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This sketch is for Etrain~~!
Heroicswordsman23
He got enough BP, so I drew one of his fursona setting:Shock Dragoon.
The dialogue is written by Zakizel~~!
zakavatarz
Paragon: We got a situation here. Power line's about to break. I could stop them from falling but I need an extra lair of hands.
Shock Dragon: I may help~
Paragon: Whoa. Who are you?
Shock Dragob: Shock Dragon at your service.
Paragon: Good to have you around.
Shock Dragon: Oh No! There are tourist down there!
Paragon: What? Crap! We need to get them out of there fast!
Shock Dragon: You go and take them to safety. I'll handle the power towers.
Paragon: You sure? There are a lot of them.
Shock Dragon: Trust me on this.
Paragon: *nods* alright. I'm come and help once I'm done. Good luck. *flies down*
Shock Dragon: *flies to damaged power towers*
The stroy is written by Blitz~~!
crispr
Outside his monastery blitz is drinking from his cup of tea seeing a lightening storm coming from above and sees a figure approaching lost and goes out with his spear
Blitz: hello.....why are you here?!!!
Shock: I am looking for the source of abnormality here.....
Blitz: you must mean me....
Shock: of course someone like you is nothing but an Villian with those black claws and narrow eyes
Blitz: I am not of light or dark merely who I wish to be!!!
Launches a lightening blast blitz is knocked back as he opens his hands activating stagnation. Shock rushes in a blinding speed and punches blitz in the face knocking him through the wall of his castle
Blitz: I request you do don't do tht or make me upset
Shock: come now dragon you must not keep going I will not hold back against those who do wrong
Blitz: what wrong have I done!!!!
Shock: trapping people's souls in your necklace
Blitz: if you continue you can join them!!!!!
Launching his spear shock flys up summoning lightening to strike the ground as blitz vanishes from sight appearing above him slamming him to the ground and holding his spear to his throat
Blitz: leave at once dragon!!!!
Shock: I don't think so
Charging a blast he launches it through blitz chest creating a hole blood pouring out as blitz coughs and looks at him
Shock: that should do it
Blitz: no.....it's not
Rising blitz eyes grow black as he appears with scales sorrounding his body his breath creating a thick mist as his spear turns into a lance and armor envelops his body
Blitz: I am the ego of wrath.....I am the God of isolation....dwell in my body....VALEFOR!!!!
Azure blue armor appears around blitz body his eyes now black turning to shock and lunges lauching him into the castle and destroying it to the brink of ruins and walks to him trapped under blocks summoning ice spears launching them at his face. At the last second blitz breaks apart the armor staring at shock
Shock: what are you?
Blitz: someone who doesn't belong here
Removing the blocks blitz uses his hand and reverses the wounds inflicted and looks as shock gets up and seeing no sight of him
Blitz: you prove strong but.....don't judge a man by his looks as he to can be a hero....your very powerful and please continue to help those who need it but now even my home I do not have....but this is good...now I can see my friend again
Shock listens to the winds roaring as he sees blitz flying forward to the horizon and flys in the opposite direction confused but relieved someone helped him in the end
The dialogue is written by Mr. Puma~~ !
eloncougart
-Etrain was at the end of a date, he was feeling great due to his date was great.-
-What a nice day, I finally met someone amazing and I could rest from my regular activities
-His phone rang and he recieved a mesage:-
-I had a great time, I hope you call me soon
-You bet!
-Now, le tus go home
-Etrain was waiting for a taxi and a sudden explosion made all the presents at the Street to look at a near building, the explosion was due to the building was on fire-
-All the units to Ranger Street, we need to save all the civilians!
-It cannot be
-Many witness were socked due to this and Etrain too, on that moment he ran through a dark alley-
-Oshe!
-He yelled and a thunder hit him and with a flash his body changes and a powerful hero appeared, a hero with the powerful power of the storm god Oshe, the name of this mighty hero is: Sock dragon!-
-AAAhhhhhh!!!!
-He appeared on scene, his powerful frame was a reason why the people were taking pictures and cheering him-
-I need to save all the civilians!
-After a 20 tense minutes the mighty hero saved the day-
-We are at the scene where a terrible accident happened and thanks to this hero all the civilians were rescued.
-It was my duty
-What is your name?
-My name is Shock Dragon and the shock is the last thing the evil will feel.
-This is our hero and the city is protected from now on.
-The hero disappeared in a flash and he reappeared near his residential zone, he began to walk and in a flash he returned to his normal clothes-
-bip!bip!bip! Cool on time for my favorite series
The stroy is written by Jax~~!
actionjax17
Ultra Fox was fighting a group of bad guys who stole tech from a lab that is known for its highly powerful electrical weapons. Despite his powers, he was easily outmatched by these villains. Each hit that they landed on him was followed by a burst of electricity that coursed through his body and weakened him significantly.
Ultra: **Was panting and was in pain but still tried to throw a punch**
Thug: **Easily dodges** Uh-uh.~ Wouldn’t want Mr. Hero to hit me with that pathetic punch of his.~ **Points want looks like a modified stun gun at the hero and fired as it hit him directly on the chest as a power electrical shock coursed through him.**
Ultra: GAAAAAAAAHHH!! **Screams In agony as he felt much weaker but he kept standing.**
Ruffian: Oh?~ Still standing are we?~ We can’t have that, now can we?~ *He said as calmly approached the hero as he was still reeling from the last attack. Then, with what looked like a metal gauntlet, he punched Ultra Fox in the stomach and sent another powerful wave of electricity through him.**
Ultra: AAAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! **Another scream echoed through the alleyway as the now winded and very fatigued hero fell to the ground and couldn’t move as electricity sparked across his body. He looked at the three criminals that now loomed over him.**
Mobster: Awww...~ Look at him...~ So weak... So helpless...~ How about we put the hero out of commission... permanently!~ *He said as he raised what looked like a baton over his head. It crackled with electricity and he was about to strike the hero.**
???: **Taps the mobster on the shoulder** Excuse me.
Mobster: Hmm? **turns his head** Who the hell are-- GAH!! **Gets electro-punched by a dragon in blue and green spandex and is instantly knocked out. That dragon was known as Shock Dragoon and he was a force to be reckoned with.**
Ruffian: You think you’re stronger cause you got one of us from behind? Think again!! **Punches the dragon in the chest but wasn’t affected by the punch or the electricity that followed it.** W-What!? The electricity has no effect on him!?
Shock: **Smirks confidently** Hey! Cool trick! Let’s see if I can match it!! **He said as he punched the ruffian in the stomach and shocked him for good measure**
Ruffian: **Lets a groan of pain and discomfort as he pass out from being winded by that punch.**
Thug: **Was already trembling in fear but then shrieked like as Shock Dragoon slowly turned to look at him** Eeeeek!!
Shock: Now for you. **Slowly walks towards the thug**
Thug: Screw this!! **He yelled as he threw The stun gun down on the ground and pulled out an actual gun.**
Shock: Oh my! An actual gun! How threatening... **He said sarcastically**
Thug: Eat lead, Dragon-Freak!! **Shuts his eyes tightly and fires all of his bullets when he opened his eyes, Shock Dragoon was gone.** Huh!? Where did he go!?
Shock: I believe the name you’re looking for is Shock Dragoon. **He said standing behind the thug**
Thug: **Spun around before being met with a fist in his face.** Oooofff!!!
Shock: Game over. **Shock Dragoon smirked before walking to the downed Ultra Fox.** Ultra Fox... You all right?
Ultra: **Was still panting as he nodded and smiled slightly.** Yes.~ I’m perfectly fine. You came in the nick of time.~ Thank you.~
Shock: Heh.~ No problem.~ **Helps Ultra Fox up And they walk away together with stolen weapons in tow.** Let’s get you back to base so you can heal up.~
The story is written by Eric~~!
wingedwolfboy
The city of Huntsville! A normal city with full of normal people's who's are lived their normal life's. At another normal day was camed to the city, the people's do it their daily routines, adoults goes to work, the kids goes to the school so they thinked it was just another average day as usual. But suddenly a mysterious dimension gate is open and a huge demonic werewolf is appered.
Gaidar: "WOAAAAAAAAARRRRRRR! FINALLY! I'M HERE TO CONQUER THIS WORLD !"
People's: "AAAAAAHHHHHHH A MONSTER!/ RUUUUUUUUN!"
Gaidar: "YEEESSSSS STUPID HUMAN'S! FEAR TO ME!" FEAR THE NAME OF YOUR NEW GOD!" - and the demon began to destroy the whole city with his demonic dark power.
The mayor watched this whole situation in his office but he knows what he need to do. Only one person can help the people's so he called him up.
Mayor: SHOCK DRAGON! HURRY THE PEOPLE'S ARE NEED YOUR HELP!"
Shock Dragon: "What's the problem mayor?"
Mayor: "A DEMONIC WEREWOLF IS APPEARED AND HE WANTS TO DESTROY THE CITY AND CONQUER THE WHOLE WORLD! PLEASE HELP US!"
Shock Dragon: "No problem mayor, i'm almost there!" Bye!Ahhhhhh man why now? I even cant eat my breakfast! Whatever a job is a job! LETS GO! - and then he flew out of the window with lightning fast so he was appeared really fast to the scene.
Shock Dragon: "HEY YOU UGLY THING! STOP THIS RIGHT NOW!"
Gaidar: "WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU TO CALL ME UGLY?"
Shock Dragon: "My name is Shock Dragon , the hero of this city and in the name of the justice i will punish you!"
Gaidar: "Hahhhhh i really want to see that! But really you are the hero of this city? You are looking really ridiculous HAHAHAHAHA!"
Shock Dragon: "You know Superman and Batman are fucking with each other now, The Avenger's are to busy with their ego's and Saitama is shopping now so i'm the only one here but i can still kick out your stinky butt!"
Gaidar: Try it you freak! - and the werewolf blasted a really huge dark energy dose to Shock who is falled down. "HAHAHAHA YOU ARE NOT A MATCH FOR ME!"
Shock Dragon: "Not bad wolfie but i have my own powers! SUPREME THUNDER!"- and Shcok fighted back with his own lighting power.
The lighting reached the demon but it seems he doesnt really feelt it. He just laughed at Shock's power and blasted an other amount of dark power to him but his time an even more stronger one. Shock was yelled of the pain and falled down again. But that was still doesnt enough of Gaidar, he blasted an even more powerful dar power wave to him.
Gaidar: "MUHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA! YOU ARE FUCKING WEEK! AND YOU CALL YOURSELF A HERO! PLEASE THE SMELL OF MY FEET IS EVEN MORE WORS THEN YOU!"
Shock Dragon: "I-I'm gonna defeat you!"
Gaidar: "Just give up! If u do then i swear a kill you hurry!"
Shock Dragon: "Fuck yourself!"
Gaidar: "If that's the case then die slowly!" - and the demon continuously sending the dark energy to him.
Shock was tired because of the pain but when he looked up he noticed that the talisman in his neck was constantly lighting and then the recognition came to him.
Shock Dragon: "Of course, he get his power with that talisman! I know what i have to do!"
Shock gathered all his power and sent a huge lightning strike to the talisman, which broke into pieces.
Gaidar: "THA-THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE! YOU DESTROYED MY TALISMAN! YOU DESTROYED MY POWER!"- and after it doesn't matter how much he want Gaidar cant blast a single dark energy blast to shock!
Shock Dragon: "Hehe it seems you are not a big guy without that right? TAKE THIS! SPARKLING WILD RUUUUUUSH!" -and Shock gived a huge lighting strike to the demon who is flwed back to the dimension gate and he and the gate is vanished.
The people's are cheered to Shock Dragon who is flewed back to the Professor to a little health time.
Professor: "Really Shock, that demon is did you very well!"
Shock Dragon: "Doesn't matter Professor! The only one thing is matter's now to i save the city and world! BUT I'M STILL HUNGRY!"
Soooooo once again the day is saved! Thanks to SHOCK DRAGON! (superhero theme song)
The stroy is written by Azinu~~!
Azinu
Azinu walk though a forest.
Azinu: Okay I'm traveling though the universe gate again, but it was pitch black. I couldn't see where I'm going nor could smell my way. This never happen before and now I'm stuck on an universe I have no idea I'm on. At the world I'm on has life this time.
dragon: Stop!
Azinu: Hm?
Dragon: I can tell your not from here. From this world. Who are you, human?
Azinu: Azinu and I'm not sure how I got here, but your right. I'm not from this world. How did you find me?
Dragon: I sense an abnormally large negativity energy. It was causing space distortion around the area.
Azinu: Large negativity energy? Space distortion? Strange I don't feel any different and I don't see space -
The space around twist and bends
Azinu: Okay... now I see... Okay what your name?
Shock: Shock.
Azinu: Okay shock I usually have control of my negativity, but the space distortion is new... hm, Could this be that weird thing that was happening in the gate?
Shock: What is this gate?
Azinu: It a universe gate. It allow me to travel though different universe, however, the path is different. It was pitch black. I could not see or smell in it.
Shock: A friend of mine was actually explaining about this theoretical path between worlds. I didn't think it true, but your energy is far too different from my world.
Azinu: Well what his explanation?
Shock: TL;DR If something travel though a new set of universe. Their property will have en side effect to their surrounding. Due to you not being from this plane your side effect are rather dangerous.
Azinu: If I'm so dangerous then why are you-
Shock: This is a electric clone. The real me is somewhere safe.
Azinu: Well that make sense.
Shock: It better if you leave before anything get worse.
Azinu: Ya that great and all, but I can't open the gate nor can I see where I'm going.
Shock: Not a problem. I'm been transmitting this to my friend. Be back in 10 second.
Azinu: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10.
Shock: Done. Now have this on you and the path should open and you should be able to see.
Azinu: How do you know this will work?
Shock: Her invention has never fail far as I'm concern.
Azinu try opening the gate. He see a path Yellow path opening.
Azinu: It work!
Shock: Now you should be able to get back to your world.
Azinu: Thanks Shock. I'll be on my way.
Shock: Azinu.
Aziinu: Hm?
Shock: Despite your Large negativity energy, I can tell your not a bad person. Not the easiest to handle, but good in hearts.
Azinu smile: Gehehehehehehe, well maybe your right or maybe your wrong.
Shock smile: C'mon, get out of here.
Azinu wave goodbye as he head back to his worlds and the gate close.
Shock: Luckily no one was harm. I should get back to sanctuary. I know by now they wonder where was I.
This sketch is for Etrain~~!
Heroicswordsman23He got enough BP, so I drew one of his fursona setting:Shock Dragoon.
The dialogue is written by Zakizel~~!
Paragon: We got a situation here. Power line's about to break. I could stop them from falling but I need an extra lair of hands.
Shock Dragon: I may help~
Paragon: Whoa. Who are you?
Shock Dragob: Shock Dragon at your service.
Paragon: Good to have you around.
Shock Dragon: Oh No! There are tourist down there!
Paragon: What? Crap! We need to get them out of there fast!
Shock Dragon: You go and take them to safety. I'll handle the power towers.
Paragon: You sure? There are a lot of them.
Shock Dragon: Trust me on this.
Paragon: *nods* alright. I'm come and help once I'm done. Good luck. *flies down*
Shock Dragon: *flies to damaged power towers*
The stroy is written by Blitz~~!
crisprOutside his monastery blitz is drinking from his cup of tea seeing a lightening storm coming from above and sees a figure approaching lost and goes out with his spear
Blitz: hello.....why are you here?!!!
Shock: I am looking for the source of abnormality here.....
Blitz: you must mean me....
Shock: of course someone like you is nothing but an Villian with those black claws and narrow eyes
Blitz: I am not of light or dark merely who I wish to be!!!
Launches a lightening blast blitz is knocked back as he opens his hands activating stagnation. Shock rushes in a blinding speed and punches blitz in the face knocking him through the wall of his castle
Blitz: I request you do don't do tht or make me upset
Shock: come now dragon you must not keep going I will not hold back against those who do wrong
Blitz: what wrong have I done!!!!
Shock: trapping people's souls in your necklace
Blitz: if you continue you can join them!!!!!
Launching his spear shock flys up summoning lightening to strike the ground as blitz vanishes from sight appearing above him slamming him to the ground and holding his spear to his throat
Blitz: leave at once dragon!!!!
Shock: I don't think so
Charging a blast he launches it through blitz chest creating a hole blood pouring out as blitz coughs and looks at him
Shock: that should do it
Blitz: no.....it's not
Rising blitz eyes grow black as he appears with scales sorrounding his body his breath creating a thick mist as his spear turns into a lance and armor envelops his body
Blitz: I am the ego of wrath.....I am the God of isolation....dwell in my body....VALEFOR!!!!
Azure blue armor appears around blitz body his eyes now black turning to shock and lunges lauching him into the castle and destroying it to the brink of ruins and walks to him trapped under blocks summoning ice spears launching them at his face. At the last second blitz breaks apart the armor staring at shock
Shock: what are you?
Blitz: someone who doesn't belong here
Removing the blocks blitz uses his hand and reverses the wounds inflicted and looks as shock gets up and seeing no sight of him
Blitz: you prove strong but.....don't judge a man by his looks as he to can be a hero....your very powerful and please continue to help those who need it but now even my home I do not have....but this is good...now I can see my friend again
Shock listens to the winds roaring as he sees blitz flying forward to the horizon and flys in the opposite direction confused but relieved someone helped him in the end
The dialogue is written by Mr. Puma~~ !
eloncougart-Etrain was at the end of a date, he was feeling great due to his date was great.-
-What a nice day, I finally met someone amazing and I could rest from my regular activities
-His phone rang and he recieved a mesage:-
-I had a great time, I hope you call me soon
-You bet!
-Now, le tus go home
-Etrain was waiting for a taxi and a sudden explosion made all the presents at the Street to look at a near building, the explosion was due to the building was on fire-
-All the units to Ranger Street, we need to save all the civilians!
-It cannot be
-Many witness were socked due to this and Etrain too, on that moment he ran through a dark alley-
-Oshe!
-He yelled and a thunder hit him and with a flash his body changes and a powerful hero appeared, a hero with the powerful power of the storm god Oshe, the name of this mighty hero is: Sock dragon!-
-AAAhhhhhh!!!!
-He appeared on scene, his powerful frame was a reason why the people were taking pictures and cheering him-
-I need to save all the civilians!
-After a 20 tense minutes the mighty hero saved the day-
-We are at the scene where a terrible accident happened and thanks to this hero all the civilians were rescued.
-It was my duty
-What is your name?
-My name is Shock Dragon and the shock is the last thing the evil will feel.
-This is our hero and the city is protected from now on.
-The hero disappeared in a flash and he reappeared near his residential zone, he began to walk and in a flash he returned to his normal clothes-
-bip!bip!bip! Cool on time for my favorite series
The stroy is written by Jax~~!
actionjax17Ultra Fox was fighting a group of bad guys who stole tech from a lab that is known for its highly powerful electrical weapons. Despite his powers, he was easily outmatched by these villains. Each hit that they landed on him was followed by a burst of electricity that coursed through his body and weakened him significantly.
Ultra: **Was panting and was in pain but still tried to throw a punch**
Thug: **Easily dodges** Uh-uh.~ Wouldn’t want Mr. Hero to hit me with that pathetic punch of his.~ **Points want looks like a modified stun gun at the hero and fired as it hit him directly on the chest as a power electrical shock coursed through him.**
Ultra: GAAAAAAAAHHH!! **Screams In agony as he felt much weaker but he kept standing.**
Ruffian: Oh?~ Still standing are we?~ We can’t have that, now can we?~ *He said as calmly approached the hero as he was still reeling from the last attack. Then, with what looked like a metal gauntlet, he punched Ultra Fox in the stomach and sent another powerful wave of electricity through him.**
Ultra: AAAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! **Another scream echoed through the alleyway as the now winded and very fatigued hero fell to the ground and couldn’t move as electricity sparked across his body. He looked at the three criminals that now loomed over him.**
Mobster: Awww...~ Look at him...~ So weak... So helpless...~ How about we put the hero out of commission... permanently!~ *He said as he raised what looked like a baton over his head. It crackled with electricity and he was about to strike the hero.**
???: **Taps the mobster on the shoulder** Excuse me.
Mobster: Hmm? **turns his head** Who the hell are-- GAH!! **Gets electro-punched by a dragon in blue and green spandex and is instantly knocked out. That dragon was known as Shock Dragoon and he was a force to be reckoned with.**
Ruffian: You think you’re stronger cause you got one of us from behind? Think again!! **Punches the dragon in the chest but wasn’t affected by the punch or the electricity that followed it.** W-What!? The electricity has no effect on him!?
Shock: **Smirks confidently** Hey! Cool trick! Let’s see if I can match it!! **He said as he punched the ruffian in the stomach and shocked him for good measure**
Ruffian: **Lets a groan of pain and discomfort as he pass out from being winded by that punch.**
Thug: **Was already trembling in fear but then shrieked like as Shock Dragoon slowly turned to look at him** Eeeeek!!
Shock: Now for you. **Slowly walks towards the thug**
Thug: Screw this!! **He yelled as he threw The stun gun down on the ground and pulled out an actual gun.**
Shock: Oh my! An actual gun! How threatening... **He said sarcastically**
Thug: Eat lead, Dragon-Freak!! **Shuts his eyes tightly and fires all of his bullets when he opened his eyes, Shock Dragoon was gone.** Huh!? Where did he go!?
Shock: I believe the name you’re looking for is Shock Dragoon. **He said standing behind the thug**
Thug: **Spun around before being met with a fist in his face.** Oooofff!!!
Shock: Game over. **Shock Dragoon smirked before walking to the downed Ultra Fox.** Ultra Fox... You all right?
Ultra: **Was still panting as he nodded and smiled slightly.** Yes.~ I’m perfectly fine. You came in the nick of time.~ Thank you.~
Shock: Heh.~ No problem.~ **Helps Ultra Fox up And they walk away together with stolen weapons in tow.** Let’s get you back to base so you can heal up.~
The story is written by Eric~~!
wingedwolfboyThe city of Huntsville! A normal city with full of normal people's who's are lived their normal life's. At another normal day was camed to the city, the people's do it their daily routines, adoults goes to work, the kids goes to the school so they thinked it was just another average day as usual. But suddenly a mysterious dimension gate is open and a huge demonic werewolf is appered.
Gaidar: "WOAAAAAAAAARRRRRRR! FINALLY! I'M HERE TO CONQUER THIS WORLD !"
People's: "AAAAAAHHHHHHH A MONSTER!/ RUUUUUUUUN!"
Gaidar: "YEEESSSSS STUPID HUMAN'S! FEAR TO ME!" FEAR THE NAME OF YOUR NEW GOD!" - and the demon began to destroy the whole city with his demonic dark power.
The mayor watched this whole situation in his office but he knows what he need to do. Only one person can help the people's so he called him up.
Mayor: SHOCK DRAGON! HURRY THE PEOPLE'S ARE NEED YOUR HELP!"
Shock Dragon: "What's the problem mayor?"
Mayor: "A DEMONIC WEREWOLF IS APPEARED AND HE WANTS TO DESTROY THE CITY AND CONQUER THE WHOLE WORLD! PLEASE HELP US!"
Shock Dragon: "No problem mayor, i'm almost there!" Bye!Ahhhhhh man why now? I even cant eat my breakfast! Whatever a job is a job! LETS GO! - and then he flew out of the window with lightning fast so he was appeared really fast to the scene.
Shock Dragon: "HEY YOU UGLY THING! STOP THIS RIGHT NOW!"
Gaidar: "WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU TO CALL ME UGLY?"
Shock Dragon: "My name is Shock Dragon , the hero of this city and in the name of the justice i will punish you!"
Gaidar: "Hahhhhh i really want to see that! But really you are the hero of this city? You are looking really ridiculous HAHAHAHAHA!"
Shock Dragon: "You know Superman and Batman are fucking with each other now, The Avenger's are to busy with their ego's and Saitama is shopping now so i'm the only one here but i can still kick out your stinky butt!"
Gaidar: Try it you freak! - and the werewolf blasted a really huge dark energy dose to Shock who is falled down. "HAHAHAHA YOU ARE NOT A MATCH FOR ME!"
Shock Dragon: "Not bad wolfie but i have my own powers! SUPREME THUNDER!"- and Shcok fighted back with his own lighting power.
The lighting reached the demon but it seems he doesnt really feelt it. He just laughed at Shock's power and blasted an other amount of dark power to him but his time an even more stronger one. Shock was yelled of the pain and falled down again. But that was still doesnt enough of Gaidar, he blasted an even more powerful dar power wave to him.
Gaidar: "MUHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA! YOU ARE FUCKING WEEK! AND YOU CALL YOURSELF A HERO! PLEASE THE SMELL OF MY FEET IS EVEN MORE WORS THEN YOU!"
Shock Dragon: "I-I'm gonna defeat you!"
Gaidar: "Just give up! If u do then i swear a kill you hurry!"
Shock Dragon: "Fuck yourself!"
Gaidar: "If that's the case then die slowly!" - and the demon continuously sending the dark energy to him.
Shock was tired because of the pain but when he looked up he noticed that the talisman in his neck was constantly lighting and then the recognition came to him.
Shock Dragon: "Of course, he get his power with that talisman! I know what i have to do!"
Shock gathered all his power and sent a huge lightning strike to the talisman, which broke into pieces.
Gaidar: "THA-THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE! YOU DESTROYED MY TALISMAN! YOU DESTROYED MY POWER!"- and after it doesn't matter how much he want Gaidar cant blast a single dark energy blast to shock!
Shock Dragon: "Hehe it seems you are not a big guy without that right? TAKE THIS! SPARKLING WILD RUUUUUUSH!" -and Shock gived a huge lighting strike to the demon who is flwed back to the dimension gate and he and the gate is vanished.
The people's are cheered to Shock Dragon who is flewed back to the Professor to a little health time.
Professor: "Really Shock, that demon is did you very well!"
Shock Dragon: "Doesn't matter Professor! The only one thing is matter's now to i save the city and world! BUT I'M STILL HUNGRY!"
Soooooo once again the day is saved! Thanks to SHOCK DRAGON! (superhero theme song)
The stroy is written by Azinu~~!
AzinuAzinu walk though a forest.
Azinu: Okay I'm traveling though the universe gate again, but it was pitch black. I couldn't see where I'm going nor could smell my way. This never happen before and now I'm stuck on an universe I have no idea I'm on. At the world I'm on has life this time.
dragon: Stop!
Azinu: Hm?
Dragon: I can tell your not from here. From this world. Who are you, human?
Azinu: Azinu and I'm not sure how I got here, but your right. I'm not from this world. How did you find me?
Dragon: I sense an abnormally large negativity energy. It was causing space distortion around the area.
Azinu: Large negativity energy? Space distortion? Strange I don't feel any different and I don't see space -
The space around twist and bends
Azinu: Okay... now I see... Okay what your name?
Shock: Shock.
Azinu: Okay shock I usually have control of my negativity, but the space distortion is new... hm, Could this be that weird thing that was happening in the gate?
Shock: What is this gate?
Azinu: It a universe gate. It allow me to travel though different universe, however, the path is different. It was pitch black. I could not see or smell in it.
Shock: A friend of mine was actually explaining about this theoretical path between worlds. I didn't think it true, but your energy is far too different from my world.
Azinu: Well what his explanation?
Shock: TL;DR If something travel though a new set of universe. Their property will have en side effect to their surrounding. Due to you not being from this plane your side effect are rather dangerous.
Azinu: If I'm so dangerous then why are you-
Shock: This is a electric clone. The real me is somewhere safe.
Azinu: Well that make sense.
Shock: It better if you leave before anything get worse.
Azinu: Ya that great and all, but I can't open the gate nor can I see where I'm going.
Shock: Not a problem. I'm been transmitting this to my friend. Be back in 10 second.
Azinu: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10.
Shock: Done. Now have this on you and the path should open and you should be able to see.
Azinu: How do you know this will work?
Shock: Her invention has never fail far as I'm concern.
Azinu try opening the gate. He see a path Yellow path opening.
Azinu: It work!
Shock: Now you should be able to get back to your world.
Azinu: Thanks Shock. I'll be on my way.
Shock: Azinu.
Aziinu: Hm?
Shock: Despite your Large negativity energy, I can tell your not a bad person. Not the easiest to handle, but good in hearts.
Azinu smile: Gehehehehehehe, well maybe your right or maybe your wrong.
Shock smile: C'mon, get out of here.
Azinu wave goodbye as he head back to his worlds and the gate close.
Shock: Luckily no one was harm. I should get back to sanctuary. I know by now they wonder where was I.
Category All / All
Species Dragon (Other)
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Paragon: We got a situation here. Power line's about to break. I could stop them from falling but I need an extra lair of hands.
Shock Dragon: I may help~
Paragon: Whoa. Who are you?
Shock Dragob: Shock Dragon at your service.
Paragon: Good to have you around.
Shock Dragon: Oh No! There are tourist down there!
Paragon: What? Crap! We need to get them out of there fast!
Shock Dragon: You go and take them to safety. I'll handle the power towers.
Paragon: You sure? There are a lot of them.
Shock Dragon: Trust me on this.
Paragon: *nods* alright. I'm come and help once I'm done. Good luck. *flies down*
Shock Dragon: *flies to damaged power towers*
Shock Dragon: I may help~
Paragon: Whoa. Who are you?
Shock Dragob: Shock Dragon at your service.
Paragon: Good to have you around.
Shock Dragon: Oh No! There are tourist down there!
Paragon: What? Crap! We need to get them out of there fast!
Shock Dragon: You go and take them to safety. I'll handle the power towers.
Paragon: You sure? There are a lot of them.
Shock Dragon: Trust me on this.
Paragon: *nods* alright. I'm come and help once I'm done. Good luck. *flies down*
Shock Dragon: *flies to damaged power towers*
Outside his monastery blitz is drinking from his cup of tea seeing a lightening storm coming from above and sees a figure approaching lost and goes out with his spear
Blitz: hello.....why are you here?!!!
Shock: I am looking for the source of abnormality here.....
Blitz: you must mean me....
Shock: of course someone like you is nothing but an Villian with those black claws and narrow eyes
Blitz: I am not of light or dark merely who I wish to be!!!
Launches a lightening blast blitz is knocked back as he opens his hands activating stagnation. Shock rushes in a blinding speed and punches blitz in the face knocking him through the wall of his castle
Blitz: I request you do don't do tht or make me upset
Shock: come now dragon you must not keep going I will not hold back against those who do wrong
Blitz: what wrong have I done!!!!
Shock: trapping people's souls in your necklace
Blitz: if you continue you can join them!!!!!
Launching his spear shock flys up summoning lightening to strike the ground as blitz vanishes from sight appearing above him slamming him to the ground and holding his spear to his throat
Blitz: leave at once dragon!!!!
Shock: I don't think so
Charging a blast he launches it through blitz chest creating a hole blood pouring out as blitz coughs and looks at him
Shock: that should do it
Blitz: no.....it's not
Rising blitz eyes grow black as he appears with scales sorrounding his body his breath creating a thick mist as his spear turns into a lance and armor envelops his body
Blitz: I am the ego of wrath.....I am the God of isolation....dwell in my body....VALEFOR!!!!
Azure blue armor appears around blitz body his eyes now black turning to shock and lunges lauching him into the castle and destroying it to the brink of ruins and walks to him trapped under blocks summoning ice spears launching them at his face. At the last second blitz breaks apart the armor staring at shock
Shock: what are you?
Blitz: someone who doesn't belong here
Removing the blocks blitz uses his hand and reverses the wounds inflicted and looks as shock gets up and seeing no sight of him
Blitz: you prove strong but.....don't judge a man by his looks as he to can be a hero....your very powerful and please continue to help those who need it but now even my home I do not have....but this is good...now I can see my friend again
Shock listens to the winds roaring as he sees blitz flying forward to the horizon and flys in the opposite direction confused but relieved someone helped him in the end
Blitz: hello.....why are you here?!!!
Shock: I am looking for the source of abnormality here.....
Blitz: you must mean me....
Shock: of course someone like you is nothing but an Villian with those black claws and narrow eyes
Blitz: I am not of light or dark merely who I wish to be!!!
Launches a lightening blast blitz is knocked back as he opens his hands activating stagnation. Shock rushes in a blinding speed and punches blitz in the face knocking him through the wall of his castle
Blitz: I request you do don't do tht or make me upset
Shock: come now dragon you must not keep going I will not hold back against those who do wrong
Blitz: what wrong have I done!!!!
Shock: trapping people's souls in your necklace
Blitz: if you continue you can join them!!!!!
Launching his spear shock flys up summoning lightening to strike the ground as blitz vanishes from sight appearing above him slamming him to the ground and holding his spear to his throat
Blitz: leave at once dragon!!!!
Shock: I don't think so
Charging a blast he launches it through blitz chest creating a hole blood pouring out as blitz coughs and looks at him
Shock: that should do it
Blitz: no.....it's not
Rising blitz eyes grow black as he appears with scales sorrounding his body his breath creating a thick mist as his spear turns into a lance and armor envelops his body
Blitz: I am the ego of wrath.....I am the God of isolation....dwell in my body....VALEFOR!!!!
Azure blue armor appears around blitz body his eyes now black turning to shock and lunges lauching him into the castle and destroying it to the brink of ruins and walks to him trapped under blocks summoning ice spears launching them at his face. At the last second blitz breaks apart the armor staring at shock
Shock: what are you?
Blitz: someone who doesn't belong here
Removing the blocks blitz uses his hand and reverses the wounds inflicted and looks as shock gets up and seeing no sight of him
Blitz: you prove strong but.....don't judge a man by his looks as he to can be a hero....your very powerful and please continue to help those who need it but now even my home I do not have....but this is good...now I can see my friend again
Shock listens to the winds roaring as he sees blitz flying forward to the horizon and flys in the opposite direction confused but relieved someone helped him in the end
ah, careless clicked "hidden" button
let me repeat what Etrain said: ↓
Heroicswordsman23
Honestly, the defeat makes sense. I mean, Shock has a phobia of ice, snow, and the cold. And Blitz's powers so happened to fall in that category.
Though I wouldn't say he's the type to pick fights with people that look odd or seem to be villainous. But eh, I'm not one to restrict creative freedom of other peoples's writing! :D
let me repeat what Etrain said: ↓
Heroicswordsman23
Honestly, the defeat makes sense. I mean, Shock has a phobia of ice, snow, and the cold. And Blitz's powers so happened to fall in that category.
Though I wouldn't say he's the type to pick fights with people that look odd or seem to be villainous. But eh, I'm not one to restrict creative freedom of other peoples's writing! :D
hello senpai, I wrote a short story, I hope you and Etraim like it
-Etrain was at the end of a date, he was feeling great due to his date was great.-
-What a nice day, I finally met someone amazing and I could rest from my regular activities
-His phone rang and he recieved a mesage:-
-I had a great time, I hope you call me soon
-You bet!
-Now, le tus go home
-Etrain was waiting for a taxi and a sudden explosion made all the presents at the Street to look at a near building, the explosion was due to the building was on fire-
-All the units to Ranger Street, we need to save all the civilians!
-It cannot be
-Many witness were socked due to this and Etrain too, on that moment he ran through a dark alley-
-Oshe!
-He yelled and a thunder hit him and with a flash his body changes and a powerful hero appeared, a hero with the powerful power of the storm god Oshe, the name of this mighty hero is: Sock dragon!-
-AAAhhhhhh!!!!
-He appeared on scene, his powerful frame was a reason why the people were taking pictures and cheering him-
-I need to save all the civilians!
-After a 20 tense minutes the mighty hero saved the day-
-We are at the scene where a terrible accident happened and thanks to this hero all the civilians were rescued.
-It was my duty
-What is your name?
-My name is Shock Dragon and the shock is the last thing the evil will feel.
-This is our hero and the city is protected from now on.
-The hero disappeared in a flash and he reappeared near his residential zone, he began to walk and in a flash he returned to his normal clothes-
-bip!bip!bip! Cool on time for my favorite series
-Etrain was at the end of a date, he was feeling great due to his date was great.-
-What a nice day, I finally met someone amazing and I could rest from my regular activities
-His phone rang and he recieved a mesage:-
-I had a great time, I hope you call me soon
-You bet!
-Now, le tus go home
-Etrain was waiting for a taxi and a sudden explosion made all the presents at the Street to look at a near building, the explosion was due to the building was on fire-
-All the units to Ranger Street, we need to save all the civilians!
-It cannot be
-Many witness were socked due to this and Etrain too, on that moment he ran through a dark alley-
-Oshe!
-He yelled and a thunder hit him and with a flash his body changes and a powerful hero appeared, a hero with the powerful power of the storm god Oshe, the name of this mighty hero is: Sock dragon!-
-AAAhhhhhh!!!!
-He appeared on scene, his powerful frame was a reason why the people were taking pictures and cheering him-
-I need to save all the civilians!
-After a 20 tense minutes the mighty hero saved the day-
-We are at the scene where a terrible accident happened and thanks to this hero all the civilians were rescued.
-It was my duty
-What is your name?
-My name is Shock Dragon and the shock is the last thing the evil will feel.
-This is our hero and the city is protected from now on.
-The hero disappeared in a flash and he reappeared near his residential zone, he began to walk and in a flash he returned to his normal clothes-
-bip!bip!bip! Cool on time for my favorite series
Ultra Fox was fighting a group of bad guys who stole tech from a lab that is known for its highly powerful electrical weapons. Despite his powers, he was easily outmatched by these villains. Each hit that they landed on him was followed by a burst of electricity that coursed through his body and weakened him significantly.
Ultra: **Was panting and was in pain but still tried to throw a punch**
Thug: **Easily dodges** Uh-uh.~ Wouldn’t want Mr. Hero to hit me with that pathetic punch of his.~ **Points want looks like a modified stun gun at the hero and fired as it hit him directly on the chest as a power electrical shock coursed through him.**
Ultra: GAAAAAAAAHHH!! **Screams In agony as he felt much weaker but he kept standing.**
Ruffian: Oh?~ Still standing are we?~ We can’t have that, now can we?~ *He said as calmly approached the hero as he was still reeling from the last attack. Then, with what looked like a metal gauntlet, he punched Ultra Fox in the stomach and sent another powerful wave of electricity through him.**
Ultra: AAAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! **Another scream echoed through the alleyway as the now winded and very fatigued hero fell to the ground and couldn’t move as electricity sparked across his body. He looked at the three criminals that now loomed over him.**
Mobster: Awww...~ Look at him...~ So weak... So helpless...~ How about we put the hero out of commission... permanently!~ *He said as he raised what looked like a baton over his head. It crackled with electricity and he was about to strike the hero.**
???: **Taps the mobster on the shoulder** Excuse me.
Mobster: Hmm? **turns his head** Who the hell are-- GAH!! **Gets electro-punched by a dragon in blue and green spandex and is instantly knocked out. That dragon was known as Shock Dragoon and he was a force to be reckoned with.**
Ruffian: You think you’re stronger cause you got one of us from behind? Think again!! **Punches the dragon in the chest but wasn’t affected by the punch or the electricity that followed it.** W-What!? The electricity has no effect on him!?
Shock: **Smirks confidently** Hey! Cool trick! Let’s see if I can match it!! **He said as he punched the ruffian in the stomach and shocked him for good measure**
Ruffian: **Lets a groan of pain and discomfort as he pass out from being winded by that punch.**
Thug: **Was already trembling in fear but then shrieked like as Shock Dragoon slowly turned to look at him** Eeeeek!!
Shock: Now for you. **Slowly walks towards the thug**
Thug: Screw this!! **He yelled as he threw The stun gun down on the ground and pulled out an actual gun.**
Shock: Oh my! An actual gun! How threatening... **He said sarcastically**
Thug: Eat lead, Dragon-Freak!! **Shuts his eyes tightly and fires all of his bullets when he opened his eyes, Shock Dragoon was gone.** Huh!? Where did he go!?
Shock: I believe the name you’re looking for is Shock Dragoon. **He said standing behind the thug**
Thug: **Spun around before being met with a fist in his face.** Oooofff!!!
Shock: Game over. **Shock Dragoon smirked before walking to the downed Ultra Fox.** Ultra Fox... You all right?
Ultra: **Was still panting as he nodded and smiled slightly.** Yes.~ I’m perfectly fine. You came in the nick of time.~ Thank you.~
Shock: Heh.~ No problem.~ **Helps Ultra Fox up And they walk away together with stolen weapons in tow.** Let’s get you back to base so you can heal up.~
I hope you enjoy this story.~
Ultra: **Was panting and was in pain but still tried to throw a punch**
Thug: **Easily dodges** Uh-uh.~ Wouldn’t want Mr. Hero to hit me with that pathetic punch of his.~ **Points want looks like a modified stun gun at the hero and fired as it hit him directly on the chest as a power electrical shock coursed through him.**
Ultra: GAAAAAAAAHHH!! **Screams In agony as he felt much weaker but he kept standing.**
Ruffian: Oh?~ Still standing are we?~ We can’t have that, now can we?~ *He said as calmly approached the hero as he was still reeling from the last attack. Then, with what looked like a metal gauntlet, he punched Ultra Fox in the stomach and sent another powerful wave of electricity through him.**
Ultra: AAAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! **Another scream echoed through the alleyway as the now winded and very fatigued hero fell to the ground and couldn’t move as electricity sparked across his body. He looked at the three criminals that now loomed over him.**
Mobster: Awww...~ Look at him...~ So weak... So helpless...~ How about we put the hero out of commission... permanently!~ *He said as he raised what looked like a baton over his head. It crackled with electricity and he was about to strike the hero.**
???: **Taps the mobster on the shoulder** Excuse me.
Mobster: Hmm? **turns his head** Who the hell are-- GAH!! **Gets electro-punched by a dragon in blue and green spandex and is instantly knocked out. That dragon was known as Shock Dragoon and he was a force to be reckoned with.**
Ruffian: You think you’re stronger cause you got one of us from behind? Think again!! **Punches the dragon in the chest but wasn’t affected by the punch or the electricity that followed it.** W-What!? The electricity has no effect on him!?
Shock: **Smirks confidently** Hey! Cool trick! Let’s see if I can match it!! **He said as he punched the ruffian in the stomach and shocked him for good measure**
Ruffian: **Lets a groan of pain and discomfort as he pass out from being winded by that punch.**
Thug: **Was already trembling in fear but then shrieked like as Shock Dragoon slowly turned to look at him** Eeeeek!!
Shock: Now for you. **Slowly walks towards the thug**
Thug: Screw this!! **He yelled as he threw The stun gun down on the ground and pulled out an actual gun.**
Shock: Oh my! An actual gun! How threatening... **He said sarcastically**
Thug: Eat lead, Dragon-Freak!! **Shuts his eyes tightly and fires all of his bullets when he opened his eyes, Shock Dragoon was gone.** Huh!? Where did he go!?
Shock: I believe the name you’re looking for is Shock Dragoon. **He said standing behind the thug**
Thug: **Spun around before being met with a fist in his face.** Oooofff!!!
Shock: Game over. **Shock Dragoon smirked before walking to the downed Ultra Fox.** Ultra Fox... You all right?
Ultra: **Was still panting as he nodded and smiled slightly.** Yes.~ I’m perfectly fine. You came in the nick of time.~ Thank you.~
Shock: Heh.~ No problem.~ **Helps Ultra Fox up And they walk away together with stolen weapons in tow.** Let’s get you back to base so you can heal up.~
I hope you enjoy this story.~
wow, you let Shock to save Ultra fox,
Your writing style is quite realistic
Different from normal heroic novels, you haven't intentionally strengthened the protagonist's power. Instead, you have caused the protagonist to experience some setbacks and challenges.
I think this is good
Only setbacks and challenges can lead the protagonist to overcome barriers and gain greater willpower and strength.
Thanks for writing, you can get 1 bear point~~!
BP:5
Your writing style is quite realistic
Different from normal heroic novels, you haven't intentionally strengthened the protagonist's power. Instead, you have caused the protagonist to experience some setbacks and challenges.
I think this is good
Only setbacks and challenges can lead the protagonist to overcome barriers and gain greater willpower and strength.
Thanks for writing, you can get 1 bear point~~!
BP:5
Azinu walk though a forest.
Azinu: Okay I'm traveling though the universe gate again, but it was pitch black. I couldn't see where I'm going nor could smell my way. This never happen before and now I'm stuck on an universe I have no idea I'm on. At the world I'm on has life this time.
dragon: Stop!
Azinu: Hm?
Dragon: I can tell your not from here. From this world. Who are you, human?
Azinu: Azinu and I'm not sure how I got here, but your right. I'm not from this world. How did you find me?
Dragon: I sense an abnormally large negativity energy. It was causing space distortion around the area.
Azinu: Large negativity energy? Space distortion? Strange I don't feel any different and I don't see space -
The space around twist and bends
Azinu: Okay... now I see... Okay what your name?
Shock: Shock.
Azinu: Okay shock I usually have control of my negativity, but the space distortion is new... hm, Could this be that weird thing that was happening in the gate?
Shock: What is this gate?
Azinu: It a universe gate. It allow me to travel though different universe, however, the path is different. It was pitch black. I could not see or smell in it.
Shock: A friend of mine was actually explaining about this theoretical path between worlds. I didn't think it true, but your energy is far too different from my world.
Azinu: Well what his explanation?
Shock: TL;DR If something travel though a new set of universe. Their property will have en side effect to their surrounding. Due to you not being from this plane your side effect are rather dangerous.
Azinu: If I'm so dangerous then why are you-
Shock: This is a electric clone. The real me is somewhere safe.
Azinu: Well that make sense.
Shock: It better if you leave before anything get worse.
Azinu: Ya that great and all, but I can't open the gate nor can I see where I'm going.
Shock: Not a problem. I'm been transmitting this to my friend. Be back in 10 second.
Azinu: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10.
Shock: Done. Now have this on you and the path should open and you should be able to see.
Azinu: How do you know this will work?
Shock: Her invention has never fail far as I'm concern.
Azinu try opening the gate. He see a path Yellow path opening.
Azinu: It work!
Shock: Now you should be able to get back to your world.
Azinu: Thanks Shock. I'll be on my way.
Shock: Azinu.
Aziinu: Hm?
Shock: Despite your Large negativity energy, I can tell your not a bad person. Not the easiest to handle, but good in hearts.
Azinu smile: Gehehehehehehe, well maybe your right or maybe your wrong.
Shock smile: C'mon, get out of here.
Azinu wave goodbye as he head back to his worlds and the gate close.
Shock: Luckily no one was harm. I should get back to sanctuary. I know by now they wonder where was I.
Azinu: Okay I'm traveling though the universe gate again, but it was pitch black. I couldn't see where I'm going nor could smell my way. This never happen before and now I'm stuck on an universe I have no idea I'm on. At the world I'm on has life this time.
dragon: Stop!
Azinu: Hm?
Dragon: I can tell your not from here. From this world. Who are you, human?
Azinu: Azinu and I'm not sure how I got here, but your right. I'm not from this world. How did you find me?
Dragon: I sense an abnormally large negativity energy. It was causing space distortion around the area.
Azinu: Large negativity energy? Space distortion? Strange I don't feel any different and I don't see space -
The space around twist and bends
Azinu: Okay... now I see... Okay what your name?
Shock: Shock.
Azinu: Okay shock I usually have control of my negativity, but the space distortion is new... hm, Could this be that weird thing that was happening in the gate?
Shock: What is this gate?
Azinu: It a universe gate. It allow me to travel though different universe, however, the path is different. It was pitch black. I could not see or smell in it.
Shock: A friend of mine was actually explaining about this theoretical path between worlds. I didn't think it true, but your energy is far too different from my world.
Azinu: Well what his explanation?
Shock: TL;DR If something travel though a new set of universe. Their property will have en side effect to their surrounding. Due to you not being from this plane your side effect are rather dangerous.
Azinu: If I'm so dangerous then why are you-
Shock: This is a electric clone. The real me is somewhere safe.
Azinu: Well that make sense.
Shock: It better if you leave before anything get worse.
Azinu: Ya that great and all, but I can't open the gate nor can I see where I'm going.
Shock: Not a problem. I'm been transmitting this to my friend. Be back in 10 second.
Azinu: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10.
Shock: Done. Now have this on you and the path should open and you should be able to see.
Azinu: How do you know this will work?
Shock: Her invention has never fail far as I'm concern.
Azinu try opening the gate. He see a path Yellow path opening.
Azinu: It work!
Shock: Now you should be able to get back to your world.
Azinu: Thanks Shock. I'll be on my way.
Shock: Azinu.
Aziinu: Hm?
Shock: Despite your Large negativity energy, I can tell your not a bad person. Not the easiest to handle, but good in hearts.
Azinu smile: Gehehehehehehe, well maybe your right or maybe your wrong.
Shock smile: C'mon, get out of here.
Azinu wave goodbye as he head back to his worlds and the gate close.
Shock: Luckily no one was harm. I should get back to sanctuary. I know by now they wonder where was I.
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