
Hey everyone!
Sorry again for the lateness but here's a little preview of one of the new enemies' moves! It'll knock Amber down if she's not careful, and then what ever could happen~
Sorry again for the lateness but here's a little preview of one of the new enemies' moves! It'll knock Amber down if she's not careful, and then what ever could happen~
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 200 x 250px
File Size 24.4 kB
-Ending looks very odd, perhaps it's meant to be so. As a bipedal creature doing a tail sweep is rather awkward.
-Crouching down moderately or slightly more could look better, you may be trying for it to look a bit awkward on-purpose. If this is the case, ignore this.
-You might want to lessen the visual of the motion blur, mainly have less streaks while still showing the hit radius you seek to convey to the player. I'm mainly speaking of the downward streak looking like a darkly-colored waterfall.
-I love the wrinkle on the shirt, small details matter!
-I still love how comfortable her breasts look in the shirt, as her entire outfit oozes casual and comfortable.
-Tail looks fine in this animation, can't say how to improve and it's very passable.
I will continue to constructively critique as I can and as long as I am not hurting team morale. I'm impressed with the progress you guys are making and only wish I could help more: I can do some writing, I don't know if my drawing skills are up to snuff and I don't know anything about coding despite my attempts to learn, I've also done key frame animation work with 3DSMAX.
-Crouching down moderately or slightly more could look better, you may be trying for it to look a bit awkward on-purpose. If this is the case, ignore this.
-You might want to lessen the visual of the motion blur, mainly have less streaks while still showing the hit radius you seek to convey to the player. I'm mainly speaking of the downward streak looking like a darkly-colored waterfall.
-I love the wrinkle on the shirt, small details matter!
-I still love how comfortable her breasts look in the shirt, as her entire outfit oozes casual and comfortable.
-Tail looks fine in this animation, can't say how to improve and it's very passable.
I will continue to constructively critique as I can and as long as I am not hurting team morale. I'm impressed with the progress you guys are making and only wish I could help more: I can do some writing, I don't know if my drawing skills are up to snuff and I don't know anything about coding despite my attempts to learn, I've also done key frame animation work with 3DSMAX.
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