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SHe seems to have convinced him, and he's set her free... that look on her face isnt' making him terribly comfortable... neither is the lip-licking...
he DID call it :O
he DID call it :O
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 989 x 1280px
File Size 142.8 kB
Min! I just finished reading the first three pages and I've got to say I'm really impressed!
First of all I really think the character design has a lot going for it, and I'm glad you cave us a picture portrait of her before the comic started. The name is sufficiently completely impossible to pronounce, which always seemed fitting to me for demonic characters. Plus, it's great to see someone using less popular species like goats. I will say though, it might just be because of the hooves but her legs seem very skinny in comparison to the rest of her body in the portrait picture. Finally, I have to say those horns entwining in on themselves look completely awesome but have got to be very difficult to draw. I'm still glad you went with the design though, because it looks so cool.
For the comic itself: I really like the lighting effects in the first page, especially the final panel. How did you pull off that kind of lighting there with a sketch? Is that really light, really careful erasing? I also think it does a good job leading to the second page. Having a splash page right after something dramatic (like to door opening) is a very effective technique and I'm glad you were able to pull it off so well. I had difficulty determining between belly and boobs like
BH5432 but I like the distressed look on Lili's face.
Also, as the last page clearly shows this guy has either never seen any horror movies in his entire life, or (judging from the light blush when we see his face, which is a nice touch by the way) he's just too eager to care. I really like the close-ups on Lili here, it's great to see how her expression changes as soon as she's free. I think you had some nice fur effects on Lili's face, like her chin and ears, not to mention those horns really look fantastic. In fact, between the horns and the sneaker here I've got to say I think you're really good at showing a curved surface using foreshortening.
And like everyone else said, if she's been stuck backed up down there for days I can't wait to see what happens next when she's released. ^^
Oh, before I forget! The self-referential text box narration made me laugh too, it's funny to see he knows he's screwed.
As a small side note, I'm just wondering if you got the email I sent you a few days back.
Thanks a lot for sharing your work, Min! I really hope everything's going okay for you, I know you're going through ups and downs (I hope your mouse didn't disintegrate or anything!) but I hope you come out on top. Good luck with everything!
First of all I really think the character design has a lot going for it, and I'm glad you cave us a picture portrait of her before the comic started. The name is sufficiently completely impossible to pronounce, which always seemed fitting to me for demonic characters. Plus, it's great to see someone using less popular species like goats. I will say though, it might just be because of the hooves but her legs seem very skinny in comparison to the rest of her body in the portrait picture. Finally, I have to say those horns entwining in on themselves look completely awesome but have got to be very difficult to draw. I'm still glad you went with the design though, because it looks so cool.
For the comic itself: I really like the lighting effects in the first page, especially the final panel. How did you pull off that kind of lighting there with a sketch? Is that really light, really careful erasing? I also think it does a good job leading to the second page. Having a splash page right after something dramatic (like to door opening) is a very effective technique and I'm glad you were able to pull it off so well. I had difficulty determining between belly and boobs like
BH5432 but I like the distressed look on Lili's face.Also, as the last page clearly shows this guy has either never seen any horror movies in his entire life, or (judging from the light blush when we see his face, which is a nice touch by the way) he's just too eager to care. I really like the close-ups on Lili here, it's great to see how her expression changes as soon as she's free. I think you had some nice fur effects on Lili's face, like her chin and ears, not to mention those horns really look fantastic. In fact, between the horns and the sneaker here I've got to say I think you're really good at showing a curved surface using foreshortening.
And like everyone else said, if she's been stuck backed up down there for days I can't wait to see what happens next when she's released. ^^
Oh, before I forget! The self-referential text box narration made me laugh too, it's funny to see he knows he's screwed.
As a small side note, I'm just wondering if you got the email I sent you a few days back.
Thanks a lot for sharing your work, Min! I really hope everything's going okay for you, I know you're going through ups and downs (I hope your mouse didn't disintegrate or anything!) but I hope you come out on top. Good luck with everything!
oh boy, that's quite a post XD
um.. lessee...
First off: I fuckin' looove goats :O they're teh hawtness. the end. Her horns are a BIIITCH D:> but they look fuckin' kickass when I get done, so it's ok :3
and yes, her legs are really thin - this is because goats have thin legs x3
if it doesn't seem logical, just brush it off on the fact that she's a demon
The lighting effects were achieved through simply darkening the entire panel with hatching, then using the eraser on my pencil (I have a mechanical pencil - the eraser is tiny) to take little strokes. they were far from careful x3
I was originally planning on having her on the first page, but I thought about it.. and I didn't like it. I was also considering having the entire story building up to it... but I think that might have thrown it off, or made it boring.
It's sort of a mixed bag of what he's feeling x3 he's prolly scared shitless, and sporting a stiffy x3 boobs that big are good at that :O
and I dunno how you could mistake it really o3o she doesn't even have much of a belly, and the folds wouldn't be right anyway.
I think I suck at foreshortening :O
and yes :3 I love me some narration. Hopefully I'll have more of this tonight :O
um.. lessee...
First off: I fuckin' looove goats :O they're teh hawtness. the end. Her horns are a BIIITCH D:> but they look fuckin' kickass when I get done, so it's ok :3
and yes, her legs are really thin - this is because goats have thin legs x3
if it doesn't seem logical, just brush it off on the fact that she's a demon
The lighting effects were achieved through simply darkening the entire panel with hatching, then using the eraser on my pencil (I have a mechanical pencil - the eraser is tiny) to take little strokes. they were far from careful x3
I was originally planning on having her on the first page, but I thought about it.. and I didn't like it. I was also considering having the entire story building up to it... but I think that might have thrown it off, or made it boring.
It's sort of a mixed bag of what he's feeling x3 he's prolly scared shitless, and sporting a stiffy x3 boobs that big are good at that :O
and I dunno how you could mistake it really o3o she doesn't even have much of a belly, and the folds wouldn't be right anyway.
I think I suck at foreshortening :O
and yes :3 I love me some narration. Hopefully I'll have more of this tonight :O
Plenty of mugshots in this one, many delicious demonic mugshots to say the least :9 All very lively and detailed to boot, you really did a nice job in giving the characters their personality with this one. Certainly without saying you did a wonderful job on giving Lili that often expected ability of being able to feign innocence, well as well as a talking goat maintained in a prison can feign such, before partially reveling their true demeanor. I certainly am looking intently forward to more details and hopefully the completion of what our goat gal here has in mind for our "protagonist".
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