Awww o3o i think it looks pretty good! I really like the idea and think it turned out super awesome! ^3^ i love the thought of something scurrying around in your clothing yea cant get at and tickling yea like mad XD and i think you showed it really well! o3o also that last panel is great XD

Well thank you, but I really think the lineart is terrible. Just ugly and sloppy. I don't even know what happened; I was so excited about this one. :(

x3 ill concede its a bit more cartoony feeling than some of your works, but i think it fits the scene super well! but i know better than to try and argue to hard with an artist that dont think they did good >3<; ill just say i hope your next one is more up to your own standards ^3^ and say ill like this one all the same cause I think its good >3<

Thanks. That helps. But really, though, I'm actually very upset and sad about this.

offers hug as not sure what else to do the only think id say is try again if its this upsetting, but i dont know if you have the time or energy to do a idea again >3<; its fully up to you but if its getting you down this hard id do it, i feel a fresh sheet might just help in making it all the better, if that's possible x3

I don't have the time or energy to do it again, but I'd like to. :) Thanks.

^3^ then id be happy with what you have, even if you dont think its your best, im sure you wont get any complaints from either of them and just a lot of love for it in general X3 and just do your best to improve :3 that's all any of use can do in the time we got right? X3

Awwww poor Donna but is her fault for being always barefoot is a really good comic i like it

Thank you. :)

I have to ask a commission from you too soon, i love how you draw

Well, thanks. I'm happy with the expressions, but I think it came out messy otherwise.

cute XD

Nice job!

Thanks man. :)

This comic reminds of older cartoon/anime tickle scenes. It looks great, in my opinion, Sketch.

That means a lot. Appreciate it.

I can see what you mean with not liking it, but still while reading and looking through the whole comic, I couldnt help but grin like an idiot because of how adorable Donna is here. The expression are pure gold and I'm sure both of em will still love it ^^

Thank you. :)

i love the layout you used for the individual panels

Thank you!

Well, ya knew the risks when ya took the job, didn't ya?

She did. XD

Too god damn cute sir. :D A fun idea executed wonderfully in your style! :D

Thank you, but...I really have no idea why people are reacting so positively to this thing. It looks terrible.

Sketch , i don't comment nearly enough on peoples work as i should so amma gonna do one now, frame it.

Honestly i get it, everytime i get something done ( whenever that is ) i look at it and say , thats garbage but i'll post it anyway, i worked too hard on it to go to waste. To my surprise people enjoy it so i keep doing it even tough in my eyes everything could have been better. So don't get discouraged or angry, every artist has it and many more will have it aswel. Just keep doing it unril you can say, damn this is a fine piece of art.

Now for my opinion i have to say you have tons of awsome works including this one. I am amazed on how you can get these done. I would have quited halfway, it's so mutch work but honestly i love these type of things. The i get an image done but it sorta has a small comic in itto tell whats going on thing. I enjoy single image works but i realy like stuff that tells a little visual story on how it happend and what after. So you rock at this and hope you keep on doing these sort of things. I can understand it's a ton of work but it looks just great.

So peaking of this piece i can say it's goddamn well done and can't find anything to crap about, i can't just see it whats wrong with it and yes it may be childish but it looks great and fun.

Now tell me, what is it YOU find so terrible about it??

Also, has anyone perhaps mentioned that saving in PNG would be better?? I do that and looks great. I mean jpg's have these sorta blurry and smudges here and there sometimes but i don't see it here. Or whas that with tga??

XD

It's something every artist goes through. But in this case, I'm more upset by the possibility of disappointing friends than anything else. Thank you, I'll try.

Seriously, thank you so much. You're right, it's a lot of work and it's easier to get discouraged with projects like this than with single image drawings.

It's the linework, mostly. I think it's too scribbly and rough-looking. It lacks sharpness and refinement. I think.

I just reuploaded with a PNG and couldn't really see a difference. Maybe it's just me, I don't know. Do PNG files typically work better?

Indeed. Well i think that you do your best and if they have a remark on comment about it then i am shure they would point that out. Plus there is nothing wrong with that , you learn thrue working on it and feedback ( altough thats very rare ) So yea it might dissapoint but on the other hand then you know what to improve next time.

I whas thinking , perhaps don't do it all one one shot or in one go, most don't have the time for it anyway. Perhaps piece by piece would be a lot better, it's slower but am guessing that after one image and then rest a day the next one would be as good as the other since you are back in full focus. On the other hand sometimes you are so on a roll you could finish it.

Thats what you have sometimes with lineworks, you doodle a bit first to get everything in place and then go back over it harder but it doesen't always work out or get the lines you wanted. Either way it looks fine to me.
Plus i like the little extras like the very light laughter tekst aswel as the effects on some events.

Hmm i looked it up a little and seems not. You only have to watch out for saving multiple times on jpegs. Here is a short explenation http://www.artpromotivate.com/2012/.....al-images.html

Well i've been drawing a long time and i used to have bad images in the past but now everything gets better and updated so i don't think these days you would have a bad image file types.

Well hopefully so. XD

I tend to need breaks on stuff like this, most of the time. Sometimes I power through stuff, but I'm not that motivated. lol

Thank you; I'm glad you like how it turned out.
Oh yeah, I'll be careful about that.

You would think, but you know...computers.

No need to be so hard on yourself ♥
This is great, and such an adorable idea! ♥♥

Aw thank you. :)

Sooo adorable!

And about the description...
I dare to say I have a different and quite positive opinion about this piece here.

Thanks; appreciate that. It means a lot.