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I've gotten around to uploading this a little later than I intended, but I've been busy the past couple days golfing, swimming, and water skiing; you know, the important stuff.
Anyway, Furen's been assigned his next target...and a Spanish partner. "Why Spanish?" you might ask, well, I just thought it would make things interesting and perhaps a little commical. I received help from a native Spanish speaker for most of her dialogue. However, it's not necessary for you to be able to understand it.
I hope you all enjoy Maid Marian's predicament.
Anyway, Furen's been assigned his next target...and a Spanish partner. "Why Spanish?" you might ask, well, I just thought it would make things interesting and perhaps a little commical. I received help from a native Spanish speaker for most of her dialogue. However, it's not necessary for you to be able to understand it.
I hope you all enjoy Maid Marian's predicament.
Category Story / Paw
Species Fox (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 15.7 kB
Very good! But rather short. I think you could've made this one just a little bit longer. I would've liked if you added the foot stocks in, to keep with the medieval theme and add more on tickling her feet. It seems the entire session just took place in one small paragraph. My advice would be, before getting to the tickling, start out with a bit of teasing first. Maybe you could have Maria slightly tease Marian by stroking a fingernail down her body whilst speaking devilish words to her in her Spanish accent. Also have both the captors slowly examine the body to find any good ticklish spots. And during the tickling have them playfully taunt Marian. You don't have to be malicious with it, but adding a few playful taunts here and there adds some nice chemistry between the captors and their victim (like what I did in my Rita tickle story).
Of course, that's just me. Everybody's writing style is different. ^^ You still did a good job! The ending especially was adorable!
Of course, that's just me. Everybody's writing style is different. ^^ You still did a good job! The ending especially was adorable!
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