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Fumoricisa dragons - Detailed Sketch Page
Constructive criticism is welcomed,
let me know the bad and good I did here.
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Sketched more Fumors in different poses.
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Art © me 2018
Species: Fumoricisa © me
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 1024 x 725px
File Size 157.9 kB
The only issue I really see is the head being too big in each of the sketches, even the small ones, though the head is closest to a proper size on the solo 'outstretched' 'Fumor' and on the 'Fumor' dangling/coiled around the other outstretched 'Fumor'.
I checked other submissions in your gallery because I didn't want to make mention of the heads if it was intentional, and while it appears to be on the focal 'Fumor', the others less so and it does appear to be a reoccurring thing in your artwork of quadrupedal creatures (said thing being over-sized heads)
Edit:// In terms of what you've done well, for being 'sketches' these are very tidy and putting the head size aside the anatomy is consistent and pleasant to the eye. :)
I checked other submissions in your gallery because I didn't want to make mention of the heads if it was intentional, and while it appears to be on the focal 'Fumor', the others less so and it does appear to be a reoccurring thing in your artwork of quadrupedal creatures (said thing being over-sized heads)
Edit:// In terms of what you've done well, for being 'sketches' these are very tidy and putting the head size aside the anatomy is consistent and pleasant to the eye. :)
Did this to better understand who you are talking about https://sta.sh/0411bllg5a6 I'm most happy with #2, 3, 4, and 7.
#4 is laying down taking it easy (seen from below).
the head on #5 feels a bit too big, or maybe it's just a bit too tal maybe.
the lower part of the body on #6 needs to be smaller while the front legs seems a bit too small.
#2 has the best face expression XD
At #7 I tried to focus on perspective with the head being closes.
#1 the neck feels a bit too long and I would need to shrink it a bit.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/27458374/ Here's the basic form that they have.
#4 is laying down taking it easy (seen from below).
the head on #5 feels a bit too big, or maybe it's just a bit too tal maybe.
the lower part of the body on #6 needs to be smaller while the front legs seems a bit too small.
#2 has the best face expression XD
At #7 I tried to focus on perspective with the head being closes.
#1 the neck feels a bit too long and I would need to shrink it a bit.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/27458374/ Here's the basic form that they have.
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