quickest, but seeing every little thing wrong with what you've done ALSO tends to make these types of people feel like they're just failing, and get discouraged.

It's complicated!

Well, I've fallen in love with this story

I´m so happy to hear that!
More is on its way!

I'm very much enjoying how the story is progressing. Your yinglet is adorable. Also, glad my suggestion helped.

It looks much better than a long link. Now I just have to make it likewise on all the other pages at some point.
The story is "hopefully" only getting more interesting from now on.

Oh yes, quite interesting. Your art is quite good also. Wish I was as good.

For a moment, I thought the crowd was clapping for Mori not getting thrown out of Mr. Yorkstead's shop for so many hours. ;)

I´d say that´s certainly a reason for applause. So I understand why you thought of that XD