Seezzlaaah

ya

eh, in my opinion, it sounds just way too cluttered. firstly, the speedcore bass is pretty overkill for a general raggacore song. the other phrases you have scattered through the song just seem spastic and generally hard to enjoy.
for the most part, just slow down everything and make things more melodic

this reminds me of 2 very angry dudes trying to fix a flat tire. I'm guessing that's a good thing. X3

big up

also where do you find samples of jamaican people