Unfortunately, the blur lines on your right eye extend past your face. Otherwise, it's pretty creepy.

I know but hey second ever photoshop... I did my first one about a week before this one and I just found the clone stamp

Heh. This reminds me of a piece I did YEARS ago called "Senseless". You did a pretty good job, specially for your second shopped image. I do see a few errors, but nothing major to take anything away from the overall image. Yeah, you clone-stamped over the edge near the eye but thats easilly fixable (if you still have the PSD). I haven't shopped anything in a LONG while, but if you want/need some advice, feel free to hit me up. ^.^

Truth is I was in a bit of a hurry I had to finish it today and there was a bit of a line to use the computer I was on... And I'll be sure to make use of your offer...