I lol'd when I read Trinity being drunk

Other than that I noticed ONE

ONE their/there mistake

AND OTHER THAN THAT

I liked this story :D

Where! I must fix it!

I absolutely loved it :D Time paradoxes for the win! It had great action, some nice description and I LOVED the characters. I could feel some romantic tension between Trinity and Lancer, but I'm glad it wasn't resolved for the sake of staying away from cliches. I noticed several grammar mistakes, mostly with the excessive use of commas, but since you write long chapters I really don't feel like pointing out all of them lol.

your space battle sound a lot like star trek :B

If I was one that cared much about development, I would say the story moves too quick, like the complete skipping of the Academy. But you know what? That's okay! Avoiding shit like that gets the story in gear quickly like this chapter did. So props for not dicking around.

But your fast pace sometimes leads to a sore lack of detail or just forgetting to tell the reader somethings. For instance, why was Trinity upset over the lack of cargo on the Galleon? Sure it makes little sense why a ship of that size lacks much cargo, but why is it something to get so upset about? As far as I can tell you didn't miss anything important as I -think- I understand what goes on, but things like that could do with a little more explaining.

But then again, you love your WTF moments and for all I know why she was upset over the Galleon is much deeper than I think it is! Hah! Seriously though, Trinity shooting herself? Did not see that coming, very nice surprise.

A nice conclusion to the trilogy. You transitioned well from the wet navy battles to the futuristic space battles and I understood the story perfectly well even without the explanations. Nice work.