First two for . Er..the one for Nyry I will totally fix when I trace it onto another card :V Needs to be moved up and to the right, you'll be able to see his right paw on his hip. I like the black stripe idea on Tamara, starting at the nose and going all the way over and down to her tail. I hope I got these two looking properly as I didn't have anything visual to go by! :)

The third one is for commissioned by I think this one could stand to be rotated just a teeny bit clockwise for a more realistic pose, other than that I'm happy with it :3