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Need some crits on this. I made a few changes to Shelby's design based on the furs I've been researching and also in an attempt to make her slightly more lemur-like.
Here is the original:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2504938/
Which do you prefer, and why? How do the changes affect the design, in your opinion? My hope is that the changes will be subtle, but effective, if this is ever made into a costume.
Changes:
Silver fur now appears only on face, bottoms of hands/feet, and chest/stomach. The long fur on her ruff, tail, and eartips are now white.
Yellow fur and main Navy fur have been lightened/a bit more saturated.
White fur has been added to cheeks, in place of navy fur (which would be too short to create the puffy-cheek-fur effect, anyway).
Here is the original:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2504938/
Which do you prefer, and why? How do the changes affect the design, in your opinion? My hope is that the changes will be subtle, but effective, if this is ever made into a costume.
Changes:
Silver fur now appears only on face, bottoms of hands/feet, and chest/stomach. The long fur on her ruff, tail, and eartips are now white.
Yellow fur and main Navy fur have been lightened/a bit more saturated.
White fur has been added to cheeks, in place of navy fur (which would be too short to create the puffy-cheek-fur effect, anyway).
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1000 x 608px
File Size 180 kB
I think the more vibrant colors work well and the light silver on the chest fluff and cheeks are nice in that they add a bit of visual pop and make the design a bit more interesting. Also, it may by my monitor settings, but I can't tell the nose from the black or navy of the muzzle.
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