interesting peice

Thanks, it's a cover though lol

for?

I think you mean of lol

It's a cover of this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u_tORtmKIjE

ok then

:P

Marvelous.

Wow, thanks :D I hope it does justice to the original ^_^

^_^ This sounds great!

Thanks ^_^ I hope I did the original justice :3

very nice.

Thanks ^_^

Gee, its quite beautiful for WIP already! And you DID it justice (so far)!!
Luckily I saw it before going to my mom's vacation home. I'll stay there for 1 or 2 days du to some building works. There is neither a PC nor an internet connection.
BUT luckily she has a little keyboard there.^^ I'll put that on my portable player and try. Maybe I'll

Thanks for submitting a WIP-version!

For all interested ones who read this:
http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/920697/ ... my journal entry about the collab to which this song is refers.

Awesome :D Good luck with it ^_^

So, I'm back! It was a bit too difficult for me to play it by ear with the other instruments playing simultaneously but I tried to play it partially.
Anyways, I had a lot of time to listen to it and I can give you a little critique (bout the piano part) now.
Actually I found only 1 little point of critisism:
In the big interlude between the first chorus and the second verse you used some second intervals. That's not a bad thing at all, but around 1:51 you used them twice (nearly 3 times) in a row without alternation inbetween. That seems a bit unapproriate to me (especially when I play the piano part w/o accomp.-ment). the last one at 1:55 seems also (a bit) out of place.
I'm really very happy with the rest of the song as it is arranged by now.

I hope it's not too late to make a suggestion, that could change your arrangement a bit, but I had an interesting idea recently.
Basically, the original "In the Forest"-Version inspired me. I recognized earlier that there is a minor "glitch" in your cover version. In the original they megred 2 measures in the chorus (the first "re-main" and the 2nd "to-morrow" phrases). They simply have the same bass-keys-pattern so they fit into each other. The same applies to the next 2 measures. Only the following 2 (or 3) measure have a different pattern.

To get to the point: If we dare to change the pattern of these following mesures we could build up a canon with vocals and maybe with instruments, too, starting with the most silent followed by the others one at a measure until the first reaches the "but the bards song will remain"-phrase. I would also change the 3rd mesure a third-interval higher , to create more harmonies in the canon.
I would suggest that for the 2nd part of the 2nd chorus to build up a great finale!

What do you think about that? (Is it too imprudent to make a change like this in such a masterpiece?^^)

Alright, I'll look into changing that :P As a guitarist, different intervals don't come as much of a challenge to me, and I'm often using second intervals anyway, so it just comes naturally.

I think it would be really cool to make a canon out of it :D