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And our hero makes a safe landing, knowing he wounded his adversary to the point of leaving his arms hindered, and turning the scales to his favor.
As always, the evil Buns supervises the battle with the help of Ikyrio, and reveals to the lion the real mechanics of his hypnosis.
The bear doesn't rely in brute hypnosis, instead, he favors a more crafty method: He uses hypnosis to please his victim, to know him better to an intimate level, unveiling needs and secret desires, all of them tools he uses to slowly influence the hero, making his victim rework his own perspectives and believes.
The result, a hero who deeply believes in the righteousness of "his" cause, instead of a mindless drone that obeys word by word.
In the contingency the hero "snaps out" of the hypnosis, Buns' method wouldn't be affected: since the hero changed all his believes by his own hand, he would see all the changes as his own choices, and wouldn't question them.
Maybe it's not as instantaneous and brutal as regular mind control but... his style is way darker.
Also... Symbiote healing!!
Another two weeks! I apologize but... hey, 11 panels!!
And there's finally some light on 01's mental state, i knew there were several people wondering how it worked. I hope this answered some questions.
The system is simple compared to traditional sci-fi hypno but... if you think about it, quite sinister. Altho i feel like it fits the bear. He loves being crafty.
I hope you really enjoy the page and the revealed stuff! Thanks to everyone for comenting and giving life to this project with your participation!
Don't be shy! Your imnput is really appreciated! ^^
*rubberhugs for all!*
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And our hero makes a safe landing, knowing he wounded his adversary to the point of leaving his arms hindered, and turning the scales to his favor.
As always, the evil Buns supervises the battle with the help of Ikyrio, and reveals to the lion the real mechanics of his hypnosis.
The bear doesn't rely in brute hypnosis, instead, he favors a more crafty method: He uses hypnosis to please his victim, to know him better to an intimate level, unveiling needs and secret desires, all of them tools he uses to slowly influence the hero, making his victim rework his own perspectives and believes.
The result, a hero who deeply believes in the righteousness of "his" cause, instead of a mindless drone that obeys word by word.
In the contingency the hero "snaps out" of the hypnosis, Buns' method wouldn't be affected: since the hero changed all his believes by his own hand, he would see all the changes as his own choices, and wouldn't question them.
Maybe it's not as instantaneous and brutal as regular mind control but... his style is way darker.
Also... Symbiote healing!!
Another two weeks! I apologize but... hey, 11 panels!!
And there's finally some light on 01's mental state, i knew there were several people wondering how it worked. I hope this answered some questions.
The system is simple compared to traditional sci-fi hypno but... if you think about it, quite sinister. Altho i feel like it fits the bear. He loves being crafty.
I hope you really enjoy the page and the revealed stuff! Thanks to everyone for comenting and giving life to this project with your participation!
Don't be shy! Your imnput is really appreciated! ^^
*rubberhugs for all!*
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Definitely an interesting take on it
Also... HOO MAN!
This was worth the wait!, and 11 panels, that's quite a accomplishment right there!
You did an excellent job with the shine and muscles! Not to forget the poses too!
Can't wait for the next page! *rubberhugs*
Also... HOO MAN!
This was worth the wait!, and 11 panels, that's quite a accomplishment right there!
You did an excellent job with the shine and muscles! Not to forget the poses too!
Can't wait for the next page! *rubberhugs*
Ok, I know a lot of us are here for the fetish aspect, but seeing the in depth look at how 01 is being manipulated gives me hope for a some redemption in the future. I have become emotionally attached to these characters and I definitely should not have because I have a feeling this is going to get sad.
To be honest, we will have fetish later, but i put my heart on the story way more. I know it started kinkier, but once i started making the story i couldnt help to put more thought on the characters.
Im so happy to hear you feel attached to them, makes me feel like, somehow im doing something right.
Im sure they would give you a big hug!
Im so happy to hear you feel attached to them, makes me feel like, somehow im doing something right.
Im sure they would give you a big hug!
Even in the flames of hell burning in contempt a hero stands not knowing what is to come. The world calls for him to cool these fires with the ice he holds over his heart but now sees that these flames are what blind him as well. Clouded by the ash as they burn brighter with hatred one holds for the other the battle comes to its true sanctum of ideology that the good and evil both exist within their own realm of reality and the final blow will only leave one standing over the other with no hope of a good tidings between two former friends but those beyond they power controlled their fate as true heroes but now look at one another and finally see the world for as it is. Born to kill and bred to die, if one leaves this world one may just take his place over him and repeat this never ending cycle of regrets and anger.
WOW the story just keeps getting better and better. The action is fever pitched yet the story reigns over all. Developing with every panel. Even the panels with very little text help tell so much of the story and what is going on in 01's and Frostbites mind. Now we see even more than ever before what happened to 01 and why he is so fiercely loyal. He fights so hard because it truly is what he believes in that he is fighting for. He wants it so bad and is willing to give his all to win for what he fights for. We even see that with Frostbite he too fights so hard giving every ounce of what he has for what he believes in. Truly hero's in every sense of the word.
I'm so anxious to see where the battle goes from here and how Frostbite handles 01's sudden and speedy recovery. How will the large polar bear hero handle this development and adjust to counteract it. 01's intensity has grown so much again and now it seems like he has really pulled out the last of the stops. I wonder who will gain the upper hand next and how long will they hold it. Plus what else will we learn about these two as this battle continues before our very eyes.
Truly a magnificent job
Rubberbuns it truly is a joy seeing your talents grow with each new page. Thanks for sharing those wonderful talents with us all. And helping us reconnect with our loves for superheros. Thank you and keep up the great work. And no worries man the pages come when they come. So please no worries and no burning the candle at both ends okay.
I'm so anxious to see where the battle goes from here and how Frostbite handles 01's sudden and speedy recovery. How will the large polar bear hero handle this development and adjust to counteract it. 01's intensity has grown so much again and now it seems like he has really pulled out the last of the stops. I wonder who will gain the upper hand next and how long will they hold it. Plus what else will we learn about these two as this battle continues before our very eyes.
Truly a magnificent job

Great work my friend. Truly this comic is a joy to read. Take it easy we know how much is on your plate already. So take it easy and let the free time to work on this come when it comes. The last thing anyone wants is for you to get burned out. All the best to you my friend always and forever. ^_^
And thus we see the diabolical genius of brainwashing. That is the danger of hypnosis at times. Find that one chink in the armor, and you can figure out how to rewire a person's thinking to dance to your tune. Excellent panels, sir. And I love this story very much. I'm curious. Is Rubber Buns able to see, too, or is he just getting a play by play from this other person?
I know, it's a much more sophisticated form of brainwashing…
*shrugs*, but it also comes with some risks as it also means that he still has free will.
*smiles* Call me one of those pesky optomists if you like, but there's just some things that even the most dedicated of hero is not willing to do even for their cause. Like I said, "the Spark" works both ways. 01 might be your hero now, but Frostbite needs to be his.
I know it's not what most people come to you to see, but for me, it'll make it all the more sweeter the day you finally fall.
*shrugs*, but it also comes with some risks as it also means that he still has free will.
*smiles* Call me one of those pesky optomists if you like, but there's just some things that even the most dedicated of hero is not willing to do even for their cause. Like I said, "the Spark" works both ways. 01 might be your hero now, but Frostbite needs to be his.
I know it's not what most people come to you to see, but for me, it'll make it all the more sweeter the day you finally fall.
Persuasion: the better mental configuring method. It's a good thing the Buns realized that. It's interesting because it was hinted earlier in the pre-battle convo that 01 has taken all of Buns beliefs and goals as his own.
However even if the symbiote is closing the wounds, is it fixing the internal bleeding caused by Frostbite?
However even if the symbiote is closing the wounds, is it fixing the internal bleeding caused by Frostbite?
This comic... This COMIC! You don't know how much you've touched my button the right way. Its to the point I'm making this comment to begin with.
I love brainwashing as a kink, I do believe most of your audience does and that's what you've been known for quite a while. However, This being your first try at a grand comic as far as I'm aware of, I think you've been doing something beautiful. Not only when it comes to improving in your art but also showing off your storytelling skills. I'm not expert when it comes to critique, but I believe you've been creating something that's real piece of real powerful work~ Its clear to see the passion within your pages.
Now when It comes to brainwashing, I love me some simple mindless obedience like some of your drones pics beforehand. You've always been good at showing off some deeper stuff when it comes to workings of your brainwashing. This form of Advance brainwashing you've revealed on this page its just really appealing to me personally.
Why is that? because despite enjoying the concept of brainwashed obedience, I also paradoxically love the concept of Zeal. I enjoy seeing heroes that are unbreakable in a way when it comes to their beliefs, or capable of overcoming things that would break them. Frostbite shows such a zeal, and so its Wildfire himself, despite his condition. The way Buns has twisted and played with said Zeal shows both his cunning as a villain and his authority as boss, and honestly makes me enjoy him as a character as well. <3
I can't wait to see what occurs next~ Do forgive me my rather long rant, but you've managed to lit a bit of a fire inside me, as weird as that may sound. Thank you!
I love brainwashing as a kink, I do believe most of your audience does and that's what you've been known for quite a while. However, This being your first try at a grand comic as far as I'm aware of, I think you've been doing something beautiful. Not only when it comes to improving in your art but also showing off your storytelling skills. I'm not expert when it comes to critique, but I believe you've been creating something that's real piece of real powerful work~ Its clear to see the passion within your pages.
Now when It comes to brainwashing, I love me some simple mindless obedience like some of your drones pics beforehand. You've always been good at showing off some deeper stuff when it comes to workings of your brainwashing. This form of Advance brainwashing you've revealed on this page its just really appealing to me personally.
Why is that? because despite enjoying the concept of brainwashed obedience, I also paradoxically love the concept of Zeal. I enjoy seeing heroes that are unbreakable in a way when it comes to their beliefs, or capable of overcoming things that would break them. Frostbite shows such a zeal, and so its Wildfire himself, despite his condition. The way Buns has twisted and played with said Zeal shows both his cunning as a villain and his authority as boss, and honestly makes me enjoy him as a character as well. <3
I can't wait to see what occurs next~ Do forgive me my rather long rant, but you've managed to lit a bit of a fire inside me, as weird as that may sound. Thank you!
Awww thank you Raharu! I actually love those long rants, it really encourages me seeing people invested on that story!
I really appreciate your input here, it really fuels me to keep moving on!
And as for brainwashing, i do like to try new things, so i figured two things: Brainwashing was overused in most hypno comics. and brainwashing would turn a hero into an obedient robot, and i want heroes to be heroes, thinking of others before themselves, instead of just following patterns of logic.
Where a drone stays in line because a goal is impossible, a hero breaks the rules and achieves it, this is what i wanted to preserve.
i hope i keep things interesting for you, thanks a lot for comenting!
I really appreciate your input here, it really fuels me to keep moving on!
And as for brainwashing, i do like to try new things, so i figured two things: Brainwashing was overused in most hypno comics. and brainwashing would turn a hero into an obedient robot, and i want heroes to be heroes, thinking of others before themselves, instead of just following patterns of logic.
Where a drone stays in line because a goal is impossible, a hero breaks the rules and achieves it, this is what i wanted to preserve.
i hope i keep things interesting for you, thanks a lot for comenting!
Wooooow!!~~ That’s a very unique take on hypnosis and mind control.~I’ve never seen an in depth explanation quite like this one.~ Also it seems like Frostbite got a little too complacent after he thought his rival was down for the count.~ But his wounds can heal and looks like 01 is about to land the final blow.~~
I’m kinda being serious when I say I want this to happen with my character, being turned into a rubber drone and all.~
I’m kinda being serious when I say I want this to happen with my character, being turned into a rubber drone and all.~
I hope this story has a happy ending! I've grown too far close the characters, in actually gwttng emotionally attached, i dont even care fpr the sex scenes lol im rradingvfor tbis stoy, i van tell you put alot of thought into the plot,it makes happy to see someone so dedicated to writing! I can't wait to see the rest!
With what is at stake here? I do not think after all one of their lives will change forever.
If Wildfire/01 wins Frostbite will loose his free will and become another hero drone to Buns
Should Frostbite win then Wildfire will be separated from his master and possibly the symbiote will leave as well as Buns does not want to give away his tricks to the enemy.
But as our jackal is still missing somehow I do have the feeling Master Buns has a contingency plan that solves that problem as well. An exhausted Frostbite is just as easy to contain.
If Wildfire/01 wins Frostbite will loose his free will and become another hero drone to Buns
Should Frostbite win then Wildfire will be separated from his master and possibly the symbiote will leave as well as Buns does not want to give away his tricks to the enemy.
But as our jackal is still missing somehow I do have the feeling Master Buns has a contingency plan that solves that problem as well. An exhausted Frostbite is just as easy to contain.
Yaaay! Updates! <3
for some reason, Buns explaining how its not brainwashing reminded me when Rick was explaining "slavery" to Morty xD
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for some reason, Buns explaining how its not brainwashing reminded me when Rick was explaining "slavery" to Morty xD
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I do wanna say this about the comic. It keeps me guessing most of the time on where it's going. I know that Frostbite will definitely become a drone though
Also, there are two ending this comic will probably have. The first is that Frostbite will somehow get saved from staying as a drone and save the others members from Buns, but I'm unsure how. The second is that he stays as an android and serves Buns with his sexual desires, but there is still a good chunk of the comic left to go so I'm unsure if that would be the case.
Those are my guesses anyway. Looking forward to the next page.
Also, there are two ending this comic will probably have. The first is that Frostbite will somehow get saved from staying as a drone and save the others members from Buns, but I'm unsure how. The second is that he stays as an android and serves Buns with his sexual desires, but there is still a good chunk of the comic left to go so I'm unsure if that would be the case.
Those are my guesses anyway. Looking forward to the next page.
...Well, you sure make your case seem appealing don't-cha? Here I am sitting thinking: Generic hypnosis, dude's acting somewhat like himself but his morality has changed to be working under the burr, but... he's 100% himself (or at the very least 90%... 75%?) , 'the goalposts have shifted' as it were. The prospect of poor frosty getting taken and drone-ified is becoming much more... attractive.
Awesome story components aside (seriously, well done on those) the comic is visually stunning. The lighting, details showing the burned scuff marks on Frosty's fur, and that FINAL PANEL. The heated, but not flaming punch, dark smoke and 01's suit being lit up by the flame of their battle.
Awesome story components aside (seriously, well done on those) the comic is visually stunning. The lighting, details showing the burned scuff marks on Frosty's fur, and that FINAL PANEL. The heated, but not flaming punch, dark smoke and 01's suit being lit up by the flame of their battle.
That comic is truly just getting better and better, its plot thickening and background becoming more and more clear. Really well done.
And especially well done on the concept of how he manages to keep Wildfire under his thumb. It is not so much brainwashing, which implies a forcefull insertion of ideas and orders into one's mind, but he has rather been corrupted/persuaded. Maybe we can say that he is now under the spell of an advanced kind of Stockholm syndrome, where he truly sympathizes with the cause of his boss now. We have seen such things happen IRL, so it is not unreasonable to think that in a comic world, one can create such a situation artificially and use it in a controlled manner to gain these heroes as their allies and use them as anit-heroes. Though I do wonder, given that it is possible to remove the symbiont somehow, does the symbiont still sort of help to keep these corrupted goals of Wildfire intact, or would the corruption sort of fade away without the symbiont?
Anyway, really really really curious where the comic will lead to and if it will sorta end on a bitter sweet note or not. ^^
And especially well done on the concept of how he manages to keep Wildfire under his thumb. It is not so much brainwashing, which implies a forcefull insertion of ideas and orders into one's mind, but he has rather been corrupted/persuaded. Maybe we can say that he is now under the spell of an advanced kind of Stockholm syndrome, where he truly sympathizes with the cause of his boss now. We have seen such things happen IRL, so it is not unreasonable to think that in a comic world, one can create such a situation artificially and use it in a controlled manner to gain these heroes as their allies and use them as anit-heroes. Though I do wonder, given that it is possible to remove the symbiont somehow, does the symbiont still sort of help to keep these corrupted goals of Wildfire intact, or would the corruption sort of fade away without the symbiont?
Anyway, really really really curious where the comic will lead to and if it will sorta end on a bitter sweet note or not. ^^
Hello MTT3! Thanks for the coment!
i'm really glad you're liking how it goes so far! I hope to keep that up.
It's some kind of gentle corruption. Do not forget tho, that at page 5 i believe, the bear revealed having a deal with the mayor, the bear intends as making 01 the town's hero.
In other words, the hero will still serve the people - and the bear -, but Frostite is a hero they have to take down for...
reasons we will know!!
i'm really glad you're liking how it goes so far! I hope to keep that up.
It's some kind of gentle corruption. Do not forget tho, that at page 5 i believe, the bear revealed having a deal with the mayor, the bear intends as making 01 the town's hero.
In other words, the hero will still serve the people - and the bear -, but Frostite is a hero they have to take down for...
reasons we will know!!
Another fantastic addition to this awesome comic series! I love the way every page keeps you on the edge of your seat, waiting to see what happens next. I also agree with everyone else on the interesting take on brainwashing/mind manipulation. It makes perfect semse that Buns would not want 01 (or even Frosbite) to be a complete drone but to have free will enough to act on his own, only with a bend towards what Buns wants. I hate to admit it, but I want to see Frostbite become a rubber hero even more now and I can't explain why.
Keep up the fantastic work!
Keep up the fantastic work!
Oooooooh the deliciously sinister nature of Buns' methods are just wonderful hun x///3 love how you incorporate how actual hypnosis works I hope we can see more cute 01 hypno sessions in future pages x//3
also... FANTASTICALLY DRAWN, HUN!!!
I love how much detail you've gotten into every panel you really add layer after layer of awesome with every page! Love the effect of the symbiote healing too!
Amazing work as always hun! Can't wait for the next one!
also... FANTASTICALLY DRAWN, HUN!!!
I love how much detail you've gotten into every panel you really add layer after layer of awesome with every page! Love the effect of the symbiote healing too!
Amazing work as always hun! Can't wait for the next one!
I really don't want this to sound bad, but I was on U18chan and made a scarily similar prediction to what your concept of what happened to Wildfire would be. I made these comments nearly a month back and honestly when I read this page it felt nearly identical, so it got me wondering if you saw my theory and took inspiration or whether I just made a good call in advance?
https://u18chan.com/board/u18chan/gc/topic/1451376
My comment is No. 1452266 and 1452858 (near the end)
https://u18chan.com/board/u18chan/gc/topic/1451376
My comment is No. 1452266 and 1452858 (near the end)
Oh wow... this page...
Look i'm NOT against the comic being reuploaded, i'm happy someone wanted to share it, but i'd wish it was properly uploaded. there are random and unrelated pictures all dumped under the name of the main progect. It's quite chaotic and lacks order, i'm reading people confused about it there.
Anyways, i hate to dissappoint you, but as you can see, this comic started a year ago, and, while i've been changing the main script here and there, the main points stay the same. I even have book 2 scripted from begining to end ;)
Altho, congrats, you were really really close to what i intended!
Look i'm NOT against the comic being reuploaded, i'm happy someone wanted to share it, but i'd wish it was properly uploaded. there are random and unrelated pictures all dumped under the name of the main progect. It's quite chaotic and lacks order, i'm reading people confused about it there.
Anyways, i hate to dissappoint you, but as you can see, this comic started a year ago, and, while i've been changing the main script here and there, the main points stay the same. I even have book 2 scripted from begining to end ;)
Altho, congrats, you were really really close to what i intended!
No worries, BTW I didn't post it on U18Chan so I don't know who you have to talk to about that.
Also there is no disappointment from me, I had assumed as much but was just too curious not to ask. To be honest it is the best sign for me, not many people can go for this more detailed form of "mind-manipulation" which I think works much better. Knowing you are going for that route makes me confident you have a far higher quality story than most of these hypno/mind-control comics.
Also, I had a second comment to make that I already know is kind-of void since you said it is all pre-scripted so I don't expect you to respond directly to it. I am hoping Frostbite won't go down as easy as it currently looks and as many people say, since that chemistry and backstory between him and Wildfire feels like it would make a solid pillar that could hold a full series. Frostbite doesn't seem to have a "spark" that could align with the antagonist, at least not right now. Again, can't expect you to give away anything, just wanted to say it.
Also there is no disappointment from me, I had assumed as much but was just too curious not to ask. To be honest it is the best sign for me, not many people can go for this more detailed form of "mind-manipulation" which I think works much better. Knowing you are going for that route makes me confident you have a far higher quality story than most of these hypno/mind-control comics.
Also, I had a second comment to make that I already know is kind-of void since you said it is all pre-scripted so I don't expect you to respond directly to it. I am hoping Frostbite won't go down as easy as it currently looks and as many people say, since that chemistry and backstory between him and Wildfire feels like it would make a solid pillar that could hold a full series. Frostbite doesn't seem to have a "spark" that could align with the antagonist, at least not right now. Again, can't expect you to give away anything, just wanted to say it.
I live in Paraguay, and I love your work. Oh, every time I see 01 and Frost, I think of Steven universe's Ruby and Safiro. hehe
I hope that those two have a happy ending.
I think that Frost's desire ... is not to be alone, I think he wants someone to love him again.
And if he falls in love with someone, who knows how strong he becomes in order to protect his love.
There is nothing more terrifying than someone in love.
I hope that those two have a happy ending.
I think that Frost's desire ... is not to be alone, I think he wants someone to love him again.
And if he falls in love with someone, who knows how strong he becomes in order to protect his love.
There is nothing more terrifying than someone in love.
Ah eres de España, la familia de mi padre vino de allí, de Toledo de hecho. Tengo familia allí, en Barcelona y Madrid. La suelo visitar de vez en cuando.
En Fin.
Yo pienso que es cierto, tiene miedo de una relación. Pero creo que todos necesitan a alguien a quien amar.
Ese oso, el "villano", esta subestimando las emociones de sus marionetas o lo que sean.
Digo puede jugar con la mente y lo demás, pero una fuerza incontrolable son las emociones.
Yo digo que tienes mucho para explorar en ese ámbito.
Solo creo que esos dos harían buena pareja. ¿Quien sabe que tan incontrolables serian si los dos se compenetraran?
Bueno es cuestión de ver a donde va esto, ojala algo bueno pase.
Pero algo me dice que Frost, podría entrar en modo berserker y eso seria épico.
Si me permites darte una idea, seria genial que Frost pierda la pelea y recuerde cual débil fue en el pasado y como no esta dispuesto a revivir lo que paso estalle y se convierta en una fiera dispuesta a matar a quien sea, unos cuernos de hielo tipo demonio le quedarían bien jeje. Solo digo
Hey si quieres puedes pasarte por Foros DZ, en la sección de Fanfic y Roles furry, hay miles de escritores que también leen tus trabajos y créeme yo hablo con ellos jeje.
En Fin.
Yo pienso que es cierto, tiene miedo de una relación. Pero creo que todos necesitan a alguien a quien amar.
Ese oso, el "villano", esta subestimando las emociones de sus marionetas o lo que sean.
Digo puede jugar con la mente y lo demás, pero una fuerza incontrolable son las emociones.
Yo digo que tienes mucho para explorar en ese ámbito.
Solo creo que esos dos harían buena pareja. ¿Quien sabe que tan incontrolables serian si los dos se compenetraran?
Bueno es cuestión de ver a donde va esto, ojala algo bueno pase.
Pero algo me dice que Frost, podría entrar en modo berserker y eso seria épico.
Si me permites darte una idea, seria genial que Frost pierda la pelea y recuerde cual débil fue en el pasado y como no esta dispuesto a revivir lo que paso estalle y se convierta en una fiera dispuesta a matar a quien sea, unos cuernos de hielo tipo demonio le quedarían bien jeje. Solo digo
Hey si quieres puedes pasarte por Foros DZ, en la sección de Fanfic y Roles furry, hay miles de escritores que también leen tus trabajos y créeme yo hablo con ellos jeje.
Ah no, es solo que te ganaste algunos fans allí, algunas hasta hacen referencia a Frost y a 01 en sus historias.
Personalmente amo tu trabajo, y no me gustaría entrometerme en tu visión creativa ni nada por el estilo.
Ah y antes de que se me olvide, algunos quieren traducir tus comics al español.
Solo para que sepas que tienes muchos fan en América, je je. Bueno ojala que sea cual sea el destino del oso, sea feliz.
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