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Been playing a lot of vid games as of late, but I finally got around to finishing this one up! ;3
I'll admit though, I'm a bit concerned with the masculine pronoun usage; that is, the pronouns (he, him, his) are used between TWO characters in the poem. I tried to clarify as best I could which character is represented by which pronoun (at a given time).
Can you guys tell me if you think it's a bit confusing? =D
Well, that's about it; ENJOY! ^^
Until next poem! \(^o^)/
I'll admit though, I'm a bit concerned with the masculine pronoun usage; that is, the pronouns (he, him, his) are used between TWO characters in the poem. I tried to clarify as best I could which character is represented by which pronoun (at a given time).
Can you guys tell me if you think it's a bit confusing? =D
Well, that's about it; ENJOY! ^^
Until next poem! \(^o^)/
Category Poetry / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 90px
File Size 736 B
Yesh yesh, personification is a MUST! \(^.^)/
I'm glad you enjoyed, Crystal; I always wanted to do a fire based poem. ^^
Though, I have a quickie question for ya. As you noticed, there were quite a few masculine pronouns running around, and they were used to personify TWO characters: winter and fire. Did it seem at all confusing which pronoun referred to which character at a certain time? I'm very unsure of myself. =/
I'd appreciate any feedback on this. ^^;
I'm glad you enjoyed, Crystal; I always wanted to do a fire based poem. ^^
Though, I have a quickie question for ya. As you noticed, there were quite a few masculine pronouns running around, and they were used to personify TWO characters: winter and fire. Did it seem at all confusing which pronoun referred to which character at a certain time? I'm very unsure of myself. =/
I'd appreciate any feedback on this. ^^;
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