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Alright, so like, I'm still TOTALLY in the children-poetry mode after "Be Wary Berry," so, this here poem is pretty similar in terms of the lightheartedness of subject! 8>
Some of you may notice that there is NO punctuation in this poem (save the end); it's completely end-stopped; MEANING, you can run into the next line swiftly. If you want, you can ALSO read it at a speed similar to "Be Wary Berry," but that's up to you really. x3
ANYhoo, I hope you all enjoy this quick tongued piece of child literature! =D
Until next poem! \(^o^)/
Some of you may notice that there is NO punctuation in this poem (save the end); it's completely end-stopped; MEANING, you can run into the next line swiftly. If you want, you can ALSO read it at a speed similar to "Be Wary Berry," but that's up to you really. x3
ANYhoo, I hope you all enjoy this quick tongued piece of child literature! =D
Until next poem! \(^o^)/
Category Poetry / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Zebra
Size 78 x 120px
File Size 691 B
I've been reading some of your other stuff, and my goodness, you've got talent! :D You deserve as many warming comments as you can get. Sometimes, it seems like only the visual arts get any attention, and I think that has a basis in truth, but it's certainly undeserved. Cheers!
The lines that seemed strongest to me are "would teeter in 'n out their ear / it's true I did look good in stripes / and thus behind confining pipes" and "Why is this zebra on my stand?" Of course, the ending is delightful. Overall, I think it's safe to say that your poems are typically at their strongest when you employ imagery.
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