I need to get to finishing rewriting the story to follow these drawings..

Here's Revonar showing Cyran a different emotion than they've exchanged...

(no, Revonar was not meant to be THAT tall by comparison. Would love it if someone could help me fix this picture, if you have any redline suggestions or whatever PM me with it ^^, this is only a rough sketch.)
Cyran is mine
Revonar is mine.

... you can fantasize about Revonar all you want.