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"They seemed so peaceful, swimming together, it felt so spiritual for Zoe to experience them just doing what they usually do..."
Zoe loves working in the aquatic den, especially with the otters. As she wonders why working with them gives her a sense of peace and tranquillity, Zoe gets to experience the reason why...
...in more ways than one.
Yes, Nerva is back! I'm sorry that this is so short and the long wait for it, it's been difficult trying to find my inspiration for Nerva. I've been more focused on other stories, like Mary and another that I have in the works at the moment, but if people want me to continue working on Nerva, I'll do it, it just might take a while. This one is really short, I'm afraid, I really wanted to rush at least one story out to show you guys so I'm not all design based. I do hope you enjoy.
Also, if you know anyone on the CYOC (Choose your own change) website known as Burst Jammer, please tell him not to directly copy my work and then just add one sentence to make it his, please?
Thank you.
Zoe loves working in the aquatic den, especially with the otters. As she wonders why working with them gives her a sense of peace and tranquillity, Zoe gets to experience the reason why...
...in more ways than one.
Yes, Nerva is back! I'm sorry that this is so short and the long wait for it, it's been difficult trying to find my inspiration for Nerva. I've been more focused on other stories, like Mary and another that I have in the works at the moment, but if people want me to continue working on Nerva, I'll do it, it just might take a while. This one is really short, I'm afraid, I really wanted to rush at least one story out to show you guys so I'm not all design based. I do hope you enjoy.
Also, if you know anyone on the CYOC (Choose your own change) website known as Burst Jammer, please tell him not to directly copy my work and then just add one sentence to make it his, please?
Thank you.
Category Story / All
Species Otter
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File Size 120.6 kB
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you manage to keep them short and still leave in all the entertaining information.
I think you did a nice job on the physical changes. You described what the character feels as she changes.
I like the theme of mental change so i think it's cool that you were implying some of that in the story, but I think the horse story you made before was a little more descriptive on that.
I think you did a nice job on the physical changes. You described what the character feels as she changes.
I like the theme of mental change so i think it's cool that you were implying some of that in the story, but I think the horse story you made before was a little more descriptive on that.
This was one of my favourite stories, albeit one I read over on CYOC (Don't ask). But the interesting future world you have created is very interesting and slightly horrific. Honestly, if I posted this a year ago I would say good luck to you on creating the next part, but writing short stories shouldn't take over a year. Not to pressure you or anything but just tell us if there will be anything more.
-Cheers, Bob from the Inquisition
-Cheers, Bob from the Inquisition
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