
Just a random sketch that I've been working on and hoping to get some constructive criticism on.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / General Furry Art
Species Dog (Other)
Size 932 x 1100px
File Size 197 kB
[10:19] darkmoomba16: well what think you?
[10:20] RyzerLemur: Honesty?
[10:20] darkmoomba16: no i want you to say its absolutely brilliant and will solve world peace with its perfection
[10:20] RyzerLemur: Okay... that
[10:20] darkmoomba16: asshole
[10:21] RyzerLemur: What?
[10:21] darkmoomba16: i can't get better without constructive criticism
[10:21] RyzerLemur: Honestly, okay...
[10:25] RyzerLemur: It goes too far back and adds to the uneven look of the head overall as well as the puffed up cheek
[10:26] RyzerLemur: left knee is too far down, the leg is at an angle but you make the knee fall straight across instead of a little higher where I think it'd fit more, and I'd say that the right leg is too far out
[10:26] RyzerLemur: also, add a lil' more curve to the arms instead of making them one straight bended line
[10:26] RyzerLemur: A lot of it can be helped with a reference pic, if you can manage one
As told in person
[10:20] RyzerLemur: Honesty?
[10:20] darkmoomba16: no i want you to say its absolutely brilliant and will solve world peace with its perfection
[10:20] RyzerLemur: Okay... that
[10:20] darkmoomba16: asshole
[10:21] RyzerLemur: What?
[10:21] darkmoomba16: i can't get better without constructive criticism
[10:21] RyzerLemur: Honestly, okay...
[10:25] RyzerLemur: It goes too far back and adds to the uneven look of the head overall as well as the puffed up cheek
[10:26] RyzerLemur: left knee is too far down, the leg is at an angle but you make the knee fall straight across instead of a little higher where I think it'd fit more, and I'd say that the right leg is too far out
[10:26] RyzerLemur: also, add a lil' more curve to the arms instead of making them one straight bended line
[10:26] RyzerLemur: A lot of it can be helped with a reference pic, if you can manage one
As told in person
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