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The next part of Titan. Gave the white wolf a name. I don't care what it means, so dont tell me. I still feel the last paragraph wasn't descriptive enough, but meh. Oh well. Anybody that wants to draw anything of Titan or the comic, ask me first. I'm going to say yes anyway, but I would rather know that you are doing it. More to come tomorrow. As yoda once said:
"Up the shut fuck!"
"Up the shut fuck!"
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^what a weird comment but, hey to each their own...free speech and what not.
This is really working well, the prose sections could possibly be a bit shorter; right now they're kind of like those bumps a you come up to the toll plaza's if you know what i mean by that.
or if the prose cant be shorter, perhaps a third stanza to close it instead of prose?
aside from that this is working out nicely as an experiment
This is really working well, the prose sections could possibly be a bit shorter; right now they're kind of like those bumps a you come up to the toll plaza's if you know what i mean by that.
or if the prose cant be shorter, perhaps a third stanza to close it instead of prose?
aside from that this is working out nicely as an experiment
i'm glad someone realizes that its an experiment, cause its a bit tougher than writing poetry. I wish I could add more stanzas in this one, but it would break the story. I needed to keep some story parts together, rather than seperate them. I tried to write a story a LONG time ago, and I failed in the epic sense, so i hope this will go alot smoother.
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