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please comment if you see a typo thats SIGNIFICANT. if dont care if "Its" should be "It's" or something like that. i did it in word pad, for christ's sake. i hope you like this one. it was a hard one to type, so i dont mind if you think its poorly written. mature for obvious reasons.
EDIT: Malakai is a douche-fag. just saying.
EDIT: Malakai is a douche-fag. just saying.
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I might kick you for the cliff hanger but its an excellent cliff hanger just the same and yes I like it, its not unexpected either your readers all know that its going to come to a showdown between Titan and Malakia now you just have to write the next bit. its exciting actually. *hugs you*
oh and congrats on publishing book even if it is only one its a begining.
oh and congrats on publishing book even if it is only one its a begining.
yep that was the surprise he mentioned earlier. he he i like it when he says "damit". i type as i think about it, so its almost like im watching it happen. although, i will tell u that titan does not walk/limp away unscathed. *glomps again* im sooooooo glad you like it, i didn't know how you were going to react! *looks at you with adorable kitty eyes while purring softly*
You got a fan girl, I actually have kept a copy of titan offline so i can re read it. Are you aware that you're up to 5300+ words?
I never expected that Titan would walk away unscathed, but maybe thats part of what attracts me to this story is not only the unique way you present it but it has a ring of realism and a link with nature. I have faith that Yakone will look after Titan well. You know I think of all the stories I've read and most are very good in my opinion, i really look forward to Titan the most. I look forward to the little 4 line verses and each paragraph because you've built the story up well and can identify with both the human characters and the animal ones. (except Malakai but then he's meant to be disliked)
Thankyou for writing this and the fact that with your words I've giggled, laughed, cried, gasped and smiled etc.
I never expected that Titan would walk away unscathed, but maybe thats part of what attracts me to this story is not only the unique way you present it but it has a ring of realism and a link with nature. I have faith that Yakone will look after Titan well. You know I think of all the stories I've read and most are very good in my opinion, i really look forward to Titan the most. I look forward to the little 4 line verses and each paragraph because you've built the story up well and can identify with both the human characters and the animal ones. (except Malakai but then he's meant to be disliked)
Thankyou for writing this and the fact that with your words I've giggled, laughed, cried, gasped and smiled etc.
yes I think your poetry is worthy of fame. you have a wide range including humour, tragedy, life, and other emotional topics, can usually create on almost any topic thrown at you. Okay like everyone else you might blow a few but that just makes you all the more better at the rest because I've seen you, even in the short time I've been reading your poetry, improve on what you have done in the past.
only telling you what i think about what i read. I sometimes don't leave a comment because I don't have time or I'm not thinking straight but at the least i try to remember to fave stuff i like. Your about 19 years old or there abouts and it amazes me how great and deep many of your age group, including yourself think. Its a sign of how much the world has changed and that the future holds a lot more promise than I used to believe. overall regardless of the nature of your poems eg light or dark to me they hold promise and hope for the future. that might sound a little odd but thats how it feels.
well i figure if i kicked the bucket tomorrow i would do so knowing that someone in this world and many someones at that, are sharing, talented and caring enough that their work regardless of read by one or many will make a change to someones life and indeed the world itself. I kind of put you in that batch because i for one am finding life richer for knowing you and your works.
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